rima ff- devil's obession -CHECK NOTE ON 24

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice prologue.Plz dnt forget 2 pm me when u update

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Jab phool khile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Frist of all thank u my friends for liking and commentig on story...looking forward for ur reposnce like this...😃😃😃😉

now the update time...

Edited by qutiegiya - 13 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

this ff is something else in a good way

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Nandini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nyc story

add me 2 in ur pm list

update soon.

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awesome prologue

part 1 n 2

loved it

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Jab phool khile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

PART-3

All gang just went to the class... all class were teary n sad... some girls were crying:( .. some boys were also crying... n that strike our madhu... "HAHAHA!!!" the voice of madhu made turn to their heads towards her...
"isko kya ho gaya.. ye kyon has rahi hai yar??"some girls were stard dicussing abt it n they were just askd madhu... princi came towards d class... all gang had just ran towards d benches n unfortunatly they all seatd on 1st bench of row... "sala, ye taklu yaha kyon aa raha hai.." kya keraga ya aake?????""kitna pakta hai na yaar?????" said pinky at thattime romeo started acting of princi... " ye kya ho rha hai!!ye kya ho rha hai?😲!" sunil sang a song but meera said " cut d crap yaar... kitna bore karta hai yaar??"

Sunil is the serious type guy in gang and popular among college as chamacha of prof...

all this hangma was going o then princi came... and announced..

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at the same time a name which total world fear completed just his another deal that is tomerge tata co... he is just coming back from london to india...

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trisha doing her shooting of a song " munni bandam hui..."... and w8ng for her heatthrob...

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padma and malik just having their lunch ...

malik run small enterprise called" lakshmi enterprise"... so just he just come back from his work at home for lunch...

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and their is one person calling" i will kill you madhu at any cost..."

so friends howzz this part?? plzzz comment and let me know do you like it or not??? and what i need to improve my writing??

are u want to change the space of stroy the way it is gong n????

plzzz comment and press like button...w8ng ur views...

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GIYA...