Maan Geet Vivian FF Please Read

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My love' My Life'


First of all I don't know how to portray her , she is ' What can I say about her ..she is charming , she is clever ,she is witty ,she is the most "innocent-est" person anybody could find on her age ., . she is magical ' mystical .. One moment you will feel you know her inside out .. But another moment you will be totally wonder how could a person like her act like that ' because she mystically gives you an illusion that you know her '

"Everything that needed to be treated with lesser than less importance she handles it like a world war she has to win , but then the matters we feel like you would get will shatter your life fore ever ,she accepts it as calmly as cold breeze that is never going to change anything in her ".

It's the story of a simple girl , with a very complicated life .. A completely confused soul.

People say silence is gold 'then she is blessed with all the gold of this world ..

Silence is her weapon , the same silence, the venom that kills her .. When you start to love her you will shout at her to break the silence but then with large beautiful eyes she will simply stare at you and ask ' how can I ??? And by then with your helplessness that nothing can be done , you will be completely frustrated and may even hit the wall and hurt yourself that you can not take your anger on that sweet face , curse her and go as far as possible from her turning your back , but then you realize sadly that you cant go as far from her that when you turn back you can not see her '


It's the story of her , Geet and the most confused life she lead ..

as story progress lets meet the people she love , because technically she never hates anybody .


For Index and Chapter 1 , character sketch etc Scroll Down😳..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks but plz post that in this forum too
maan geet madhu rk r best
u will definately get lots of readers here
plz post in madhubala forum too
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysticsins

Hey guys i started a Maan Geet and Vivian FF ,


Vivians Role Not Started yet . So posted in Geet Forum Please read and Comment This is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3333359


Thanks Will Post Here too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1 : The End

Maan : .. I always seen you as a.. A as a ……. He felt like choking , but with great difficulty he finally spit it out .. Tears filled uncontrollably and blurred his vision , her face was not clear for him , but his heart could sense every emotions , every depth and dungeons of the pain in her face , helplessly he turned his back to her and said affirmatively ..

a… a sister ………. . He closed his eyes letting the tears getting vaporised in each second to appear as two sad pearls on either corners of his closed eyes .. The lines of pain made his handsome face ugly , the worst ..

Did you hear Suna Thumney .He shouted … ..then stammered ... I always … he stormed and hold her arms , shook her …

Did I ..ever give you any signs … to you .. ?? Tell me Geet ..?? Did I ..?? To think and write me ..those ..silly ..foolish …3 .. Again words choked .. But, she was completely shattered and in the most damaged state her life ever faced , not at all in a mental state to decipher and manipulate the unspoken words and pain in his words … understand the clearly unspoken words that was engraved all over the pain stuck and deadly sight of him.

She was in the abyss of the agony , all she could do was to take every literals he uttered in its worldly meaning and getting it stamped in her bleeding heart as rotten truths ..

He knew well one more minute if he stayed there he will grab her in his arms and kiss her to eternity and plead sorry for the pain he had given to her and scream whatever rubbish he had spoken was ..just lies ..an utter lie to save her only , Save her ……… yes … he knew well that he is suffering million times pain she is suffering , still his heart ached for the pain he had given to her …. I am sorry … I should do this ..as I love you …as I love you more than anything in this world or the worlds ever exist … he whispered in his mind …

Enough …….. He shouted again bringing her back to the presence …Now don't spill your crocodile tears and make a scene here .. Ok … I have a reputation .. ..Now don't pester me .. He took firm steps away from her …

Stopped after two steps ,

Geet , he acted softened .. I wish we could forget all this stupid craps .. I seriously think its just a prank .. Ok ….

Oh god he felt he is an excellent actor he could put on that face …

Didn't I just called God ..he wondered ..

He continued .. I wish by the I return from my NCC camp * we should forget all this and be best buddies for ever ..OK ..hmm .. OK

She looked at him blankly ..he avoided and walked as fast he could to get out of her sight .. As soon a she turned the block he was hit on hard chest , by the time he was crying uncontrollably and was soon enveloped by two strong arms ..

Yara ……. Karan too cant stop his tears . .. Then Robindocant hold on his anger , he gave a hard punch on Maan's face making him bleed ..

Saley … I hate you ………. He hold on his shoulder shook him and then hugged him and cried along with him , the three hugged and cried .. The warmth of their togetherness was somehow consoling but at the same time it only flamed the pain higher .. We are with him but she … Karan remembered her , Ever since she became everything to Maan she too was so much to them .. And then she herself was so magnificent that they started feel that they cant think Maan apart from her … too …

Robi ..Now you go she need someone ..Go Robi …Go .. Robi ..He pushed Robindo .. Robindo instantly cleared his face and took a deep breath … ran ..shouting her name cheerfully …

Geet …geet …Arey ..yar … What are you doing here …. Alone ..Dont you want to go home ...

Karan hugged Maan tightly one more time .. Then parted Maan from him little forcefully ..

Come lets go home ..we have to pack ….… and put his hands around Maan's shoulders supporting him and walked towards hostel

Notes : NCC camp ( a boy scout camp in college)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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... This place is reserved for Character Sketch and Pics of actors

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely FF.Waiting for vivian's entry.
Please update soon.
Add me to your buddy list and do pm me nxt time when you update. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start
want to know why maan did this
poor geet
waiting for u to continue
thanks for a lovely story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is madhubala forum, so Maan geet has nothing to do with it and the ff about must be in geet forum. We are here for Rishbala not Maneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
I will never ever do NCC in my life. They make our life hell once i went with them. So much hardwork
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

this is madhubala forum, so Maan geet has nothing to do with it and the ff about must be in geet forum. We are here for Rishbala not Maneet


Wait dear Rishab is Yet to come ...

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