^^ Maayka Written Update- 9th July ^^

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys i am so sorry about yesterday i started writing up the update but then i got disconnected to the internet so could not post it . someone else has already posted it so i will not re-post it anyways i am back to updating today so here it goes:Recap

Mr. Khuranan tells everyone that they should be going now. Angads room is next to shabds and he says to shadd we are neighbours which means we can come in each others room whenever we want. Mahi is shocked. Angad looks at mahi evilly.

Part 1

We see the golden temple in amritsar. Everyone bow down in front on the temple and fold there hands. The men go in to the water and go straight in but there heads down as well. The family looks happy to g to the place. All the couples bow down in fron to the guru that normally is in the front. Mahi has been given prashad and angad is looking at her while praying. Its sonis turn to bow down and she is remembering when veer was with her again. Jeet comes and sits next to her while his hands are folded. They both bow down together. Jeet watches soni he walks up and goes away he does the same. Soni gets prashad and walks off and jeet watches her and doing the same.

Everybody is sitting on the table eating when parmeet says that he has heared that amritsars naan is very nice. Mr. Khurana says I don't know we will eat it sometime. Then anga says to mr. Khurana I have thought about coming here so many times but I never got time with all my work, but when I was asked to come I agreed. Mahi shocked looks at him and h looks back at her evilly smirking. Mahi looks down uncomfortable. Mr. Khurana says that's good you kept an interest in coming even though you are living in the modern world. Angad says not interest but craze, you will be shocked to know that all NRI's come here at atleast once in their lifetime, afterall this place is beautiful .jeet says not know its more beautiful at night. Angad says yes I have heared about that too and it is different to other cultures. Kr. Khuarana is shocked angad knows that much an says that he does not live here but knows a lot. Angad then replies that he lives there but does not belong therea and that he has not forgotten his culture and tradition. Parmeet says well they says there sis no place like your own city, the happiness there is here is no where else. H says that looking at jyoti. Soni says deffinately, even veer used to say…. Everybody stops and looks at her, jeet was about to put food in his mouth but stop. He continues to say that veer used to say that the feel in the earth in our own country is different to anywhere else. Shabd says but did you all notice after doing prayers at the temple my mind feels much lighter. Mr. Khurana says well it is gods house if that wont happen here then where else will it happen. It has different effects on people. Parmeet then says everyone eat quickly if you want to go back to the temple. Angad says yes I cant wait to go back and see how it looks after being bathed in. everybody get sup form there seats. Suddenly parmeet forgets his phone that rings jyoti is last to come out so sees it. she sees it says private calling and quickly picks the phone p in her hands. Parmeet takes it off her and says ill see whose phone it is. Jyoti stands there thinking who could it be on the phone and why was it a private call.

part 2

It is night time and everyone is at durgiyana temple and loud prayers can be heared. People are praying and dancing. The sareen and khurana family are also praying sitting down. Soni is in her own thoughts while the others have folded there hands and praying loud. Soni says to her self, veer you are watching all of this with me right? Ye I know you are watching it with me. But only if I could be able to see u. a red car comes in the car park and soni, mahi and shabd come out of it. mahi says shabd I am so tired lets go and rest she says to soni you are tired right? Soni nods her head. They all are walking in to the hotel when mahi says she forgot to get her shawl from the car. Shabd says he will go and get it . mahi says no she will go get it in a minute. They wait for her while she goes out again. She goes to the car and picks up her shawl, when she is coming out of the car . somebody puts a had on her mouth and drags her backwards. She is trying to get the person to let go but hes not.

While the others are all sitting soni says why has mahi not come yet. She says one minute and gets up to go to shabd who is at reception, she says shabd why has mahi not come yet? Shabd says is she no here yet? Shabd says she might have not found the shawl il go see her. He leaves to go out . he goes towards the car and screams mahi's name out . he does not see her near the car. He is confused and keeps and looking for mahi and calling her name out . he then sees the car door open and shuts it and is worried. He is looking round the parking lot. Mahi is hidden behind trying to call shabds name but she cant her hands are out but the person wont let her go. Shabd is calling her name but no response.

Part 3

Soni says to mr. Khuaran mahi has still not come, where is she. Durga says she must be here somewhere she will come. Soni says she is just going to see if she can find her. Shabd is loking for mahi everywhere and mahi is struggling to get out of the persons grip. Everybody here shabd shout mahi and quickly run outside to see what happened. Mahi bites the person and shouts shads name . shabd turns around and mahi runs in to his arms crying. Mahi is crying continuously and shabd is asking her what happened and looking in the direction she came. Everyone else comes out too. Durga aks her hat happened. Ahi says there was somebody there pointing in the direction, the person held me tightly and was trying to kidnap me. Shabd is shocked nad moves forward and so does parmeet. They both go there to see who it is. Mahi asks who is it? they walk back towards her mahi and kamya ask who it is? Mahi moves forward towards him. Shabd and parmeet move and show angads face. Everybody is shocked to see him who is smiling. Mahi is shocked and is crying. Angad comes forward and asks her if she liked his joke. Mahi moves back and shabd sys I told you he is number 1 prank star. Anagd says there is one thing clear that shabd loves his wife too much. He says to mahi you should thank me that now u know how much shabd loves u. mahi is shocked and just looking at him. Angad says so thank me. Mahi says you want me to thank u.? for this stupid joke. Who told you to prove how much shabd loves me, I know how much he loves me. I don't need a certifiate from you to say how much a husband loves the wife. You have not jokes today but badly behaved with me. If u ever do something like that again there will be nobody bad than me. Kamya comes in front and says mahi, he just did a joke, why are u over reacting? Mahi says kamya this was not a small joke and saying sorry cant make me forget everything. Shabd sys mahi he was joking and he said sorry . shabd says and you to angad says sorry and don't do it again. Angad says sorry in front of everyone. Durga says leave it now mahi.

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Angad chucks water at kamya and mahi. Mahi tells him not to but he does not stop.

ps- let me know if u prefer the update short or long

thank u

luv zain

xxxxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
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a short update is fine .. since nothing really exciting in going on
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeaah, whatever is easy with you. short is always fine. lol less work.

thanks! will come back to read the rest!

obviously the guy with mahi is --> angad! 😛

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thaaanks. woow. angad gets away with everything.. tsk tsk.

Edited by xl0ve - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I always preferred the long version.
Thanks for taking the time to do the update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This whole storyline with Angad is so stupid. I am so sick and tired of seeing Soni crying all the time. Why couldn't he be a match for her and they slowly fell in love. That would have been a better storyline that this whole angad after Mahi.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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whatever is easy for u, but I like the long version! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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angad is becoming scary....hope he dont turn out to be a rapist!
tfs
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Posted: 17 years ago
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something is reely wrong wit him seriously. I dont reely like him 😕 n plus its scary i mean someone kidnapps u n later sayin it was just a joke i think its reely stupid.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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long or short watever u prefer is best for us too 😛

great update..

Angadz crossing his limit nowww 😡 yuckkk I wanna kill him 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the update 😳
And whichever one is more convenient for you! 😳

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