new VS ff - 'taking chances'..prt 3, pg 6 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sharmak

Came thru the link on the fan club side. Yes, Please go on. this is an interesting start.

keep it up preeti ..

good start.....👏

Wow!👏 What a start! It's very good and original! I'm definitely interested in Veer's introduction😉

Originally posted by: RekhaS

This is good Pooja, please continue.

tnx rekha.....yup will post soon😳

Originally posted by: HOUSTON2007

Cool start. Please continue. Thanks

tnx yaar....will continue surely😳

Originally posted by: sexy001

hi i saw this link on the club site and i like the story do far, please continue. new veeni fan

gr8 to hv a new veeni fan......do keep loving them and my ff😳

Originally posted by: smile41

hey same here. I like this story. Can't wait to read more!

tnx for liking the story......btw i like ur id name.....what's ur real name?😊

Originally posted by: toocool4

Great going. continue

tnx a lot........continuing soon😳

Originally posted by: scorpiorule

Hey Pooja ..now we're getting new people from other forums who love Veeni, please continue. Thanks

hey ria.....tnx a ton for adding the link on the FC.....got a whole lot of comments coz of that....love ya gurl😃.......dont worry......i hope i'm faster than leena😆😆

Originally posted by: sharmak

Came thru the link on the fan club side. Yes, Please go on. this is an interesting start.

hey sharmak😊........glad u liked it......hopefully continuing today😳

Originally posted by: sumila

keep it up preeti ..

good start.....

hey tnx sumi.......it feels good to have many more VS fans na?😃

Originally posted by: rockin12

cool. when will this continue?

heya rockin.....the 2nd part will be up by today or tom😳

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

Wow! What a start! It's very good and original! I'm definitely interested in Veer's introduction

hey tnx for the lovely comment......and i hope u'll love veer's intro as well😉

ur comments come as a relief....i thought nobody will accept VS as characters totally diff. from the serial.....but seeing the no. of replies....i'm encouraged to continue😳

hey guys....tnx for the gr8 response.....here's the next part of

Part 2:-

The lady smoothened the creases on her expensive dress & showed a thumbs-up sign to the cameraman.

"Good morning viewers. I welcome u all on the show "Emerging India". A show in which we focus on the youth of India & their achievements. Today, we'll be treating u all to the man behind the conception and success of the "Khurana Shipping Empire". Yes, "treating", because i'm sure the girls glued to their t.v. sets are drooling by now" and she gave an artificial laugh. "On a more serious note, today we'll be looking at his achievements as a businessman rather than his colourful personal life. As you all can see" she pointed behind her, " we r standing in front of the Khurana Complex. Seeing the opulence of the complex we come to know about the rich taste of the man and his love for luxury. Now, without wasting any more time, let's go inside and meet the man himself". Saying this, the lady entered the complex and the camera's focus shifted to the magnificient decoration of the place.

After a while, the camera zoomed back on the lady.

" Ok people. I'm standing outside the chairman's cabin." and she knocked.

"Come in" came the brusque reply from the other side of the door. When the door opened, the man sitting looked up & was shocked at what he saw - the lady anchor from some dumb show was smiling at him & there was a cameraman behind her, who was obviously shooting the scene.

"guys, meet Mr. Veer Khurana!!" & she pointed at a still shocked Veer.He just stood up from his chair and stared first at the lady and then the camera. " What the he..."

BANG!! the cabin door opened again & Prem came in huffing and puffing. When he saw the anchor inside the cabin, he turned to Veer and gave him a sheepish grin. Then he turned to the cameraman & asked him to stop shooting. He asked the to wait for him and veer outside the cabin.

As soon as Prem closed the door on their confused faces, Veer started blasting him. "I'm sure u're behind this!!"..."umm.....yes, i am.When the channel approached me, i thought it'd be good publicity for you. Atleast they'll be concentrating on your real achievements, unlike those glam magazines wherein..."

" hey...hey.....let's not get there alright! first of all you forget to inform me about this interview. And then, you go on blabbering about my so-called "tainted reputation"...not fair!!. I'll give this interview but ask the lady to make it fast coz i'm feeling like going on a sail today"

Prem smiled. "Alright water baby. As you say"

" You know i'm doing this only coz that's what u want". "I know , and i thank you for that. Trust me, this is bound to help you"

"Let's see.....just one more thing prem"." Yes Veer?".." Could you give that lady our home address. She might need it u know", he winked while Prem gave him an " Are you ever gonna change" look, shook his head and left.

The interview took about 45 mins in which 10 mins were wasted by the anchor who forgot most of her questions when Veer kept giving her meaningful looks.

In the end, Veer gave her a wide smile saying " Thanks for the interview darling. Be sure to visit me sometime soon.". The lady reluctantly smiled back at him thinking " How can I when you already have that girlfriend of yours living with you and working here in your office, keeping an eye on you. Payal is certainly lucky to have you"

That afternoon, Veer packed his duffel bag with all his fav. stuff & headed out to his private dock where, anchored safely was the love of his life - his "Pleasure Seeker"

how was this part? do comment😳

~*Preeti*~😊