New SS! A Journey Of A Lifetime Ch.3 Pg. 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey!😃

Very well written! 👏Enjoyed reading it and i am looking forward to what happens next!

Do add me to the PM list and continue soon!👍🏼




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Edited by Dark_Star - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!!!....luvly beginning yaar..........
can't wait 2 know wats gonna happen next.......do pm m d next time u update,,,,,,,,,,,,,
awsum.........👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice prologue naina
looking forward to next update
continue soon
and do add me to pm list.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey naina !!! 😃

really nice start !! keep it up buddy !! 👍🏼

and do add me in the pn list !! 😳

------Ifrah 😊
Edited by bfolnmdj - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please add me to the list. Love the prologue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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naina.. continue soon and definitely PM me..
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Chapter 1:

Liberty International Airport:

"Ma'am, we're here" stated the taxi driver as the car came to a halt in front of their terminal. Damini quickly paid the taxi driver while her sisters began to unload their luggage and place it on the carts. "Hurry up you guys. We're running so late. Gosh, the line is going to be so long" whined Damini.

"Di. Calm down. We won't miss any flight of ours" exclaimed Roshni, as she pushed her cart into the line.

Crassssssh! Suddenly, another cart bumped right into hers, pushing her and all her luggage to the ground. Not looking up, Roshni began screaming "Hey you. Can't you watch where you are going? Just running into any beautiful girl trying to make a pass at her. Oh god. My makeup must be so ruined. Di!! What am I supposed to do now?"

"Oh god ma'am. I'm so sorry," apologized Varun, as he held out his hand to help the lady up. However, Roshni royally ignored him, refusing to even acknowledge the man who was sweetly saying sorry. "Humph" she muttered to herself, "just push me and say sorry and walk away. Now I have to get ready all over again. All that time wasted. Ugh."

Before she could lash out at Varun again though, Avni came rushing over, after hearing her younger sister screaming for her. She held out her hand, which Roshni instantaneously accepted. But, when Varun began to repeat his apologies, Roshni turned away with a huff, telling her sister that she would run to the bathroom. She walked away without ever even seeing the face of the man who had caused her distress.

As Varun stood in the middle of the airport, just looking confused at what had transpired between him and this lady, Avni held out her hand and with a soft smile, said "I'm sorry about my sister's outburst. I'm sure she was at fault too but she can be such a kid sometimes." Softly laughing, she began to pick up Roshni's entire luggage that was sprawled on the ground.

"Do you need any help with that, Ma'am?" questioned Varun, who was the kind of person who was always eager to help others. In his mind though, he was just thinking of how different these two sisters seemed to be, with one bursting out like a little kid while the other had such a soft spoken nature.

"I would really appreciate your help. But, please, don't call me Ma'am. I'm not that old yet. I'm Avni. You?"

"Haha. Varun. Varun Saxena." He replied, helping the lady with her bags. "You heading to India too?"

"Yes. We should get in line quickly, otherwise, my sister will start having panic attacks, which I for one, DON'T want to deal with," she exclaimed rolling her eyes to convey her frustration.

"Yeah, you're right. I have an older brother who's already probably waiting to chop me to pieces because I'm so late" responded Varun, loading the last of Roshni's baggage back onto the cart.

As the two then began to proceed towards the check in line, with all of their baggage in tow, someone else popped up. "Varun. Won't you introduce me to this beautiful lady you're talking to?" he questioned, a flirty smile on his face.

Precap: Sameer and Avni meet each other as do Prithvi and Damini. Will sparks fly or will it be World War III?


so guys, how was it? Please do comment and do press the like button!
Edited by naina.patel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow superb plz add me to the pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very brilliantly put dear

hope to see Sparks flying
well done👏
lookin fwd for the next update
keep it up

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i hope prida r good in this ff and don't fight 🤣

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