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Shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow i loved the story line

was searching for good fics here and came across to this

well me too like the name his highness suits Rk's image

great work would love to receive PM

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MuneebaSheikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow shifali
I m first time reading ur ss loved it
Add me to ur pm list

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elegenttashu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb start.amazing.looking
forward for nxt update.add me
to ur pm list and do pm me nxt
time.continue soon.

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Sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow... you have amazing writing skills.. !!!

Waiting for more!!

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ahh! A well written story aka a Shwetzy magnet!

Critique:

-I loved how you transitioned through events and yeah, AD's do get treated like trash.

-RK's charm. Loved it! It's not described in the cheesy, sleezy way. In other words, no cheesy lines like, "You're so hot you put the Desi in Desirable." LOL Trust me, people use that.

-Liked how you described her "giddiness"

Personal Comments:

-Update soon woman!

-PM me pwease! I liked that post of yours and I think your on my buddylist. (I'll be stalking this post even if you don't cause I'm just awesome like that, don't be creeped.)

Shweta <3

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SuRu

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice nd interestng story...

plz pm me also whenever u write further...

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palluhegde

@palluhegde

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Posted: 12 years ago

Woww! Intresting. Looking frwd to more of RK n his HOTSTUFF 😃

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

A new beginning...

Nice concept. Rishbala meeting... Wow

Do continue soon.

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

haha what a wonderful concept! I love it! Can't wait to read more! ❤️ please pm when you update! ;)

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

@*Shifali*: Awesum n superb SS!!!!!😊

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