~| Hum Hai Deewane |~ RishBala Oneshot PT2, pg5 - Page 2

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Sorry guys, my chapter got deleted two times. I will update tomorrow if possible!
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~| Hum Hai Deewani |~
Madhu: Totally handsome.
He didn't know why but he felt really good after hearing that from his biwi. Her smile and compliment made his day. Rishabh never thought that his biwi is so sweet. He just smiled and winked at her. This made her blush a little. Rishabh noticed her blushing and he noticed one more thing too, Deepali was trying to control her anger. This made him think What if she hurts or plots against Madhu? No he wont let that happen.
Madhu blinked her eyes and smiled. She didn't expect a wink from Rishabh Kundra. This made her really happy. He did care for her happiness. Deep inside her she wanted to speak her heart out infront of him. But, the newly found bond came into her mind. What if he feels angry? Oh gosh these questions disgusted her.
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She entered her oops Rishabh's room and saw him reading his script. Oh seriously this guy's life is a movie. Anyways, she advanced towards him quitely without disturbing him. As soon as she was close enough she snapped her fingers. No response. She clapped her hands but still no response. She had enough of it now. She quickly snatched away the script.
Rishabh: Biwi, give that back to me.
Madhu: Is it an addiction, isn't it?
Rishabh: Whatever you think. But give that here.
With that Rishabh tried to take it away from her but she started running. He didn't know when his legs started working. Madhu was running through out the room like a 9 year old kid. Rishabh giggled too. He jumped on her to get it but boom, both of them fell on each other. They shared a beautiful eyelock.
Madhu: Don't you wanna come to the pooja?
Rishabh: Ofcourse. but not without you.
Madhu: Then get off me you duffer.
Rishabh: Oh I'm sorry.
Madhu wanted to be there for centuries but she had to react to things as a friend or else her secret would be out. She dragged him downstairs for the pooja. Both of them saw all the guests already present. She smiled and they entered like a made for each other couple. Descending down the stairs and all the eyes were on them.
Mrs Sinha: Oh they look made for each other.
Mrs Malhotra: Reallu, you're right Mrs Sinha. Mrs Bhatia you're really lucky I must say.
Madhu advanced towards Radha ji and her mates. She took blessings from all of them and started chatting. While, Rishabh was staring at his wife. Everybody sat down and the ladies started the bhajan. The bhajan gave a lot of peace of mind to Radha ji after such horrid situations.
Pandit ji: Now it's time for the pooja.
The pooja was started by the elders of the family, i.e Radhaji and Kukuji. Followed by Sikander and Deepali. The pandit next called the younger son and his wife. Rishabh walked towards the idol but Madhu stood where she was. He looked at her and turned in her direction. He caught her wrist and made her walk with him. Both of them did the pooja. They closed their eyes and joined their hands to pray to the goddess.
The flower from the mala fell down. This was a signal from Mata rani that this relationship is never going to break. This assured that both of them will love each other until their last breathe.
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The pooja was now over and Rishabh and Madhu were standing alone in the living area. Madhu dragged Rishabh towards the terrace and asked him to look at the stars.
Madhu: Rishabh your father is watching you always. Never forget he always wanted to make you a good person. You've fullfilled his wish
Rishabh: Not only me Madhu, but you've also helped me do that.
Madhu made him look at her and stared at him.
Madhu: I love you...
She didn't know where these three magical words came from. She had no plan to confess her love but she didn't know what made her say these words.
Rishabh: I love you too...
She was about to say something when he placed his finger on her pink lips. He planted a soft kiss on her right cheek and then the left. And finally he crushed his lips against hers.
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" Hum hai sirf tere Deewane "
The director said "Cut" And Rohan and Sonia became Madhu and Rishabh again.
Madhu: Husband, thanks for making me a superstar. I love you.
Rishabh: It's your talent which made you a superstar.
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So guys this was it. Sorry I can't send PM's. My net is down and I'm too lazy. Sorry guys, I apologize...
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Edited by princess_T - 12 years ago

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