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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI GUYS...DIS IS MY FIRST OS...HOPE U LIKE IT..


Its 8 am in the morning and RK is sleeping cute wid his cute wife MB...rk wakes up nd sees is life cuddling wid him lyk baby...nd get back to the past thinking abt him nd mb...

Rk nd mb are both from mumbai nd studying in same clg but in diff class both are in last year...both become friends from the 1st day of the clg...many r jealous of dere friendship...bt dis doesnt effect dere friendship...both have feelings for each other...but confess ni karta...as they r thinking ki friendship par effect padhega...
suddenly one day mb childhood friend as well as cousin takes admission in the same clg in the same class of mb...he is yash[consider KARAN SINGH GROVER...HOT ND DASHING..]...ND Rk saw mb huging yash..he becomes furious...nd day by day his jealousy is increasing as mb is spending more time wid him..also rk doesnt know dat both r bro nd sis...during dese months yash is noticing rk jealousy nd also comes to know dat mb also love him..nd so he decided to make confess each other nd get a chance as clg is organising farewell party for the last year students...
finally party day...rk as usual hot nd dashing..nd he is waiting for mb...suddenly mb enters wearing long gown of his fav colour RED...nd rk just watching mb..nd mb toh waiitng him...nd just dey r talking to each other...yash decided to play his last card...he asked mb to dance wid him...nd he forcefully take her wid him...nd rk becomes furious...both r dancing wid each other...nd rk ki jealousy ki limit cross ho gyi...nd forcefully takes mb from yash arms...nd says I LOVE YOU...nd kiss her infront of all clg...mb sharam se pani pani...nd mb too confesses her love...nd whole clg clapping for the couple...yash becomes happy..nd he discloses dat he is mb bro...nd rk says sorry for his rude behaviour...
Both confesses deir love to deir family...nd dere family r happy as bpoth parents r buisness partners as well as clg time friends...nd dere family also wants dere children to get married nd dere dreaM COme true...finally both get married nd become one.
BACK TO PRESENT
now its 5 years of deir marrige nd dere is increasing day by day...nd after 2 years dere symbol of love PARI RISHAB KUNDRA comes in the world...suddenly mb wakes up nd sees her hubby in deep thought she plant a wet kiss on his lips...nd he is going to kiss her back nd sudden;ly dere princess comes in the room..nd rk ki kiss raha gyi[lolzzz]...nd both start tickling dere angel...nd spend dere life in love wid dere angel...
END...
HOPE TO LYK IT...ND PLZZZ COMMENT as mera first attempt.

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76manesha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Neek , Nice OS dear 👏.

Do keep writing 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manesha76




Hey Neek , Nice OS dear 👏.

Do keep writing 😛

thanks manesha
mera first attempt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: uteem

thanks manesha
mera first attempt...


I know dear . Do keep writing you will do good job 😛 .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very Cute Os dear 😳
loved it a lot simple yet leaves a very good impact on the reader's heart

love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A v nice os.u r a v gd writer hoping for another writing attempt frm u. ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vmpy

A v nice os.u r a v gd writer hoping for another writing attempt frm u. ⭐️

will surely give a try...thanks alot for ur comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya-

A very Cute Os dear 😳

loved it a lot simple yet leaves a very good impact on the reader's heart

love-Piya

thanks alot for such a lovely comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks alot dear
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thanks a lot for ur comment dear

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