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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz Express ur opinion? what do u want? What Mahi should do now.. Give some new story Idea.. Acc to you what type of plot should be the next part, which can make '' Maayka '' more interesting..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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If this time no body trust mahi including shabd...or kaamya make a condition that only she or mahi can live in the house .because kaamya is totaly agaginst mahi now...and for her mental condition i can feel kaamya can do this...and may be she try to commit suicide to blackmail whole family to get mahi out of the house..then i think mahi should leave that house and i expect some new entry...who can teach mahi to live her own life as independent...then mahi can come back wid more strong chratacter...but she should not forgive Shabd and kaamya so easily..... mean while sareen house including kaamya can know about Angad's real face and they might regret what they did to Mahi.......let shabd rum behind mahi once again then.!😊...As far as mahi is concern...i know whatever happens to her but she can't forget shabd's love and her resposibilities towards her love ones...this can make her character more lovable too!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I liked it Infact I loved it.. Fida wonderful..šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well now Noone will be talking to Mahi now after what Happened..So i think she should now pretend to Angad that she is giving up and do what he tells her to.

Then Mahi should catch him out by recording him or something and on the Wedding by showing everyone that this is what he is really is like.
Then on the wedding day when Mahi does give the evidence, it shows that Mahi is telling Angad that she loves him and Angad is trying to move away. Shabd chucks her out the house.
Angad says I don't think this wedding should be taken place at this time. We should delay it. Shabd is disturbed and walks slowly into his bedroom. Everyone leaves after him accept Angad and Mohini. Angad looks at her and gives her a thumbs up

We are outside with Mahi in a mess thinking of just what has happened. She then finds herself some steps leading to a temple and just sits there crying. Then someone arrives in front of the temple in a car. It appears to be Angad, and tells Mahi to hurry up and sit in the car, Mahi refuses and tells him to get lost and doesn't even want to spit on his face because he stooped that low, to trick her. He then walks to Mahi and grabs her hand and drags her into the car.

Back in Sareen's house shabd is sitting in his room disturbed, thinking of all the times he has spent with Mahi and how much he did love her.
I have been making this story for about a month now šŸ˜†
to be continued.. lol
Edited by XxkomalxX - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: i_fida

If this time no body trust mahi including shabd...or kaamya make a condition that only she or mahi can live in the house .because kaamya is totaly agaginst mahi now...and for her mental condition i can feel kaamya can do this...and may be she try to commit suicide to blackmail whole family to get mahi out of the house..then i think mahi should leave that house and i expect some new entry...who can teach mahi to live her own life as independent...then mahi can come back wid more strong chratacter...but she should not forgive Shabd and kaamya so easily..... mean while sareen house including kaamya can know about Angad's real face and they might regret what they did to Mahi.......let shabd rum behind mahi once again then.!😊...As far as mahi is concern...i know whatever happens to her but she can't forget shabd's love and her resposibilities towards her love ones...this can make her character more lovable too!😳

Mindblowing awesome šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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XxkomalxX , i thought of the samee thing i reallly hope dis happensssss...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks monika and sudhir for liking my idea😳 actually i wrote it too zee channel too😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hmm Acc to me The ideal story would be like this.
Mahi Will leave the house.. and will meet one powerful man sum one like Ronit roy in Kasam se.. Then she will start a new business with help of this man. and will become a renowned buisness woman.. And few days later Shabd will realise Mahi's importance.. and Then Angad will blackmail him and take everything ,his business, house from Shabd.. poori tarha baarbaad kar dega Shabd ko Angad.. Then Mahi will save Shabd and rescue him as usal as she did it before .. and will give him everything again Name Fame house Business happiness.. and will take revenge from Angad..
Edited by sudhirm_2007 - 17 years ago

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