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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Really nice story! I'm happy both of them have admitted their feelings for each other, even if it's just "caring". And that besharm Dips! 😡 Glad that RK kicked her out. Update soon please!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome!!
Please add me to your PM List
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Absolutely loved both parts of the story.👏 Please do continue, it's amazing and please please please pm me whenever you write anything new😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
I just read your 2 parts in one go and I loved it! Very well written with a good infusion of humour
Some of my fav parts are

Originally posted by: havokhotline

"OH my God, RK! What are you doing here? Why aren't you in your room? Did you take your medicines? Why-"

"Shut up, Biwi." I grumbled. "Why do you have to talk so much? It disturbs my thought process."

🤣🤣

I gently lifted her chin up, noting the blush that filled her cheeks instantly.

"Biwi, why'd you turn off the lights?"
Realizing that she couldn't lie to me anymore, she let out a small sigh.

"I'm scared of the dark, okay? You know that."

"I do know that. And people who are scared of the dark don't willingly turn off the lights."
She bit her lip and I couldn't help but follow the action.

"I.." I went back to her face, waiting for her to say something. "I know what you mean, RK. It's just that, when I'm with you.. I'm not scared anymore."

Awww...

I realized at that moment, I felt at peace. After one of the craziest days in a lifetime, I felt calm. I felt like this was how all my days were supposed to end, with Madhu by my side. I realized that I could finally let go.

"Good night, Madhu." And as she curled into me, I surrendered myself to sleep.

Sigh,if this happened in the show.🥳🤪


Well anyway really great ff and if possible PM me when you continue-But no worries I will be stalking this anyway😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
simple admissions.. waiting to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Lovely SS. Please Write Another One.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
loved it.. can't wait for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Loved it. Your style of writing is amazing.

Well done
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Hey you guys! :)
THANK YOU for reading and commenting on this SS. It's done, though! Finished. :\
After my exams get done, I'll write something new. :)
Thanks. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Fatty, this one was a pure beauty if I were to say! (x You write so flawlessly and powerfully, that I HAD to read this. You're a Wonder-wommanne!

Keep writing, and do PM me, Please! :D

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