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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, this is my first attempt on RishBala.
~ Feelings ~
Madhu walked inside the hospital room. She saw RK in deep thoughts. She didn't make any sound and adjusted herself on the couch. She was staring at him with her arms folded. His eyes had a different type of glow today.
Madhu: RK are you still in this world?
RK: Oh when did you come here?
Madhu: 5 minutes ago.
After this short conversation Bittuji entered inside and started talking to RK. And all she did was stare at him. Bittuji noticed Madhu looking at RK with affection and a small smile crept his face. Bittuji understood they need some time alone to know each other better. He walked out silently leaving Madhu and RK alone.
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Today was the last sleepless night for RK. He never understood why he experienced this. He turned to look at Madhu who was sleeping on the couch. He smiled like an idiot looking at her divine face. The night lamp's light falling on her fair complexion made her look like an angel. He got up and advanced towards Madhu it looked like she was in deep slumber. He got close to her face and pushed away the strand of hair falling on her face. Madhu maid childish noises like "mmm" and RK got scared that she would get up.
He didn't know what attracted him to kiss her rosy cheek. He planted a light kiss on her rosy cheeks. She had woken up long ago but she enjoyed this moment so very much that she didn't want this moment to get over. A small yet unusual smile crept her face. But, thankfully RK didn't notice that and sat there staring at her whole night and smiling. He could not get enough of her beauty. He glanced at the wall clock it was 7:00 am. He tought Madhu would be getting up anytime.
Madhu got up with a huge smile on her face. She advanced towards RK.
Madhu: Hmm.. so how was your sleep last night?
RK: Very good and what about you?
Madhu: It was Magical.
RK: What was so magical about last night?
Madhu: Something I don't wanna tell anyone.
Madhu's statement got RK confused and he pushed out all the thoughts and replayed all the moments in the hospital. He didn't know what pulled him towards his "40 lakh toy" but he didn't feel like calling her anything other than Biwi. These newly found feelings sent butterflies through his stomach.
RK (to himself) : What is happening to me?
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2 days laters.
RK and Madhu were reading a magazine which said all fake things about their relationship. It said
" According to our sources the couple is very romantic. They share a very warm relatioship regardless their past. "
RK: What crap is this.
Madhu: These people, they're so disgusting.
RK: Biwi it's a marketing strategy. These people print whatever they think of. Huh loosers.
Madhu: Well we can't get a total lovy dovy couple. But we can atleast be friends?
RK got surprised for a second but he could not resist shaking her hand. Both smiled and shared a beautiful eye lock. Yes, RK admitted he had feelings for his Biwi. But, he didn't know whether his Biwi had feelings for him.
********
Madhu and RK were good friends now. Both had feelings for each other yet they did not let anyone know about them.
RK (to himself) : I admit that I'm in Love with you my Biwi
Madhu (to herself):I admit that I love you Mr. Rishabh Kundra.
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I don't know how it was.Short and boring I guess. Constructive criticsm allowed and pls tell me if it was boring. It has less of conversations and more of how RK feels.
Tanvi:)
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Nice post , I loved it 😳
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Sweet and cute post😳. I loved it😊
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Sweet and no,not at all boring😊
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Nice OS..Well written..I think u should continue this OS make it a SS or FF..It will be a awesome story to read..😊
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awesome os👏..keep writing...
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OMg...I didn't know I would get so much appreciation..😃 Thanxx alot guys.. 🤗 Your comments mean alot to me😃
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Tanvi great OS! Please keep writing more! 👏


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