CUT! - Rishbala FF UPDT: Part 19 - Page 124 (END) - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Pritt. Waiting for next update. Sorry for late reply.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovly ff.I like the reel real life concept.cont. soon and me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum!!!!!!!! plz pm me the nxt part... :)
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Madhu crossed her arms as Rishabh turned to face her. As she saw his face, her annoyed expression changed to show confusion. She stood there silently as he began to close in on her. As his steps got closer, she backed away and hit the wall behind her.

"Rish?"

He didn't respond to his name and went to stand directly in front of her.

He placed both his hands on either side of her head on the wall behind her. He pinned her to the wall as her heartbeat increased in speed and her confused eyes stared directly into his. She had trouble trying to figure out what was on his mind when he suddenly spoke.

"Madhs…"

Madhu continued to stare at him without moving or responding.

Rishabh brought his face closer and closer as Madhu closed her eyes.

His face went to the side of hers and stopped next to her ear. He turned his head slightly. His lips faintly touched Madhu's hair, which was covering her ear, and he began to whisper.

"I know you wanted more," he whispered as he tightly gripped at her wasit.

Madhu let out a sudden breath as his fingers tightened on her waist.

"But…"

"But…?" Madhu sighed.

"But…" Rishabh pulled away and stared at her as she opened her eyes and then he continued, "Oops, I dropped something."

Madhu looked down to see nothing and then back up at Rishabh with confusion.

"What?" she asked confused.

"This conversation," Rishabh smiled, "let's pick it up later tonight," he laughed.

Madhu pushed on his chest with her cute angry face.

"You…I'M NOT GOING TO LEAVE YOU RISH!"

Rishabh ran out of the dressing room as Madhu followed behind.

They reached Karan and they began to run around him in circles.

"CUT!" Karan yelled.

Madhu froze on Karan's left side as Rishabh froze on his right.

"We're not shooting…" said Rishabh.

"I know, but you two lovebirds are behaving as you are, PLACES EVERYONE!"

"Break's not over!" Madhu said with disapproval.

"You guys made me dizzy! Now before I fall to the ground, let's finish this last scene and head home." Karan said with a smile as if he had just won the biggest argument in his life.

Madhu and Rishabh got back into their previous places on set.


"ACTION!"

RK stretched as he attempted to open his eyes against the sun's rays. He slowly got up off the couch and stretched again. He looked towards his bed and realized it was empty.

"BIWI!" he yelled instantly.

Madhu came running into the room with a cup of chai.

"I made chai for you."

"No, really? I thought that was cake," RK said sarcastically as he grabbed the cup out of Madhu's hands.

"CUT CUT CUT! You got it all wrong!" Karan yelled over at the leads.

Rishabh looked towards him with confusion, "Me or Madhs?"

"You stupid! Not cake…ICE CREAM, ice cream. Understand?"

"KARAN?! You yelled cut because I said cake instead of ice cream?!"

"Yes. Any problem?" Karan questioned rhetorically.

Rishabh stared at him for a moment and then heard giggling to his left. He looked towards Madhu and noticed she was trying to hold in her laughter.

"I like ice cream, so you're going to say ice cream," Karan told Rishabh, "PLACES!...ACTION!"

"No, really? I thought that was ice cream," RK said sarcastically as he grabbed the cup out of Madhu's hands.

"Do you want ice cream?" Madhu asked jokingly.

RK stared at her for a split second and then a smile lit his face.

"Biwi, lately, that smile just doesn't seem to leave your face."

Madhu blushed and looked up at RK.

"Still don't plan to tell me the reason behind it do you?"

"You'll find out when the times right," Madhu said as she turned and walked out of their room.

RK watched her leave as a confused expression crossed his face.


Note to readers: Yes, I know, this update was short! But that's only because I'm studying for my last final exam tomorrow!!! Then you all can look forward to longer updates! :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow pritt nyc update loved it. Exam on your head and u still updated, it shows your commitment to your work. All d best for ur exam, i hope u top the exam.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic..!
Loved it, wanna read more.. :)
Edited by --Udhay-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you all!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update short but i loved it nd bst of luck 4 your exam pritt.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love the update -like always- it is so beautifully written. The way you switch their surroundings and witht that the way the react/act/are. Like changing their surrouning to off the set and then on the set and then infront of the camera. It is like fun->fun->romance. And then the slight change you make, making the difference disappear, but not at once. Building it up, down I mean... Making the fun romance and romance fun till you get something between in the end. Awesome Pritt!

Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part, thanks for link

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