writen update 21st apr P.S: I love U

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Posted: 14 years ago
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avni has to come from her mayeka after her MIL insults her mother n the entire family.
she is sitting alone in her room. Bhaskar comes n tries to talk to her but she refuses to listen anything n turns her face away. bhaskar then says that he knows how bad she is feeling right now. he also says that he is fully aware that her mother would not do anything that would hurt any one's sentiments ...whatever hapened should nt have taken place as it was a mere misunderstanding.

he regrets all that happened at avni's house but also says that to him his ayi is his world the same way as avni loves her ayi even he loves his mother a lot n cant say or listen anything against her.

he says that he cant see any of them : ayi or avni sad n upset. if at all there is some discord then he l take a new house on rent. avni stops him in between n says that she didnt marry him to take away him from his family...his ayi is now her family...

😳 bhaskar then tells avni to smile, " zabardasti wali nahin saaachi wali smile" avni smiles n blushes. bhaskoo then says that no matter how much tensed he is avni's smiling face takes away all his tensions...😳

avni too says that wheneevr he talks with her in such a swet n loving manner even her tensions fade away...😳
bhaskar then says, "muje lag rha hai ke abhi bhi thodi si tension baki hai" "thodhi si tension"

awweee love the way Rohit says this...❤️❤️ No one can be as good n as Romantic n magical as Rohit when it comes to such scenes. He has done it before n this time too again did the Magic...!!!!! itna sweeet n itnaaa cute...

avni says, "koi tension nahin hai" bhaskar then says, "tension to hai aur uska ilaaj hai thoda sa pyaaar"...😉
bhaskar comes close to her but she runs away. he then hugs her from behind n says,
😉 thoda sa nahin bahuuut saraa pyaaar" 😳
he then asks her, "tum mujse pyar nahin karti ho kya?" avni says, " yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai...karti hun..." bhaskar says, " aise nahin bol ke btao... " I LOVE YOU" warna main yahin pe shararat shuru kar dunga..."☺️
avni blushes n says, " I LOVE YOU" and runs to towards the bed...bhaskar comes close to her...n...😳

so my herooo n avni finally say, P.S. : I LOVE YOU...without any "bhaskar grin"

In the morning " bhaskar becomes a sandwich" thanks to his ayi...😡
usha calls at avni's place, her father in law picks up the call. usha says that we all are wating for to come to the office since some important tender needs to be completed. bhaskar's dad tells her to leave all her work n go to the office.

then " mata shree" comes...she tells avni to complete her work , give everyone breakfast n then she can leave for office. avni says that the work is very urgent or else boss wil have to incur huge loss...

Lata comes up with a nasty comment, " aisa kya rishta hai boss se jo itni chinta ho rhi hai uski"
bhaskars father jumps in scolds his wife for being so cheap n nasty.

bhaskar comes n asks whats going on...? before any one could say anything his ayi says,

" tu office ja rha hai na ek kaam kar mere liye zeher le ana" bhaskar gets irritated n says, " kya bol rhi hai tuuu"
his ayi then starts with the usual drama...ur father is instigatin ur wife against me. what wrong have I done if i have asked some help from ur wife. all my life i have done all household work alone n now if i want my bahu to share my burden then wats wrong in it. she then tells neeta to start learning household stuff n consider that avni is not there...

bhaskar gets tottaly irriated n angry . he tells his ayi to stop all this n also tells avni to help her n then leave for work...avni says nothing

again usha calls n tells that she wants a file which only avni knows about. avni is about to call usha but as usual is stopped by her MIL. she says apna kaam kar ke office chali jana.

@ office
boss is all furious on avni n everyone. he hardly has 1.5 hr left to file the tender or else they would loose the contract. maskare tells that if he is alowed then he make a new tendor but the boss refuses n says that only avni knows how to go about it ..he orders usha to call avni asap.

however, avni is struck with her MIL and SIL...as anju n her hubby also come for breakfast...


Realy loved the Romantic scene between bhaskar n avni...😳😉 the way he tells her to say i love you n the way she says it...

Rohit P.S: i looove uuu tooo heeerooo ❤️

at the end bhaskar gets struck between his mother n his wife...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nb.neha

avni has to come from her mayeka after her MIL insults her mother n the entire family.
she is sitting alone in her room. Bhaskar comes n tries to talk to her but she refuses to listen anything n turns her face away. bhaskar then says that he knows how bad she is feeling right now. he also says that he is fully aware that her mother would not do anything that would hurt any one's sentiments ...whatever hapened should nt have taken place as it was a mere misunderstanding.

he regrets all that happened at avni's house but also says that to him his ayi is his world the same way as avni loves her ayi even he loves his mother a lot n cant say or listen anything against her.

he says that he cant see any of them : ayi or avni sad n upset. if at all there is some discord then he l take a new house on rent. avni stops him in between n says that she didnt marry him to take away him from his family...his ayi is now her family...

😳 bhaskar then tells avni to smile, " zabardasti wali nahin saaachi wali smile" avni smiles n blushes. bhaskoo then says that no matter how much tensed he is avni's smiling face takes away all his tensions...😳

avni too says that wheneevr he talks with her in such a swet n loving manner even her tensions fade away...😳
bhaskar then says, "muje lag rha hai ke abhi bhi thodi si tension baki hai" "thodhi si tension"

awweee love the way Rohit says this...❤️❤️ No one can be as good n as Romantic n magical as Rohit when it comes to such scenes. He has done it before n this time too again did the Magic...!!!!! itna sweeet n itnaaa cute...

avni says, "koi tension nahin hai" bhaskar then says, "tension to hai aur uska ilaaj hai thoda sa pyaaar"...😉
bhaskar comes close to her but she runs away. he then hugs her from behind n says,
😉 thoda sa nahin bahuuut saraa pyaaar" 😳
he then asks her, "tum mujse pyar nahin karti ho kya?" avni says, " yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai...karti hun..." bhaskar says, " aise nahin bol ke btao... " I LOVE YOU" warna main yahin pe shararat shuru kar dunga..."☺️
avni blushes n says, " I LOVE YOU" and runs to towards the bed...bhaskar comes close to her...n...😳

so my herooo n avni finally say, P.S. : I LOVE YOU...without any "bhaskar grin"

In the morning " bhaskar becomes a sandwich" thanks to his ayi...😡
usha calls at avni's place, her father in law picks up the call. usha says that we all are wating for to come to the office since some important tender needs to be completed. bhaskar's dad tells her to leave all her work n go to the office.

then " mata shree" comes...she tells avni to complete her work , give everyone breakfast n then she can leave for office. avni says that the work is very urgent or else boss wil have to incur huge loss...

Lata comes up with a nasty comment, " aisa kya rishta hai boss se jo itni chinta ho rhi hai uski"
bhaskars father jumps in scolds his wife for being so cheap n nasty.

bhaskar comes n asks whats going on...? before any one could say anything his ayi says,

" tu office ja rha hai na ek kaam kar mere liye zeher le ana" bhaskar gets irritated n says, " kya bol rhi hai tuuu"
his ayi then starts with the usual drama...ur father is instigatin ur wife against me. what wrong have I done if i have asked some help from ur wife. all my life i have done all household work alone n now if i want my bahu to share my burden then wats wrong in it. she then tells neeta to start learning household stuff n consider that avni is not there...

bhaskar gets tottaly irriated n angry . he tells his ayi to stop all this n also tells avni to help her n then leave for work...avni says nothing

again usha calls n tells that she wants a file which only avni knows about. avni is about to call usha but as usual is stopped by her MIL. she says apna kaam kar ke office chali jana.

@ office
boss is all furious on avni n everyone. he hardly has 1.5 hr left to file the tender or else they would loose the contract. maskare tells that if he is alowed then he make a new tendor but the boss refuses n says that only avni knows how to go about it ..he orders usha to call avni asap.

however, avni is struck with her MIL and SIL...as anju n her hubby also come for breakfast...


Realy loved the Romantic scene between bhaskar n avni...😳😉 the way he tells her to say i love you n the way she says it...

Rohit P.S: i looove uuu tooo heeerooo ❤️

at the end bhaskar gets struck between his mother n his wife...



neha darling , yeah tune kya kiya ? pehele pata hota to updates likne wail hain ,to mujhe itni mehnat nahi karni padti😆anyways, nice updates 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i write it evryday so aaj bhi likhna tha.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update😊and congrats on being coolbie👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: souroj

Thanks for the update😊and congrats on being coolbie👏👏


ur welcome...😊 and thank uu 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hai rabba ...just loveee Him ❤️☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunima_luvdsky

Hai rabba ...just loveee Him ❤️☺️


yup loooveee him aruuu ☺️❤️ looked soo adorable in that scene

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