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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it mr and mrs attitude huh...more she resists the more RK will find her intriguing 😆
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Wow Amazing update:-) jus loving it:-):-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it

MADHU's attitude awesome

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update 👏

seems RK is fully ready to annoy Madhu looking forward to know more 😊
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Hi Keya...I never though this dayw ill come but you actually put me in dillema...should I read this story on GHSP forum on Madhubala forum...
and can you believe it I decided to continue here..mainly because this story jas been written keeping RK character in mind...
loved all the updates...this time you were fast and me slow...but story moving really at a good pace...
so now RK is gonna shot and Madhu will feel she failed her duty again and he is indeed in danger
why I have a felling she will take him apart limb by limb when she finds out the truth...LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi Keya...I never though this dayw ill come but you actually put me in dillema...should I read this story on GHSP forum on Madhubala forum...

and can you believe it I decided to continue here..mainly because this story jas been written keeping RK character in mind...
loved all the updates...this time you were fast and me slow...but story moving really at a good pace...
so now RK is gonna shot and Madhu will feel she failed her duty again and he is indeed in danger
why I have a felling she will take him apart limb by limb when she finds out the truth...LOL



yesss
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atlast... hehe
i am glad you came here and started to read this.. it means allot.. ;) thank you thank you thank you..
actually mannet or madhubala... you came to read thats what it matters...

and thank you.. i am trying to move this story in fast pace.. hope its going well... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm 4 pt 5! Bt read n commented already, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 6 ~

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'rishab... RISHAB!' RK had to admit, hearing the full name he wasn't something not used to, maybe that's why there was a slow reaction from his side to respond to madhu's shout. 'Rishab...' she ran across few meter before pushing RK to the floor. Her body smashed on top of him without any warning, while RK, he just enjoyed the close proximity. A smile formed on his lips, barely noticeable as the shock was more vibrant on his face. Madhu looked back once at the direction where the shot came from, and seeing a usual face was enough for her to shiver the soul out of her body.

'get up! Get up! Get up!' madhu screamed amongst the panic crowed with few more gun shot. RK confusingly looked at madhu, wasn't this all fake? Should he say or enjoy this little closeness? RK smiled and than jumped up, with madhu. He looked at her strange avatar as she snapped half of her dress, and than ran taking him along with her.

'what's going on?' RK acted out, like he was in confusion world.

'we have no time to talk! We have to move!' RK carelessly ran, like barely bothered. However he was concern to take madhu somewhere alone.

The panic crowed ran like a lunatic, while madhu and RK ran in to a small silent room. She took her gun out, observing a little window and than outside.

'Rishab... Look!'
'call me RK!' Rishab distracts.
Madhu rolled her eyes with agitation. 'ok... RK... You have to escape!' she stood in front of the small window that barely was letting any light from outside. She quickly points towards the window with her eyes, 'through that window!'

RK confusingly, yet amusingly looked at madhu. Should he disclosed that all this is set up, and a fake act! 'madhu, I think you taking this too seriously, let's escape through the normal way!'

Madhu confusingly looks back at RK,not understanding what he really means...

'you might fancy killing your self however I have no intreast to dye now... I have many responsibility... And I ain't dying without finishing them!' she spoke without any breath.

'ow ow- ow... This is all...' RK couldn't finish his sentence when a high speed bullet in lightning speed penetrated his right and within matter of few seconds. Madhus eyes widens with the sudden explosion of RK's blood, frozen at her spot...

RK confusingly looked at madhu for fraction of second before realizing what just happened, the throbbing pain ran across her body like a poison, tearing the rapid heart beats. 'this is real!' his lips just managed to mumble before loosing the balance to crash his body back to the floor.

Madhu without any delay rushed to support, however his body was to heavy for her small petit one. She softly allowed RK's body to lay gently to the floor, taking her gun out to make sure there are no one to enter through the door...

'are you alright? RK talk to me? How does it feel? Are you alright?' he helplessly looked at RK's lazy eyes. She tapped to rewake him, however it was pointless. She suppressed her hand over the open wound on his arm to avoid any more loss of his blood. She ripped a part of her skirt in panic, than quickly tying it to prevent the further loss.

'RK... RK... Rishab!' madhu shouts...
'don't call me Rishab! It's RK!' he lousily replied again.
'ok... RK! You have to be wake! Please.. Just be wake!'
'really? I just been bloody shot!' he angrily replies...

Madhu took him in her lap, than pressed on her Bluetooth to ask for members of people for help!

...

RK slowly opens his eyes to only find him self on the hospital bed. He slowly twists his neck to feel his body if it was intact! There was a feeling of someone purposely secreting a sharp needle on his left arm, just where he was shot. The throbbing pain penetrated his body like poisons. In pain his dry lips parted slowly with little moan...

Madhu instantly rushed in, seeing him wake, calling doctors.

'are you alright? How does it feel? Does it hurt allot?' she questioned worriedly.
RK stared at her tiring face amusingly. A smile formed on his face.
'I feel special with your worry face!' he teased in little drowsy tone. 'very special!'
Madhu gave out a agitation look with his ignorant words. 'RK, concentrate, on your health! Not at my worried face!' she softly smiled.
'zeez...' he mumbled... 'you smile?' he slowly closed his eyes than forcefully opened again to see the beauty of madhu...
'ha-ha... Very funny...' geet mocked. She sighly looked down.. 'you are a very good charmer... Aren't you?'
'only for you.. So At last you are melting!' he opens his tired eyes again.
'no... Sympathy... I think you are a good reasonable person except the unnecessary flirt!'

Rk bursts out in laughter... 'are you sure? Just because I got shot?'

The dr walked in meantime came in to check on rishab.

'he is doing very well...' dr smiled, 'nurse change his dressing...'

Dr smiled and left.

'I think I should leave to! I will see you later!' madhu walked out before RK could whisper again. She closed the rk's room door than looked at one of her team member!

'make sure there is always someone inside and outside of this door!' madhu looked anxiously back at her team members. 'it's to dangerous... I can't risk anything...'

She worriedly left as one of the CIA team member walked in.

RK slowly looks at the opening door, wondering where was madhu. 'where is madhu?' he mumbled while trying to pull him self up.

'no... You need to relax! Don't move!' the man consoled him, came by to lay him down again. 'you are hell of a lucky man!' he smiled while passing the drinks.

'of course I am lucky! I am RK after all!'

'call me James!' James laughed at RK's bluntness. 'you are lucky because madhu, I have first time seen a emotionally week. I have never saw her like that before. She almost taking the responsibility to personally!' he suggested.

RK widens his eyes with little shocking tone he managed whisper out 'really?'

'yes!... Do you know her personally?' James questioned!

'no- no...' RK blinked few times... Somewhere his senseless heart started to pump in an incredible speed. After fraction of second, coming back to his sense, 'what makes you say madhu cares for me in emotional level!' he twists his neck to face the tall slim man.

'well...' he twists his head... 'well... She was here all night! Not even moving... I mean her eyes, haven't you noticed, it was bright red. She was wake throughout the night' he spoke with little surprise tone, than he picked his hand up, pointing beside the door, 'she stood there whole night, starting beside you and usually, if something happens like this in anyone's case, she would just come in and check, nothing more & nothing less...' James finished, smiling at RK.

Rishab wasn't in his sense anymore, as he smashed him self to the bed, with a smile that he never knew existed, yet there was pain, little annoyance in his deep eyes.
'how could I be senseless in a such moment... How could I?'

James smiled and went out, guarding from outside... Even he was curious why madhu staid?

Rishab smiled way, his restless heart counted each second for return of madhu, he wanted to see her again. Life may have been simple for him on the enviers eyes, but to the honesty, there was something missing, something lacking, and no one knew what it is better than him. He slowly spines his head, god had to make him curious with a feeling that sometime exist and sometime doesn't... Do love exist? Rishab questioned him self? How does it feel? Does it comfort the heart like he was now... Does it turn the throbbing poisonous pain in to a sweet moan? Because he couldn't feel anything... The pain that existed few minutes back seems nothing compare to the absence of madhu...

Rishab smiled... And slowly faded way in to deep sleep...

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Owo
This was truly an awesome update.
Enjoyed very much really well written
And lol real gun, I wonder who done and madhu was also scared, she is not like that!
Waiting for more and it also getting romantic.
Waiting waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Doc.Me very much liking it ...😉
I was thinking about you the other day while reading couple of FFs which contained mature content ... ABOUT the big fight you had with the mods regarding the mature content scenes you wrote and you were asked to delete them
You might have noticed the FFs written these days on IF have all those adult content which you wrote long time ago and was asked to delete them ...now they might have relaxed the rule as far as these scenes are concern to be written on IF ...
anyways well written update ...👏 I don't know why do I have this feeling that Madhu and Rk have a past together ...
WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE. CONTINUE SOON

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