Destinies Entwined [SS continued]Part 4# PG 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

good one

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aroran
Nice start

😳thnks

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Woww Its Awesome:-) please PM me when u update the next part dear:-):-)

kk will do 😳thanks a lot

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: girlz-rule
@ritzi12: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

thnks dear😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 2

Bittuji goes away giving a sigh and thinking how long will his chief continue to destroy

himself ..bittuji knws in his heart his chief has lots of pain but beneath this pain there

lies a golden heart ..is there no one who can turn a blackened coal back to diamond in the

pressure of love !

RK then reads the page of the diary its the DIARY of his DAD!

THe page dated 2nd November 1993 .

Aaj mere rishu ka janamdin hian aaj woh dus saal ka ho gaya .AAj maine soch lia aur rishu

ne bhi wada kia hian ki woh mera sapna pura karega woh ek din ek famous superstar banega

aur sab log uska naam lenge Rishabh rishabh !! hehe!!

Bas ab uss pal ka intezar hain jab yeh sapna pura hoga toh main rishu ko gale laga ke

kahunga rishu tune mera wada pura kar diya beta aaj tu saach mein meri umeedon pe khada

uttra! shaabaaz mere baache and uske gaal pe firse cake laga dunga jaise aaj lagaya maine !

and kaise chid jata hain cake lagane se woh huuh hehe!!

bass uss din ka intezar hain !jab yeh sapna haqeeqat ban jayega rishu mera ashirwaad tere

saath hamesha rahega rishu ! mera hero !

Accha ab rishu ka gift dena hain soch raha hain uska gift kahan hain ! aaj uske liye ek

anokha gift hain !

RK closes the diary and cries claspng it to his heart ! "Dekhiye dad main aaj bangaya tha

aapka hero aap jaise chahte the waisa hua par hain sab log lete hain mera naam par woh naam

aapke rishu ka nahin the superstar RK ka ! laggaye gale se dad aur dijiye shaabaazi main

aaj bhi taras raha hun uske liye ! par woh kabhie pura nahin hoga suna apne nahin hoga

kyunki aapne mujhe dhokha de diya!aap mujhe chodke chale gaaye aap apne rishu ko chod diye

!!! kyun kyun dad kyun "

RK falls down on the floor crying ..

"uss din mere duswe janamdin pe mujhe aapne jo gift diya maine usse sambhalke rakha hun

dad par woh gift mujhe sirf aapki yaad dilati hain maine usse kaabhi istemaal nahin kiya

dad! "

Edited by ritzi12 - 12 years ago

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silent.desire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

😭 nice update ritzi. My eyes felt with tears. You explained RK's emotions so well. RK's pain is shown so difficult to heal. Aww update soon dear.

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AroraN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Rk is so lonely without his father 😔 He missed him very much.

Nicely written 😊

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Al981

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Omg Such a Good SS !!! Di Soo nice + fantastic + Awesome Me loved it
N Dialouges of each char was soo touchy Hmm.Whts happening u all means Prish di shahi di n u Fun post se sanyas le liya kya ?? N Wht a Brillant ideas u all r using Omg u all suprised me n U Too tho Gave a Big Suprise Just Superbb !!! Loved it muahhh

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: emptyworld
😭 nice update ritzi. My eyes felt with tears. You explained RK's emotions so well. RK's pain is shown so difficult to heal. Aww update soon dear.

thnks shahi 😭it was emotional for me too