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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: -CoolChick-

okk...will try that...but how to add those texts here...do they provide a code or something that we post here ?!! 😕

Yup! It says "Get WebCode" and you click on that once you're done and then you'll get the forum code! 😛

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Marie_789

@Marie_789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Woe really nice prediction. I just hope this new entry doesn't separate RIshabh and Madhu...

Judaai bardasht nahi hogi.

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-CoolChick-

@-CoolChick-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: PrittB

Yup! It says "Get WebCode" and you click on that once you're done and then you'll get the forum code! 😛

okk...thanku...lot of information...now i have to apply all of that...😆

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

This was wonderful Pritt!
Hoping this is how it actually ends up being!

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Bhargavi

@fluffyclouds

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

I am so honoured :') thank you SO MUCH prittB!!! and don't worry!! I really enjoyed this OS! it was great!! 👏:D thank you so much once again and ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS! :D really enjoyed reading! 👍🏼

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Simple-Girl

@Simple-Girl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awesome OS.👏Really want some good scenes like this when the new guy come.I don't want to see any tension between RK & Madhu even if he tries to make it..Hope CV's take idea from this..😛

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hi Pritt, read your OS, nice mistrust issue you brought in, but that give away smile of Arjun's when he was supposed to be upset that RK had lied to Madhu, was a dead give away to her that I should trust RK and not this new person, as if he was truly hurt by circumstances as his just explained to me he wouldn't be smiling with triumph having caused me this confusion.

I liked hearing of the jealous RK also the fire inside him seeing her smiling and hearing her laughter, and loved Madhu's reassurance to him, loved how she sleeps too, with her hand on his...😛😆

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bigj66

@bigj66

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

nice,

I liked how you showed that in the end Madhu trusted Rishabh over the new guy :)

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Rucha

@rock_ruvi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

awesome os...

love to see the trust between rishbala...specially madhu who trust his rk...

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Aaniya

@_Aaniya_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hey... I loved ur OS ! U write too good !! Madhu's dialogues were awesome throught out... Loved d end bit when she gives him dat evil smile...hahaa ;)

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