Till how long the poor screenplay can be ignored??

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Princess DD

@Amoureux

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Criticism my friend is always welcome and we are all open to healthy discussion if done in a proper way... Like you did... So don't worry no one is going to bash you... 😊

I do agree to you to a certain extent ... yes... the magnanimity of the show looks lost somewhere with the poor work on the part of the technicians... I wonder why and i wonder how... Having said that i still want to give them sometime... and hope our constructive feedback reaches to them ...

For this is the same team that gave us the one sequence of dance with Drashti and Vivian... the Main Agar Kahoo sequence which looked so perfect and flawless... Perfect lighting and perfect setup and excellent camera work...The same team that gave us the initial episodes that looked so grand and nicely executed...

Having said that I agree, yesterday's lightwork and camerawork did look a bit dull... and all rushed... I liked the setting to a certain extend though... and had it not been for Drashti and Vivians acting in that scene... the fierce Madhu like a raging fire and the cool and calm RK like rock solid ice... it would have looked all out of place... I was wondering if the sequence was just rushed so as to hold peoples interest... because i was expecting the team to promote the first meeting of RK and Madhu well before actually showing it... But seems it was decision taken at the last moment... If that was the case then I hope the team does not make such rushed decisions and work on the story as they had planned for it...

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Arnav90

@Arnav90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I like the show ya there is some problem wd direction, i agree wd ur points but for me what matter is watching Drashti onscreen n Vivian is also pleasure watching... And one more thing the audience part of house wives did'nt know abt such thngs only youth know, So i like the show for lead pair i can ignore such flaws

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149722

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I didn't read everything :)

But yesterday's confrontation... there should have been at least a lead-up, it seems like I missed a portion of the story, something definitely missing.

Otherwise, the set-up, jail scene and even setting of yesterday's episode was apt... They needn't really show realistic as in 2012 only.

Om Shanti Om and Teri Meri Kahaani, both have a retro feeling (1970s/80s) - doesn't automatically mean they wouldn't work with the audiences..

Edited by ..Cassie.. - 13 years ago

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meenu

@-Nia04-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

may be u r forgetting this is indian show,, the show has set standard here.. i agree camera work is not good!! we need some1 really good there!!
vd has amazing dialogues n he is perfect as RK,, people wont watch the show if they show regular press conference that actors attend,, we need masala n that is what we got,, the dialogues are of 70's n 80's n its quite entertaining in the show which makes the show more dramatic n filmy,,
they r yet to build dd's character,, with RK's entry it ll happen soon too!! show is still a babyy it ll take time to satisfy u!!

Edited by mymagic13 - 13 years ago

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Your POV is right on its own but with the kind of scale they have to deal with it and the new subject , they are doing a fairly good job.

The scenes, the taking , the writing is NEW and it takes time to get in sync with something that has not been done before.

I would rather encourage them.

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ShinSegi

@Befikre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I completely agree that some scenes are over-exaggerated like that Paddy's balveer poem which she keeps repeating along with Maddy and some of RK's dialogues as actor. No mom keeps repeating a poem like this always😕 . And some scenes are dragged unnecessarily like the hospital scene or some chawl scenes. The screenplay was definitely poor yesterday, but RishBala and DVD made up to it with their amazing acting.😳

But, the show has picked up pace lately. They are executing everything really fast and I hope they maintain it. I personally love RK's dialogues a lot and I guess the dialogue writer is doing a fair job. The story is really different and the story writer is doing a great job as well.

I really like that fact that here the hatred between the hero-heroine is not because of some stupid reason but because of a strong reason. The reasoning department of this show is quite good as well😆

Edited by chakku_chudail - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

well what to say i agree with u to quite an extent...if u compare with PKYEK, then yea its a bit disappointing...if u compare Abhay and RK, i will anyday go for Abhay as there he was EXCEPTIONAL all the way...so lets not compare and see from a new perspective...except for RK i m not finding anything interesting in this show as of now...or in other words VD is the saving grace of this show 😆...lets see whats next...i m hoping they will soon b on a track considering its a new concept

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faria86

@faria86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

i agree with Ur some points like the last epi... press conference ...it was not realistic & trishna is reaction was a lil dramatic but start of the show & story was fab too & the entry of the leads was awesome & unique

besides we can't ignore the fact that it has been only a month of the show

it takes time for any show to adjust according to viewers demands so i think our expectations are too high coz at the end of the day it's a show not a movie

that we should expect each & every sense awesome

yep they need improvement & i think we should give them time bcoz the main story is yet to start

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-brokensoul-

@-brokensoul-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

You have made some valid points too. Like camera work and some scenes was dragged when there is no need and I would have wished last night confrontation scene to be a little bit longer. Ofcourse I'm selfish to see DVD together on the screen always and also because they have shorten the scene for a useless scene.

Also some bad ediitng was there in some episodes.

Agree with Chaku - Most important thing. In this show hatred is for a strong reason. They have justified the hate both have for each other. Madhu believes in doing the right thing. RK is pissed because someone has dared to question him, his life, enter his world without his permission.

Yes there are some things weak. I agree with camera work. But in the inital episodes camera work was great. Maybe they are not much used to romatic scenes yet. Well this is the first scene they have shown in a romantic way. Hope they will improve and work on their weak points.

One thing I have been wanting more focus on Madhu's character. But I also understand they are still in the stage of building up the characters. But now I badly want focus on her and her relationship with RK.

Movies can be based on any era. Anyways is there any good movie nowadays?? If they based on the movies that is currently made it would be so boring. In a show there should be drama and entertainment, which this show is giving.

TV shows are made for all age groups and for all classes. Mostly TRP viewers are intersted in more drama. I'm very happy the makers have the courage to try something new, which most are still reluctant and only try old formulas of saas bahu.

I am loving the show and DVD was awesome as always and the lead's chemistry was mind blowing. 👏

Edited by Shahisthi - 13 years ago

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ISADORA

@ISADORA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Shahisthi
You have made some valid points too. Like camera work and some scenes was dragged when there is no need and I would have wished last night confrontation scene to be a little bit longer. Ofcourse I'm selfish to see DVD together on the screen always and also because they have shorten the scene for a useless scene.

Also some bad ediitng was there in some episodes.

Agree with Chaku - Most important thing. In this show hatred is for a strong reason. They have justified the hate both have for each other. Madhu believes in doing the right thing. RK is pissed because someone has dared to question him, his life, enter his world without his permission.

Yes there are some things weak. I agree with camera work. But in the inital episodes camera work was great. Maybe they are not much used to romatic scenes yet. Well this is the first scene they have shown in a romantic way. Hope they will improve and work on their weak points.

One thing I have been wanting more focus on Madhu's character. But I also understand they are still in the stage of building up the characters. But now I badly want focus on her and her relationship with RK.

Movies can be based on any era. Anyways is there any good movie nowadays?? If they based on the movies that is currently made it would be so boring. In a show there should be drama and entertainment, which this show is giving.

TV shows are made for all age groups and for all classes. Mostly TRP viewers are intersted in more drama. I'm very happy the makers have the courage to try something new, which most are still reluctant and only try old formulas of saas bahu.

I am loving the show and DVD was awesome. 👏

shahi nicely said...hey i thought your DP is changed...😆..

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