Hello Friends !!
These days of PRIDA starvation are so tough......... and i am sure that i am not the only one for whom coming here to this Wonderful Thread is one of the few ways to get a Smile on our face !! Seeing all the Wonderful Creations of all you Awesome people is a real source of Joy !! 😊😊
Was Terribly Missing PRIDA , and since all our Talented Creative Writers seem to have taken a Break ( Undoutedly a Very Well Deserved one ) 😊.......... so i decided to pen down something ............ and although i think It has turned out Horribly and Frankly i should not be subjecting you to Torture like this ......... but since it is PRIDA .......... I thought that you will bear with even this Atrocity ........... and hence i have decided to go ahead and Inflict this upon you !!
So here goes :
" Aaaap or Tuumm "............. PRIDA Scene TWEAKED !!
We all love rewinding to the scenes of our Beloved PRIDA and the Post Proposal scene when both have agreed to the Marriage on being asked by Ela Gujral is of course one of their BESTEST Scenes !! and our Perennial favourites !!
Aaaahhhh....... our Damzie looking Absolutely Stunning and Regal in that lovely Red and Pri at his Dashing Best in Blue .......... it is one of those Most Beautiful Visuals and Golden Memories that are Etched Forever on our minds !! ❤️❤️
Folks , I know I am Absolutely Crazzyyyy to still Dream about their scenes ( I know I am Pathetic !! ) 😳 but my only Consolation is that quite a few of you would be with me in the same Boat and understand this strange affliction 😳😃
So let us talk about that Beautiful scene without much ado :
Those Subtle Expressions of Love and Joy on their faces !! Awwww....... coupled with a sense of Disbelief that their Secret Yearning of belonging to each other is shortly going to be fulfilled ....... all their ( or rather more of us Besotted Viewers' ) 😃 earlier Totally Unbelievable Dreams of they being MEANT FOR each OTHER shall soon be turning True and that too in such an Unexpectedly Smooth manner.............. And Both of them Looking Absolutely Divine........... Ohhhhh........ Did they not give us some of our Happiest and Most Joyous moments !! ❤️😍
Well that is how Destiny has charted their paths and Ela Gujral , that " Enemy " of the Saxena Brothers, herself, has not only paved the way but actually Pushed both of them towards the MARRIAGE ALTAR ( or in this case the Marriage Havan Kund to be precise ) !! 😃😃
Both have agreed to the Marriage, and on being asked by Ela both of them have confessed in their Typical HESITANT and UNDERSTATED manner that they " LIKE" each other..... 😆 😆
and now Ela has left them alone in the room !! 😉😃
As can be expected from our two " DHAKKANS " (though highly Lovable of course!! ) 😃 😃 Both of them are SHY !! Tongue tied and feeling Awkward !!about what to say to each other !! 😛 ..............of course it goes without saying that Hesitation and Awkwardness has never been as HAWTT, as SIZZLING and Combustible !! 😃 and has never looked as BEWITCHINGLY BEAUTIFUL ❤️ 😍
Having just taken this most Crucial and Momentous decision of their life ........ of getting Married to each other......... these two otherwise Supremely CONFIDENT and ARROGANT PEOPLE are at a loss of words and do not know what to say !! ....... see this is what even Thinking of Marriage does to the Best of them !! 😛😆
And then as usual........ it is our Queenie who takes the Lead in ending that Sweetly Awkward Silence......... by saying that " Abse Tum Mujhe Aaap ki Bajaye Tum keh Sakte Ho....... " 😊 which brings one of those Ohhhh So rare and absolutely Charming Smile on our Pri's face , which never fails to set our Hearts Palpitating !! 😳😃
But then our Damzie......... never missing a chance to Tease him a bit...... asks him " To kyaa Ek Husband Apni Wife ko Aaap keh ke Nahin Bulaa Sakta ? " 😃
and then he, who has never missed a chance to give back an Equally Good retort, replies " Of course Keh Sakta Hai , par Iskaa Ultaa bhi Ho Sakta Hai , aksar Maine Aisa Dekhaa Hai , Sunaa Bhi Hai......... " 😃 (Btw , please excuse me if the Dialogues are not exactly Correct as i have not seen this scene for quite sometime ) 😊
and then our Damzie gets slightly Exasperated and says " Ab Tum Phir se woh Ladka- Ladki wali Baat mat Shuru Karo " and tries to Walk off........ but then suddenly he puts out his hand and Grabs hold of her wrist, not letting her go....... and the Look in his eyes !! Ufffff....... Totally Heart Melting stuff !! ❤️😍
And although we Absolutely Loooove this scene and their Completely Adorable " Aap or Tum " exchange in this scene ............... but it is here that Inspired by our JIIP Mantra, my Very Meagre Imagination kicked in and I just had this idea of Slightly Tweaking this scene a bit , just a little bit !! 
😊 So here goes :
Prithvi could not believe that the Gods had been so KIND to him !! This was nothing short of a MIRACLE....... Damini Gujral had not only Agreed to marry him , but had said that she LIKED him........ The Woman who had Bewitched his Heart from almost the first moment he saw her......This MOST BEAUTIFUL Woman in the whole world........His Arrogant , Stubborn , Short tempered BOSS ........ but whom he LOVED soooo Completly Loved with all his Heart and Soul ........ was soon going to be his WIFE !! ...... He just had to be the Most Fortunate Man in the whole Wide World , definitely the Luckiest Man alive !!
And now She was walking away from him ........ but he could not just let her go away ....... and before he even knew what he was doing , his Hand had Instinctively gone out and Grabbed her Wrist , stoppping her !! preventing her !! not wanting her to Go away !!
Damini turned around Slowly and looked at him .......... at his Hand holding her Wrist.......... Strange Tingling Sensations were travelling up from her wrist and spreading ........ his Touch had always had this Unsettling Efffect on her right from th beginning !! which she had initially tried to Ignore and then Suppress !!
And the way He was LOOKING at her.......... as if his iNTENSE Gaze would just Completly Melt her insides like Wax......... HIS EYES had always had this Strange Power to melt her with his Look .......... His Eyes so Piercing that they could Look right through to her Soul............ and now he was Gazing at her with those Soulful Eyes of his , Eyes that were Twinkling with Joy , full of a Strange Light.......the Light of Happiness and something else too .......... as she looked at him, she found herself being Irrresistibly drawn towards him ....... she could not Look away as if HYPNOTISED !!
She was Looking at him with those Deep , Doe like Beautiful Eyes of her........ and He did not know from where he got the Courage ........... it was as if he was under a SPELL , he was in a DAZE.......... but he was slowly Drawing her towards himself , Pulling her Closer ......... and suddenly he heard himself say " Aaapko Kya Acchhhaa Lagtaa Hai........ ?? Aaaap ya Tum ?? "
Damini did not know what was happening , it was as if there were only the two of them in the whole world ....... as if they were under some kind of a Magical Spell .......... in a Strange and Enchanted World of their own !! and he was slowly Pulling her Close ........ her Heart beat had suddenly started Soaring and she was barely Breathing when she heard him say something in that Deliciously Molten Voice of his .......... as if from somewhere far away ........ asking her a question !!
She did not know what to say ....... " Err..... Kyaa..... Tum Kya Keh Rahe Ho ?? " she Mumbled and Fumbled !!
On seeing the Usual Ohh Soo Confident Damini Gujral mumbling and Fumbling ....... Being so Unsettled , So Unsure of herself........ maybe for the first time in her life .......... he could not Prevent a small Smile from stealing on his Face !! Suddenly Prithvi felt his Usual Confident self again !!
" Main Aaap Ko Kyaa Kahoon ?? Aaap ya Tum ?? " He decide to Prolong his Dearest Boss's Discomfort a little bit !! 😛😃
He was looking at her with a Twinkle in his eyes and a seriously Killer Smile was playing on his face as he continued to pull her Closer to himself ....... and he was now Dangerously Close to her......... His Closeness was playing Havoc with her Senses , but Damini was as if caught in a Snare ......... Helpless to do anything except utter " Ummm ...... Woh ..... Kyaa....... ?? "
Her Proximity was playing Dangerous games with his Heart too and he was also unable to think straight ......... Without realising what he was doing , he had put his hand around her Waist and pulled her close, forcing her to look straight into his eyes ........... and as he looked into her Deep as two Pools of Chrystal clear water, Eyes , he found himself saying " Agar Main Aaap Ko Aaap Kehtaa hoon to kyaa yeh Hamesha Thoda Employer - Employee jaisaa Nahin Lagega ....... ?? "
and then with their two Hearts overflowing with the Deep Unsaid Love that they shared .........as his hand moved to touch her Beautiful Silken hair and as he gently Caressed the side of her Face , he mutterred " or Agar main Aaapko Tum Kehtaa hoon to Aaisa lagega Jaise Tum meri Damini ho......... "
So that is it !!
Pheww........ Ohhhh BOY !! this is TOUGH !!
Hats off to all you folks who write all these Beautiful FFs and OSs !!
This was my Itsy - Bitsy attempt and i know it is really Lame and SUCKS majorly !! and my only defence is that it was my Very First ( and probably Last ) attempt...........
Frankly never thought i would do this , BUT Uffff PRIDA ......... " Maine Tere Pyaar Mein Kyaa Kyaa na Kiyaaaa........... ?? " 😊😊
Love
Amiya
Edited by petunia121 - 14 years ago
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