Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Please do contiue...btw that was fab

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priyachand

@priyachand

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Bindu!!!

how could you start something and leave us hanging!!!!

plsss complete it! you have brought out madhu's pain so beautifully. even i thought they shd show madhu trying to curl up in foetal position searching for that support which RK should come and give. you have caught it so well. so pls continue. when i saw OS by you, i had rush in and read late at night. pls remember us your fans for ur ffs. so pls continue. eager to read the rest.

pls get him to finish her fast. (i know you'll do, you are a romantic!)

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Udhay only

@Udhay

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Interesting!! Count me in.. I wanna read ur updates on this OS! I'm very impressed by ur narration of Madhu's various emotions!! Please update the next part soon and PM me as well.. Thanks..! :)

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Basilisk

@Basilisk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Bindu darling!! Such a beautiful OS...but it feels incomplete...I would love a part 2 on this :P

P.S. the song goes wonderfully with the OS

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wonderfully written.. Bindu, I expected RK to come runnign at the end.. He didnt.. I didnt like that...

You wrote Madhu's emotions v well..

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Moumita

@-SmexyGhost-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

luvly OS bt its not complete yet i guess & the song was perfect

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pookie2

@pookie2

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

hey i'm mostly a silent reader but this was lovely! u captured all of madhu's emotions and thought processes really well. please do continue. very enjoyable.