PriDa FF: Fatal Covetion UPD Pt. 16 pg 63 05.05.12

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

wow
u have penned it brilliantly
each little detail the discription...each feeling ....each emotion...ahh.....it was just awesome....

As for Naina personallyi have no corner for her (Typical pridaholic)😆
poor pri...feel for him

And loved thr Father-Daughter lines

great going pal
keep rocking👏

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amiya121

@amiya121

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Mahammmm !!

What a Beginning ? Absolutely SCINTILLATING !! 👏👏

Your Powers of Expression of Emotions !! the Beautiful details of their Feelings !! the Creation of the Atmosphere ........... I could really imagine and feel the rains lashing outside my Window !!

Simply Loved your lines about " Because his existence was Conjoined with someone else and his Destiny had been sealed .............. " Beautiful !! ⭐️⭐️

And then they meet in that downpour !! Woohooo !!

But he has a Wife and Child !! 😔 This is going to be Soooo Painfulllll !! 😭

Hoping that you later on proceed as per the suggestion offered b/w the lines by Mazzy !! 😆

A Fantastic First Chapter !!

Amiya

@ Panna : Lovely post and Excellent questions !! Just the kind of questions that are ravaging my mind too after this Shocking piece !!

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zain_aliya

@zain_aliya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Maham...... frm where shall i start...

strong n mature story line, so minutest details n descriptions of d scene, excellent depection of emotions, beautifully penned....

it was so typical of U....

m loving three of dm.... bt PriDa r alwz special...lets c where u take dm nw....

cm up wid d nxt part soon....

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Maham!!!! Absolutely loved it dear!!! OMG the way u write..i get transported into this whole different world..seriously, ur descriptions are excellent👏...Ahh poor Naina, loved how u described her story and her longing for her husband😳 !!! Also loved the whole descriptions of the rains and all, could picture it all!! and then finally the best part PriDa!! Ahhh loved the way u showed them meet!!! Waiting eagerly for more, also want to know about this letter..hmm kind of reminds me of Dear John, but i know this story is gonna be filled of twists and turns!!! cant wait!! update soon!!! excellent job Maham!!!🤗

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Mrunal

@Mru_bee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

OMGGGGGG.. Maham..

wat is this FF??????????? PriDa separated and Pri married and has a child!!!!!!!!!

yeh kya ho raha hey?? haila.. just coz I cant stay away from ur wonderful writings and PriDa... U are giving me this FULL ON angst??????

U are one biggg nutcase.. Maham.. U love PriDa so much and yet can write such a FF for them..

but then I am one even bigger nutcase.. so I want you to continue doing it.. so that I can enjoy ur fantastic writings and still rag you for the angst.. which I can see it coming up biggg time...

Continue soon,

-- Mru

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Khwahish

@Khwahish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

hey maham !!!

a very beautifully written piece...cud almost feel the prithvi's pain....and although i am an ardent prida fan ...cud not help feeling bad for naina....so pri and damz meet after 8 long year ..curious to know why nd how they seperated in the first place.....and wot is in that letter ......

w8ng fr nxt part

--khwahish😊

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Darakhshan

@dikkoO

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

seems really diff nd interesting .. add me to ur pm list dear .. =]

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Interesting FF! Do continue soon...

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totalweirdo

@totalweirdo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

hi aapi ..

this sounds really interesting ...

do add me in the pm list ...

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maham

@...Maham...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

@Rucha: Glad you liked the part and that things are beginning to make more sense for you all... as for making up for the time apart.. lets see.. 😉

@Kanchan: Yeah PriDa are PriDa... I assure you I'm very much a PriDaholic.. 😆 Glad you liked the update..😊

@Maz: Thanks.. Glad you liked the description surrounding there meeting. There with you about Naina pal.. you have no idea how hard it is to actually write all this stuff.. Hate PriDa at times.. 😆😆

@Skorpion: Thank you.. and oh yeah 8 years were there in KKHH too.. 😆 will try to provide a satisfactory answer to all those questions.. seems like quite a task right now..

@Rads: Glad you liked the update.. You'll get to see the flashbacks in the next update.. 😊

@angullgrl91: Thank you!

@Keva: Thank you Glad you liked it from a reading POV. Thank you once agian.. and nice to know you feel for Naina too.. will try to update ASAP.

@Sia: Thanks alot pal.. no heart for Naina.. ouch.. 😆 thanks once again!

@Baz: thanks.. will try to update soon!

@Amiya: Thank you.. and what have i told you about flooring me with praise..? Er glad you liked the whole creation of the atmosphere.. and those lines as well. and yes this is going to be painful..

Glad you liked the update so much! thanks for commenting!

@cutiepie_1987: Hey there pal.. glad you liked it all... and yes PriDa are special.. and they always will be.. will try to update soon..

@Fati: Thanks glad you liked the descriptions.. Glad you liked all that... point @Dear John but this is much too different.. will try to update soon.. thanks once again!

@Mru: Heyyyyyyy! you made it here! Er yes this isnt your regular fic.. sorry about that.. Im a bit towards the sadistic edge you see.. 😆

Sincerely sorry that I'm forcing you to read this.. but you know i love you.. 😛 and yeah i am one hell of a nut case.. having a whole range of personal dilemmas while writing this thing..

Love you for putting up with this pal... and yes there is lots of angst around the corner.

@Khwahish: thanks.. nice to know you feel bad for Naina too.. will try to answer those questions in the next update!

@Darakhshan: thanks.. will definitely add you!

@*angel94*: Thanks.. will try continue soon!

@Ifrah: thanks...will surely add you!