On Weekend's like these:Second Last Part Pg 5

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The sound of the waves crashing was the only music that could be heard on the beach besides the chirping of the birds, and she loved them as much as she loved the hustle free beach now. Well then, she had a lot of things . . . or maybe people around to love for this private moment under the sun. it was a winter morning that she had decided to grace the private beach of Goa to spend the weekend with her hubby who had on her one demand booked the entire beach for themselves, partially because he loved her so much and partially because he didn't want to spoil their time creating a scene, what kind of scene only he knew and though she wanted this moment to stay forever, she did want him to come back fast so that she could just feel the beautiful moment with him.

She had just begin to relax under the sun, with her eye lashes slowly meeting when a very familiar presence filled herself and her lips curved into a smile. "Prithvi" she whispered with her eyes still closed. "Hmmm" came the very expected reply, her smile widened and without opening her eyes "come closer na" she said softly, extending a hand towards him. Smiling to himself Prithvi moved his cot towards her and sat down, and then with a swift move pulled her closer. Least surprised by this move of his, she shifted comfortably in his embrace and closed her eyes mugging his waist and keeping her head on his heart.

"Damini. . ." Prithvi called softly after sometime as he saw the sun rising up higher in the sky, but as he looked at her he realized that she hadn't wanted this weekend in Goa but she needed it. There she lay asleep on his chest, completely relaxed and de-stressed, in the company of the nature and the sea, away from the tensions of the work. And now he realized why she had wanted to come here so early morning. And as much as he hated waking her up, he didn't want to spend the weekend on the Goa beach sleeping, though he wouldn't mind either, but this seemed to be a complete waste of time. "Damini" he called out a little louder this caressing her cheeks, tucking her hair behind her ear still contemplating if waking her up would be as good as watching her sleep in his arms was. But then he didn't want her to waste her time dozing under the sun and then not be able to enjoy this time due to their work.

"Baby. . .please wake up" the soft and loving voice reached her sensitive brain and she frowned, the voice and presence was very familiar but. . .frowning she opened her eyes a little and felt a little about here and there with her soft hands and relaxed she was still where she had dozed off, in his arms. But then realization hit her and she sat back suddenly, her eyes wide in shock "W. . .wh. . .what happened?" Prithvi asked surprised by her sudden jerk as he tried to reach her, but she jerked his hands. And then slowly she came close to him by herself and checked his forehead "you seem alright" she said softly "I am" Prithvi answered blank and confused "then who is baby?" she asked looking around, and Prithvi looked at her with a raised eyebrow, Wifey and her weird instincts, he thought. "very funny" he added sceptically as he got up leaving her there itself "I thought you would want to enjoy the day rather than just dozing off, so I made the mistake of waking up her majesty" he said sarcastically without a single expression in his voice but his voice depicted mock anger "and what plans do you have to make this time more enjoyable" she sat back comfortably like a queen and asked him with amusement clearly visible on her face, she would always have an upper hand at him with words.

Or so did she think, for every little syllable got stuck with her breath in her throat itself as soon as her eyes started with the observing the surrounding bit and she had to tilt her face a little upwards to make sure that he didn't find out, but the view up was anything less but godly, for Prithvi stood smiling with his one hand folded around his chest and the other supporting his chin. And she knew he had done that purposely, because he loved to give her a hard time. She straightened and sat consciously as he moved a little close to her. Smirking as he watched her fists tighten around the edges to the edge he bent down to her side, while she tried to look straight and concentrated on her heart's beat that was going to win the marathon, to slow it down or she might faint. He softly hinted in her ears as she let out a short breath and closed her eyes "as much as I would love to entertain you with my idea of making the day more enjoyable, I wouldn't want to spoil the night. So for now you could be content with having fun on the beach, love" he moved back but not before kissing her cheek softly as her eyelids flew open and he winked at her with a trademark Prithvi smirk as he moved back enough to let her senses at peace. And before she knew, he was out of the view again, this time for the better of her. And it was then that she let out a complete breath and finally smiled as her cheeks flushed with colour, burning under the sun. "You are getting good hubby dearest" she murmured to herself as she got up to follow him and find out the plans he had made for this beautiful and warm (hiiisss) morning.

Will Complete it soon...till then issi se kaam chala lo...😛😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wohoo im first😆
Wow Sid its awesomee
Its very interesting too...
Greaaat job👏
Waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Sid, it was awesum. Waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sid. a PriDa OS after a long time.. and as usual u r too good with the words.. expecting the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sid Bhaiyaa,
A wonderful comeback👍🏼...looks like ur making up for all those un-updated SSs eh??
Loved this serene Damzi and a little restless Prithvi...and waiting the see the what is in store fo the "night"😉
Waiting to read the next part..
Snehal
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow dat was awesom . Totally pridaish loved it. Cant wait for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sid it was amazing reading this...you do have a way with words, so much so that the reader can imagine each detail in the scenes written...loved reading it...the effect Prithvi has on Damini is so romantic and fun to read...hi smirks and her coyness make for wonderful chemistry, when she comes out of her stubborn image...their wordplay is a treat for us...so sweet of u to send a pm...thanks so much...and why did u even THINK this didnot deserve to be shared...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Errr...blame it on my sleepy state, i didn't really get ur puns...were they all pointing to nocturnal activities😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sid !!
What a Comeback !! such a Fantastic OS !! 👏
Sun , Sand and PRIDA ... A Terrific Combo indeed !! ⭐️⭐️
It is a Lazy , Langurously Beautiful Beach side tale ... bringing alive the Love they share in all its Warmth !! 😊😊
and the Witty Repartee ... God !! they will never let go of the oppportunity to have the last word ... and how can the other be allowed to win ?? 😃 Isn't this is what we miss the most about them ?? Sigghhh...
Liked all the " Puns " intended or Unintended !! 😆
Thanks for such a FUN piece of writing !!
Amiya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waah me the last one to know that u ve written a new Os haan ...😭 well coming to d point
ummm awesum OS
what a comeback Bro !!!:D<]" src="http://india-forums.com/smileys/smiley31.gif">
Miss them😭
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