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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭 This OS had me stop my breath as well...I was in shock of how close the whole encounter was...superb writing. Madhu was very smart and quick to inform him of the studio and get her heart's feelings out. Two in one. RK our superstar, asli mein.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh!! so emotional OS) i liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awww this so sweet! pretty sure RK will be the one to save madhu form balraj. very nicely written! enjoyed reading it as ususal! 👏😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Couldn't comment on Kajrat OS which was sooo sweet

But this one I liked better mostly because it involved angry RK in his superman avatar😉
But I think the best part was where he holds Madhu in his arms and she breaks down- that was a beautiful part , she finding solace in his arms and he telling her everything is going to be OK- Just beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Something like this is bound to happen in the show...great work :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Simply Superb OS Pritt.

I am thinking that Balraj track will be very similar to what you have written in the serial. RK will be the one to save Madhu from Balraj's wrath.


Thanks so much! I hope it's somewhat similar! RK to the rescueee!

Originally posted by: hifzaa

wow pritt loved it
RK will surely safe madhu from balraj , i must no one has written any os on balraj u r the first one


Thank you! I hope RK's the one to save her! I'm the first?! Really? That's actually cool!

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

asDgk;larjgerakjg!! The feels!!! I always fantasized about how RK would react to this Balraj Crap! Loved zit!!


Ahaha Shwetooo! I'm so glad you liked it! I feel as though the minute you like a piece of my work, it becomes a masterpiece ahaha, only because your writing is actually amazing.

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Res... Thanks Pritt...

I'm off to read.

...edit...

Super amazing OS.. really liked the way you potrayed each and every emotion. Just waiting for Ballu to enter. Want to see RK protecting his Biwi from that animal.

Thanks for the lovely OS. I hope they show sumthin similar to this in the serial also.


This was for you! And I'm so glad you really liked it! I tried my best to portray every emotion, thanks so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehakariba

superb
egarly waiting for balraj to return


Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: --Udhay--

Interesting, and very different..


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Udhay! That's one of the shortest comments from you on one of my OSs til date! I can't tell if that's a good thing or a bad thing. 😕 But thanks!!

Originally posted by: Nafs_Sweetheart

Awesome OS Pritt.👏

Loved reading it, loved the clue where she was, could totally see it happening the way you wrote it.


Thanks so much! I had to try to fit the clue in somewhere, that was the only way I felt fit the best. 😛

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Awesome one ! Just loved evry bit of it... U penned down each n evry emotion nd scene sooo nicely ! Thanx for d pm


Aww thanks so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: meenu09

No word pritt its awesome yr rona aa gaya


Aww no rona please! Thanks so much though!

Originally posted by: Sofia13

it was amazing n very well-written👏
AwesOme Os👍🏼
lOved it..!!


Thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: 05051993

Amazing OS! Hoping it turns out to be so in reality! 👏


Thanks!! Me tooo!

Originally posted by: palluhegde

OMG an os on balraj... Nice n interesting it was 😊


Thank you!! hifzaa said I was the first to write an OS on Balraj, I didn't know! That's cool!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love.abhay

Superb os..i do think that RK would be d one to save madhu frm Balraj..


besides u r a very gud writer..


Thank you so much!! I hope RK's the one!

Originally posted by: vmpy

hats off to u for pening down such a wonderful os.madhu is qt intelligent she gave a v gross clue to rk .really loved this os.thanx a lot for pm.😊


Aww thank you!! 😳 I'm glad all of you liked the clue and didn't find it too obvious.

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

One word to describe this OS :- Wow you amaze me every time :)


Aw thanks!

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

😭 This OS had me stop my breath as well...I was in shock of how close the whole encounter was...superb writing. Madhu was very smart and quick to inform him of the studio and get her heart's feelings out. Two in one. RK our superstar, asli mein.


Aww no stopping breath please! But thanks so much!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Jhanvi11

Ohh!! so emotional OS) i liked it


Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

awww this so sweet! pretty sure RK will be the one to save madhu form balraj. very nicely written! enjoyed reading it as ususal! 👏😊


Thank you! I hope RK's the one!

Originally posted by: ranitha

Couldn't comment on Kajrat OS which was sooo sweet


But this one I liked better mostly because it involved angry RK in his superman avatar😉
But I think the best part was where he holds Madhu in his arms and she breaks down- that was a beautiful part , she finding solace in his arms and he telling her everything is going to be OK- Just beautiful


Thanks!! I'm glad you liked this. 😳

Originally posted by: aashshhs

Something like this is bound to happen in the show...great work :) :) :)


Thanks so much!

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