Rishbala FF : Magical Rays of Love Upd Pg.6

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Udhay only

@Udhay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I'm glad u liked it! :)Thanks Neelam. It'll start within 2 days max.! :)

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sukritimishra

@sukritimishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wow interesting concept n nice start. Thnx for the pm. 😊

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Rose

@--Rose--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

omg u updated:-D Wowww What a BEAUTIFUL update:-):-):-) Awww Rishu is so cute and Madhu is pritty:-):-):-) Jus loved the way u describe Rk's family dear:-) so Rk want to be independent:-) great:-) Hayeee I can imagine every scene of Rishbala:-) Plz update the next part soon:-):-):-)

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

nicely introduced characters...😊...well written...update soon...include me in ur pm

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Dair ala dair ala dair ala means fantastic nd welldone.keep up da grt job.continue soon.

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Moumita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Wow yr is it ur 1st FF ? Its awesome really !!! Pls continue & dont be nervous. Thanxx so much fr the pm.

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Moumita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Sorry double post😳

Edited by colorsluv - 12 years ago

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swarnalatha

@Swarnalatha5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Introduction about two families and each one characterization is nice
wait for ur continuation whenever u get update pls PM me
im wait for ur update part n my hearty congrats to ur FF

Edited by swarnalatha05 - 12 years ago

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Areee frn dont worry yu can continue it
first chapter is gud and thank.god no deepali no siki and kuku
hejeeheee

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Kurup

@Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Hey Udhay...

Two things are makig me determined to continue reading this FF...

first thing the title...which I loved it...Every individual has their own definition of love and for me this title has lots of meaning and I just loved it to the nth extent...

second thing that I loved about this FF is the simplicity and the truth that many teenagers or say youth are suffering from especiallly middle class people...Every second house or say 9 out of 10 houses u can see a father like Mr. Mohan Kundra and parents like Mr. and Mrs. Malik..

Having a father like Mr. Kundra sach mein wahaan par jeena ghutan saa hotha haiii...We just try to ways to run out of that environment and this u have brought the reality into...

I am determined now that I am not going to stop reading this FF..may be I wont b able to keep myself updated with it wenever u update coz of certain family tensions as of now but I would definitely make a note to read it wenever am free..

It would b kind if u would PM me with it...Hope u would do tat...

great going budddy,,,,keeep continuing...and b confident and not nervous...Dil se likha haiii toh padne waalooon ke dil tak pahunch heee jayegaaa,,,,