Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

ironwitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank you for such a wonderful end to a wonderful story chechi! I can't pick out any part as my favourite because each and every part was awesome be it Bittuji's clever ruse, RK putting Sindoor or RK's childishness in trying to outdo SG whoever he is😆

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aali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Biwi aur RK love hate love pe fida!

just love it!

bittuji bravo!

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MsCeylon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome ending Bindu

RK's sense if wit is just mind blowing and kudos to you for presenting him like that 👏

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: leverne
Awesome end.. the sindoor and bangles were a perfect ending...

So happy with the arrangements RK made...Madhs was smart enough to ask him the question...😆😆

We may not get RK melting any soon on the show... so had to satisfy myself with my imagination😆

Ren did you like my frontwala hug😉...

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Udhay--
Wonderful work of fiction, chechi. I'm literally speechless at your beautiful portrayal of RishBala interactions, their emotions. Its awesome. The best part is you write their conversations in English yet I can feel the typical RishBala flavour in the dialogues..! Awesome..! I loved it a lot.. With each update, I'm learning a lot and I need to learn so much on the art of fiction-writing from u, so I'll always be there to read your fantastic work..!

Thank you Uday..
i guess reading too many romances paid off 😳...
i agree sometimes it is difficult to keep the essence intact , usually with comedy especiallly when there is the play of the words involved... wonder how one can ever translate the humour of some of our comedy movies... say the dialogues of 'RaMji Rao Speaking'
there is one particular scene in the 2nd part..Innocent going aut in the night sees Vani VIshwanath and runs inside screaming " purathu... purathu.."
and mukesh or Sayi (whom i don't remember) bends him down and scrathes his back assuming something bit him on the back . it was hilarious but one cannot translate that into english.
you have good imagination... loved our OS...
ente sahayam aavashyamundengil choodichal mathi😊

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