PriDa OS: Lure Of The Vampire - Page 2

Originally posted by: zaqxsw

Awesome work... Njoyed reading it...
Please write more...
Thanks for the pm...

thanks dear, i'm glad you loved it.
thanks for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: M2NZ

Tich you know how to make everyone speechless and surprise!

Prida in a twist wow!
The 'bad' prithvi , i enjoyed to core! His approach towards damini , winning her yet then loosing. Somewhat felt worth to him!
Damini uff the lamb, she didnt lose but defeated him badly!
Love makes u, love destroyes!

thanks munaza,
i'm glad you loved it.
yes, even i felt he deseved it.
and damini, well it's not about winning or losing here. i wanted to portray the realization and unconditional love. yes, love can destroy you too that's why we say 'falling' in love.
thanks again dear.

okay tich first of all a huge sorry for commenting so late...

Originally posted by: sur001

Awesum os tich
beauty and the beast where beast won his prey but lost his love. . .When he lost her he realised his mistake but it was too late. . .Gr88 work

awww thanks sur..
your lines were just perfect..
the beauty and beast.. just perfect.
yes it was too late, but i think it serves the beast right isnt?
i enjoyed writing this though and i'm glad with your review..

Originally posted by: pia09

Hi Tich, thks for the awesum os. even visualize Prithvi as vampire. really enjoyed reading it.

thanks piaji, the writers, the only thing they want is that readers could visualize their work.. it is an honor. thank you very much..

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

OMG tich i don't have the slightest idea how to tell you about the awesomeness of this OS... 🤗 👏

i loved prithvi as a vampire...he was awesome...the way you described his evilness was awesome😈...it was giving me shivers...i love it...❤️😳

and damini's character was sooo amazing and beautiful... i loved how she loved him till the end..❤️

and the way you described prithvi's pain at the end,,,it was breath taking...i was literally in tears...👏

you are an awesome amazing and fabulous writer..i love your style..how you create the suspense and the climax at the end...⭐️👏

i am in seriously in love with this OS...plz do write more stories like this...😛

especially make prithvi a vampire..cuz i fell in love with him in this OS...prithvi as a vampire was an awesome treat ☺️😍😉

seriously buddy i LOVE this..❤️

amazing job...

-Mah 🤗🤗

thanks mah,🤗
really even i dont have the slightest idea how to thank you..
yup damini loved him to the end, that's what we call true love. accept your love as it is..
and prithvi's pain is what he deserved.. ou! i'm sorry it was a tragedy but i'm evil na i wanted you to cry😉 and thanks a lot for appreciating my writing style.. suspense was the main element in this.. thanks for letting me know that i have achieved... it really means a lot.

and yes surely i'll write more like this.. infact i have three one shots coming up out of which one is a suspense and thrilling one like this but not a vampire one. still i promise to make prithvi interesting..
thanks a lot again..😊😊😊

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

okay tich first of all a huge sorry for commenting so late...

now coming to the update dude do u have any idea how awesome this was...actually no even awesome is a small word...

i have read your earlier pieces of work and i must say you have improved so much as a writer...not that u were not good before but now you are perfect...like seriously perfect...

you OS had everything...it was so captivating not even for one second i felt my interest losing...at first i was a little scared of the length but in the end i was like did it just ended?? it was so short!

you have no idea how much i am into fantasy and vampires and i so loved this evil pri...

i loved pink pastry...best line...very creative piece of work...

i myself had tried to write on supernatural stuff and it is difficult...it is different from normal stuff we write and girl u penned it down so amazingly...

i just loved each and every scene...how he wanted her, how he couldn't touch her, how she fell for him, how he lusted for her, how he killed her and in the end how he was sitting beside her grave, her innocence and his evilness... hats off to us girl...

i just can't tell u how amazing this was...

i would have continued the comment but i have to go in the kitchen...

LOVED this piece of work of yours and would love even more to read something like that from u again...

-Baz

that's ok for late commentbaz aagar comment itna badiya ho toh.. thanks a lot for this.
and secondly dear how would i know how is this ff until you tell me.. now after reading the wonderful reviews of you girls, devil sisters especially i realised yes my hard work paid off..

and yup, i know your fetish for vapires and salvatore brothers especially. i'm glad my prithvi made into it now..

pink pastry wala,, well i tried to show damini as pink that is dream and pri in black that is he represents dark.. there is a reality(white) between dream world and dark world but this is my story na.. so i felt instead of usual black and white i'll use black and pink combination.. .. so ultimately their story has been developed in pink world but has been lost in the darkness forever.. thanks for mentioning this.. its a badge on my creativity.. hugs for that.

supernatural is something i just love writing, trust me once you start writing you'll get addicted to it.. try once.

thanks again baz, the way you appreciated my work and each and every line was pure gold for me.. i'm overwhelmed and it means a lot to me.. thanks from the bottom of my heart.

Originally posted by: -Zeenat-

Wooww, i'm hell late. 🤔 Sorry.. 😔

Fabb OS buddy! I simply loved it. ❤️

Tich this is soo beautiful.. How did I even Miss reading it... OMG this is reallyyy captivating.. I loved it to core as I luv watching Vampire Diaries..