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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafs_Sweetheart

welcome to the forum 😊

very nice OS 😉




thank you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear. 😊
Wonerful OS.I just read the two parts in one go and really enjoyed them alot. 😉

RK: Aap bhi par,lagta hai aap sab ke p par mujhe hi katne padenge. 🤣
That was hilarious.Pls continue soon.

Add me to your buddy list and pls pm me if possible. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janvie

Welcome to the forum dear. 😊
Wonerful OS.I just read the two parts in one go and really enjoyed them alot. 😉

RK: Aap bhi par,lagta hai aap sab ke p par mujhe hi katne padenge. 🤣
That was hilarious.Pls continue soon.

Add me to your buddy list and pls pm me if possible. 😳



thanks a lot...and i did add you to my buddy list and i will pm you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayuzawa



thanks a lot...and i did add you to my buddy list and i will pm you.😊



Thanks... 😊
Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for encouraging me and appreciating my work so far all of you.😳😊😃 Okay so here in the next part.

Meiej.my pov part 3.

Rk was shocked.

Rk; madhu yeh tumhe kya…tumhe yeh chot kaise lagi?

Madhu; oh yeh. Who main gir gayi thi. Kuch badi baat nahi hai.

Rk; badi baat nahi? Biwi lagta hai bhuke rehne ki wajah se tumari yaadash thodi kamzor ho gayi hai. Biwi tum kal raat se bhuki ho upar se tum gir gayi. Aur tum ho ki ek pure bhartiya nari ki tarah terrace pe aake mr.chand ka welcome kar rahi ho. Chalo niche. Maine patil se kaha hai ki humara dinner room mein bhej de.

Madhu; tumne abhi tak khaya nahi?

Rk; kaise kha sakta hoon main jab meri biwi purey filmy style mein bhuki reh kar mera wait kar rahi hai. Ab mana ki tum rk ki biwi ho par puri limelight tumhe akeli ko main kaise lene doon?

Madhu looked at him with mock indignance. And then both burst out laughing. Rk started walking towards the door and madhu followed. Rk turned around to see why madhu was being so slow and saw her limping. She must have twisted her leg when she fell. He put his arm around her and she smiled at him and leaned into him transferring her weight onto him.

Rk was about to say something as they crossed over into the house but suddenly he felt madhu's whole weight fall on him and her body went limp.

Rk; madhu? Madhu?

Madhu was feeling giddy again.

Madhu; rk who yeh khushboo…shayad mujhe ise allergy hai.

Rk; khushboo??

And then he realised that indeed the house smelled different. When he had come he had been too much in hurry to break madhu's fast to notice even if the house had been under a nuclear attack let alone such a trivial thing. But the smell was strong as though someone had emptied a whole bottle. And since the scent was troubling madhu he did not have to 2nd guess who it could be. But he would deal with deepali later. 1st of all he was concerned with the problem that his biwi could not enter his house. He took madhu out on the terrace again and looked at her.

Rk; kya tumhe sare perfumes se allergy hai?

Madhu; huh…nahi. Bas isse scent se.

Rk; mere perfume se koi problem hai?

Madhu; nahi bilkul nahi. Mujhe toh tumhari khushboo bohot pasand hai.

Rk; ahan…

Madhu; mera matlab hai mujhey tumhari perfume ki khushboo pasand hai.

Rk; tum yahi ruko.

Madhu; rk par…

Rk; sshh…

Saying this he got up and went in.

He came back after sometime and helped madhu come in the house again. and there madhu could smell only rk everywhere.

Madhu; rk thanks

Rk; sirf thanks…

Madhu; waise rk tumne kitna perfume stamal kiya.

Rk; 3 bottles.

Madhu was dumbstruck.

Madhu; rk! 3 bottle? Itna kyun?

Rk; who kya hai na biwi main nahi chahta tha ki uss scent ki thodi bhi smell rk mansion mein rahe jo tumhe bardasht na ho.

Just then all the family members including deepali came into the room. Rk noticed her.

Rk; waise biwi manna padega ki tumne rk ki biwi ka standard rakha. Issiliye tumhe kisi arey gairey faltu cheap se perfume se allergy hai. aur allergy bhi larger than life.

The moment deepali heard this she knew it was an insult meant for her as she could see rk starring at her. Radhaji smiled. No matter what rk had come to break madhu's fast and madhu had kept the fast for rk inspite of everything.

Rk was helping madhu climb into the bed when bittuji came with all the tablets that doctor had prescribed for madhu.

Bittuji; chief! Yeh rahi bhabhiji ki davaiya.

Rk; uss table par rakh dijiye.

Bittuji; okay chief.

And then bittuji left.

Rk served a plate and gave it to madhu and served one for himself. Madhu started eating. But she suddenly started coughing. Rk got up from his sit and quickly gave her water to drink an dstarted rubing her back. Madhu calmed down and looked up into rk's eyes and both of them were lost in each others eyes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's wonderful please continue 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue...bittuji's dialogues were funny especially the last one :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome update.Just loved the way RK insulted dips with his line of 'aira gaira cheap perfume'. 😆 And he used 3 bottle of perfume just to bring madhu back in house.Thats so lovely and so sweet of him doing that for madhu. 😛
Pls continue soon. 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janvie

Awsome update.Just loved the way RK insulted dips with his line of 'aira gaira cheap perfume'. 😆 And he used 3 bottle of perfume just to bring madhu back in house.Thats so lovely and so sweet of him doing that for madhu. 😛
Pls continue soon. 😳
Thanks for the pm. 😊


thanks and welcome😆

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