Forever Yours - A Rishbala FF UPDT:CH. 20 -PG. 117 - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank for d pm...its so well written n rk is slowly slowly falling in love 🥳 n it is so good
Edited by ayaanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

I have been reading your fanfics for a while now. more like catching up with it. This is oneof the most beatifully written fanfic of yours. Even if it ends bad it is kind of the one that leaves you with a feeling of content that they had it all in a short span of time what people don't do living for years together.

the emotions and the evlovlement of each character is so beautiful. why do i feel that its Madhu who isn't well and not the mother. Rk must feel proud at the end that in his own arrogant way he made his wife happy towards the end.


This comment...just made me smile so much!
Oh if I could hug you right now, I would! 😆
🤗

Thank you so much!
I'm glad you like my writing that much! So much that even the thought of a tragic end isn't making you upset because of the content feeling. 😳

You're so sweet!

There's still quite a few parts before the end!
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Posted: 12 years ago
His ego is hurt that a girl did not bother about a superstar...


Originally posted by: PrittB


Chapter Two ' The Inquiry

The premiere of my film was incredible. Thousands of screaming admirers, costars, and many other celebrities had come to support me. The premieres of my films never fail to astonish me. I constantly get reminded of why I'm doing what I am. No, not for my fans, but rather for myself. Seeing people cry out my name definitely boosts my self-worth.

After the premiere of my movie, I had returned home. The woman who gave me birth and her family greeted me when I got back. I never considered them as my family. But in the real world I had a reputation that I had to maintain. This family, which was invisible to me, became visible to the people outside my house.

I ignored each and every one of them and casually walked up towards my room.

I entered my room, which always had a comforting atmosphere, and then lied down on my couch to relax. It was in the moment of relaxation that Bittuji ran in. Bittuji always had awful timing. Whenever I would come home to relax, he would always disturb me.

He ran in and said a name, an unfamiliar name, but a lovely name. Madhubala. Ah, what a wonderful name for a fine young lady undoubtedly. I looked towards him and saw the look on his face. It was hard to read. Worried? Anxious? I disregarded his expression and questioned who this Madhubala was. My manager looked around, as if to avoid my question. I then demanded that he disclose who she was. He replied with "the lady in the mall".

I should have known. A beautiful lady like her would definitely have a gorgeous name like that. I asked my manager what else he knew about her and he spoke.

"She's 25, works in a hair salon and lives with her parents. Her family is in the film industry but they aren't huge. Just background actors. That's all I could inquire chief."

Yes, chief. That was a name that my manager had given me the first day I was introduced to him. I looked at him and was in awe of the amount of information he had managed to retrieve. I questioned how he did it and he claimed to have a gift.

I demanded that this Madhubala be brought to my mansion the next morning. I needed to know what it was about me that she did not adore. My manager heeded and left my room.

I sat back down, deep in thought. How could a girl like her not be interested in a guy like me? I could not comprehend that information and was utterly baffled. That piece of information was hard to grasp indeed.

I had always imagined that every person on Earth, male or female, had adored me. However, the day I saw this woman shun me like an average everyday guy, I was taken off guard. I couldn't help but think that there was more of her out there.

I always made sure to keep my reputation well kept in life outside my personal life. Never once did I let anyone see how miserable I really was and how that effected me in my every day life. So what was it about me that this lady didn't like?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Smart RK...


Originally posted by: PrittB


Chapter Four - The Kind Act

Days passed since I had last seen her. I sat in my room just contemplating how to make her adore me as the rest of the world, or so I thought.

After a premiere of my movie, I always got a couple weeks relaxation. Rather than relaxing I spent my time thinking about that girl, that one-of-a-kind girl.

I had come to the conclusion that to make her like me, I would have to show her my nonexistent kind side. I believed that wouldn't be challenging, but I was so wrong.

I went to wander around her chawl.

The mini markets around there, the filth, the dirt...I told myself that if she was not out within ten minutes then I would walk away. It was right then that I turned and saw her walking past me. I watched her back and then got into my acting mood.

Lights, camera, action.

I purposely bumped into her shoulder which made her stumble. She nearly fell over until I grabbed her arm and pulled her into me.

"Sorry."

She looked up after hearing my voice. The expression on her face after seeing me...it was priceless. I accidently let out a slight giggle. I couldn't help myself. Suddenly her shocked face turned to show anger.

She pushed me away and straightened out her clothes and hair.

"What are you doing here?!"

"I like walking around in places like this...it reminds me of my past."

Bingo! Her face softened up. From anger to straight, that was some sort of progress I had thought.

"Oh..."

"Yeah, don't worry, I get that a lot. 'Why are you here? Why are you there?' I'm used to it."

Her face continued to fall. I had assumed pity would win her over...until suddenly she caught me.

"Wait! I've never seen you around here before. Why now?"

"Uh..."

"You're lying!"

What a clever lady she was.

But I was even cleverer.

"This isn't the only chawl around here Madhubala."

"Actually..."

Oh great.

"Fine. I lied. Can't you let a man pretend to be kind?"

"That's not kind. That's called trying to make me empathetic. Must admit, you almost had me there. Now tell me, why'd you come here Mr. Kundra?"

"To see you."

She took in what I said and just stared at me for a minute. I had figured she was thinking "Oh wow a superstar came to see me!" but once again, I was wrong.

"Please stop following me."

"I can't do that."

"Will a restraining order help you do that?"

"What...you're going to get a restraining order against ME?! That doesn't even make sense. I'm the one usually getting restraining orders against crazy fans."

"Which I'm not one of, so leave me alone."

She turned around to leave but I continued.

"I won't until you like me."

She turned to face me once again and clapped her hands in front of me.

"Fine, I like you, happy?"

"Nope."

"What else do you want?!"

"I want you to mean it."

"I never thought a star like you could be so stubborn and annoying."

"I'm one-of-a-kind."

I winked at her and she rolled her eyes.

"Besides, you're more stubborn than me. All I'm asking is you to like me and you refuse to."

"I can't just 'like' someone without reason Mr. Kundra. I have to know the person, I have to understand the person, I have to believe the person is kind. I don't know you, I don't understand you, and you're far from kind."

"Is that all it takes? Well then, I'll make you get to know me."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"You'll see."

I smirked as she stared at me confused. Then I turned without answering her question. I got into my car and stopped next to her. I rolled down my window.

"See you soon Madhubala."

I drove past her, leaving her puzzled once again.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks soo much everyone! 😳
Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the updates together...enjoyed it quite a lot...


Originally posted by: PrittB


Chapter Eleven ' The Chai

She sat down in bed and got comfortable as I got off the edge of the bed to sleep on the couch.

"You can sleep here."

Her voice was so soft that it almost startled me. I couldn't believe she had just asked me to sleep beside her. I remember turning to face her as she sat up in bed. She looked at me with a look that I still can't comprehend. She seemed'lonely. Almost as if she was desperate to just have some company beside her.

That was the day; the day the pillow wall was formed.

I slowly went and sat on the other side of the bed as she began forming a wall of pillows. I stared at her for a second and then began helping her. We both grabbed for the last pillow, my hand on top of hers.

We stared at each other for a minute and then she pulled her hand away and looked in the opposite direction of me.

"Thank you."

It was the first time I was thanking her. She looked at me almost shocked and then put on a very slight smile. Almost invisible, but it was there.

"Goodnight."

She spoke softly as she turned and slept. I put my head down and watched her sleep. She was beautiful. I felt as though my heart had stopped beating and I caught my breath just as I realized how gorgeous she really was. I gasped and sat up.

She instantly turned to stare at me with a worried look.

"Are you alr'"

She trailed off as she realized she was showing me she cared.

"I'm fine. Go to sleep."

She nodded her head again and just turned back to sleep.

I stared at her and remember thinking for the first time that I was falling in love. It had only been a couple weeks since our wedding. I'd only known her for over a month.

I told myself otherwise. I told myself it was just a minor attraction.

I was so wrong'

I slowly drifted into a deep sleep as I continued to admire her back and her hair and her perfectly sculpted body.

When I woke in the morning, I looked to my right and noticed Madhu was no longer in bed. I sat up and looked around the room, she was nowhere.

"BIWI!"

I remember my voice echoing in my room and then suddenly I heard her light footsteps. I smiled and looked towards the door. There she stood'with a tray?

I was shocked. I couldn't believe she had made chai for me. For ME!?

My mouth opened slightly. I was unable to speak as she began to walk towards me.

Just the previous night I had accepted my attraction towards her. That was a mistake. With every step she took, she took my breath away.

Her hair was open; it was slightly wet. She was air-drying it I figured.

I felt as if I was in a slow-motion film where the actress slowly walks towards the male lead with her hair flowing behind her.

I didn't even realize she was standing beside my bed until I heard the snap of her fingers.

"Earth to patidev!"

I instantly looked to my left and up at her beautiful brown eyes. Then the words rang through my ears. Patidev?

I rubbed my ear and looked back up at her.

"Patidev?"

"You call me biwi, the least I can do is call you patidev."

She smiled her perfect smile towards me. And for the first time, I saw that sparkle in her eyes. The sparkle I longed to see in her eyes. But so soon? Just a day ago she refused to talk to me but now she was serving me chai in bed? I was baffled.

She sat on the edge of the bed and faced me with the tray in her lap. I remained awestruck as she lifted the cup and handed it to me.

"This'is for last night."

"Last night?"

I didn't understand what she meant.

"For comforting me RK'I can't thank y'"

"Quiet."

I simply told her to be quiet and she listened.

"You don't need to thank me. I just said what's true biwi. Now let's see how well you make chai!"

I remember changing the topic on her because I never was the sentimental type. Sorry, thank you, please, you're welcome'that stuff just never came to me easily.

She watched as I took a sip and then placed the cup down. I stared at her and noticed a look on her face that showed that she just eagerly wanted me to praise her.

"That was'"

I let the suspense grow for her a bit and saw her grow impatient. She nodded her head waiting for me to complete my sentence. I laughed.

"Tell me!"

"Fine fine, that was actually pretty good."

"Pretty good? That's it?"

"Biwi, I hope you didn't poison me like you think I poisoned you!"

"HA! I wish I had, why didn't you mention that earlier?"

I remember looking at her and smiling at her sarcasm. She was adorable when she tried to copy me and my sarcastic ways.

"Oh and, you never poisoned me. I don't know what that was. I just threw up once. I'm okay now."

"Well that's good. Or else soon I would've been stuck in a court case about your murder."

"You're funny RK'"

She spoke sarcastically again as I continued to smile at her.

"Why are smiling at me so much?"

"Can't I smile biwi?"

She looked at me for a second and figured it was a losing battle on her end. She didn't question my smile any further. She went to get up but I grabbed her arm and pulled her close.

We locked eyes for a second and then she blinked and looked down at my hand on her arm.

I gently released her arm and looked at her.

"There's a, well there's a party'it's just a retirement party for Ram Uncle on set'I was wondering if'do you want to come?"

"Me? Party?"

"It'll be fun. And I'm sure you'll like to get away from the stress of the world right now."

"I don't kn'"

"Please?"

She looked at me. A bit shocked at that word coming out of my mouth. Then she looked down while in deep thought. After about a minute of silence she looked up at me.

"Okay, but what do I wear?"

"Hmm, have you ever worn modern clothes?"

"Once. At ma and papa's anniversary party. Ma bought me a beautiful red dress and'"

"Biwi! I'll find you something. Don't worry about what you have to wear. Just be ready by 7pm."

"How long is it?"

"Hmm I'm guessing max four hours. But we won't stay that long."

"Okay'I guess I'll be ready."

"Perfect! Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go call Bittuji to make sure all the preparations are completed."

I got out of bed and noticed her eyes following me as I walked to the door.

I slowly turned and saw her staring at me. She instantly looked away.

"Thanks again for the wonderful chai biwi."

Her eyes shot back towards me and she smiled slightly as I turned to leave our room.

Yes, OUR. I accepted that fact that the room was no longer mine. It was my wife's and mine now. It was ours.


Note to readers: Here's a precap to my tragic end, and to my happy end. Yes this FF will have two ends which you will get the choice to choose which one to read! Also, sorry for the short update, I've actually given all three of my FFs updates right now and I wrote a new OS for Christmas. PMs will be sent out soon!


Tragic End: She mouthed sorry as she looked at me and I ran towards her.

Happy End: "I love you too," I whispered to her slowly.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Great updated ur writings always amazes ...one of ur best ff. ..m ready for tragic end bcoz tragic end is bearable only in ff spl when its by u. ...in serial can't see RISHBALA seperate ...:p ...hope ur exams went rocking ...:)

Take care. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update😊...cute rishbala moments really enjoyed it...😉
thnxxx for pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update 😊

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