New FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta.updt 8#page 21 - Page 7

For ur ff
Its jus superb

Jus super cool ji!!
M waiting eagerly for more parts

@muniza,nidiz,luv07prida:thanks for replying guys.
@rachel:yeah me too missed lui..so brought him u...there is more
@hira:sure yaar...defoo will update soon....thanks for liking it.

ok guys as i promised savnians and varnians their treat soon....i came up with this.hope you enjoyed it.now shoot.........

Prithvi is at his Uncle Nehru Motwani's house. They are talking over tea on the terrace.

Nehru said, "Ok ghullu beta, as you asked me I recommended you as Asst.Manager at Gujral Enterprise using all my contacts. You can join tomorrow"

Prithvi said, "Thanks chacha. It means a lot to me"

Nehru said grimly, "I know you are dying with vengeance but it is too dangerous son…. that Hingorani is 10 folds more powerful now"

Prithvi said seriously, "I am prepared chacha, I have chosen this path, I know what I am doing and I take back only what is rightfully mine"

Nehru slightly smiled and said, "You would be pleased to know….Damini turned to a beautiful lady and also she has brains of a shark and guts equal to a man. She is the backbone of Gujral Empire and for Hingorani too".

Prithvi replied thinking, "hmmmm. Damini is my first target, I will gain her before I break down Hingorani ".

Nehru said, "That is not easy ghullu. Don't underestimate Damini".

Prithvi replied hastily, "No chacha no, I am not underestimating her. I know I will win her, she got to be mine. Sirf and sirf mine…. because she is My Destiny….My Wife".

Damini and Goldie are travelling in car. Goldie is chatting non-stoppedly while Damini looked uninterested.

Goldie looked at Damini and said, "Ohoooo forget it damz!!It is just a coincidence that guy is there when you said it, don't be soo disturbed by it".

Damini said sadly, "No Goldie….you should have seen it, the way he looked at me….Urghhh….no man ever looked at me like that"

Goldie replied, "of course, he might have thought you are crazy. See no guy will be prepared when a girl comes and shouts I love you on his face early in the morning. right??"

Damini looked still disturbed and Goldie trying to cheer her up said, "Anyways I would love to see the way you propose. It is easy to say when none is around. I challenge you to say to someone specific"

Damini looked agitated and said, "of course I can. I am not coward like you"

Goldie insisted, "Then prove it"

Damini said, "Fine. Who should I say it??"

Goldie teased saying, "your choice"

Just then the car stopped at red light. Damini brought down the window glass and called out to the guy on the motorcycle next, "hey, excuse me, I LOVE YOUuuuuu"

The guy removed his helmet and Damini is flabbergasted, it is….it is the same guy she saw in the morning!!Her mouth opened wide in shock. The signal turned green and the car went away.

Prithvi thought, "my god….what a heck girl she is??Shouting things like that every time!!She must be completely insane huhhhh". He drove away on his bike.

Whether it is the sunlight sparkling the room through the windows or the white drapes artistically surrounding the figure…. it looked as if a white angel is standing in the midst of blossom of clouds. It is mildly blurring his vision too. He moved his arms to shield his eyes from such brightness.

At last, he saw the girl. She is facing her back to him.

Avni is struggling with the threads of the lehenga top. She is cursing to herself, "huhhhh, how much more time will this Roshni take!!"

Sameer smirking, slowly walked towards her, rubbing his hands and thought, "Ok now I should dazzle this village-belle enough that she cries in terror. Gosh….she looks awesome from the back!!"

He reached her, pulled her towards him, hugged her from back tightly and kissed her on shoulder….then suddenly, for the first time in his life, he felt mad rush of shock waves gripping his nerves….an unusual feeling….taken aback, he slightly loosened his grip….

Avni is stunned cold as ice, she could barely speak and she turned front….he saw her face then….the most beautiful thing he had ever seen….he is feeling nauseated with ecstasy….his insides are doing a Congo….her eyes are blazing red, her lips are trembling and ....BANGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG….she slapped him hard with full force.

Sameer experienced a block out of mind, some strange rhythm is ringing in his ears, everything is revolving 360 degrees and it finally hit him…he knew it….he knew it….Sameer Gujral is in L.O.V.E.

Varun reached the upstairs room and went inside.

Roshni is struggling to reach the duppatta on top of the cupboard, she is standing on a stool….gotcha…she at last got it but oooops….she slipped from the stool and about to fall when someone caught her in their arms. Frightened she closed her eyes….slowly she felt the warmness of the hands that saved her….she opened her eyes and looked into his....he looked like the prince charming from the fairy tale that she always dreamed about. Both have an un-ending eyelock. The white duppatta in slow motion fell on both of them.

Suddenly, a loud noise from downstairs brought them back from their trance. He very caringly made her stand up and is about to say something but she ran away giggling shyly to herself. Varun just looked after her amazed then he shook his head and thought, "OMG what happened to me??.... Hope Sameer is successful downstairs" He walked down.

Sameer came out of the room walking unfocussed, looking dreamy-like. Varun looked confused. Sameer reached Varun, grabbed his arms and kissed him on both cheeks.

Varun startled shrieked aloud, "yukkkkkkkkkkkk SAMEERRRRRR what is this man???"

Sameer smiled like a drunk and said still looking dreamy, pointing his finger to his heart, "it is the thunderbolt dude…it hit me….it hit me right here". He walked on upstairs like some ghost out from a horror movie….floating on....still saying, "the thunderbolt…it hit me…it hit me…it hit me".

Varun is utterly bewildered by his friend's strange behavior thought, "ohhhhhhhhhh no…. I am sensing something bad here……….we got to go back as soon as possible".

(Intelligent Varun though is not successful in returning back but will find out that his life is completely screwed by Sameer the next morning)

Omg wat a savni meet how beautiful
But slap oh ho bechare samy ka gaal

Varni awesome start ji

All in all a lovely ff wid a beautiful and dreamy update

U rock carie
Keep up the gud work

Excellent work Carie...the savni encounter was awesome😊

CARIE!!!!!!!!! WHAT A CHAPPY!!!

At first I thought it was all cliched and all you know the top strings and the boy getting the strings of the top and tying the strings of the heart along with it. But then he went, grabbed her, KISSED HER! OMG! Carie! You beat me at writing SaVni scenes! Jahan panah! Tussi great ho! Tohfa qabool karo!!

The slap forced my jaw to drop! Way to go Avni! Dil jeet liya!

VaRni was cliched, PriDa was hilarious. And then Sameer totally falling in love was just so KISS-ABLE! The lightening hit him big time! Oh please! Make SaVni like it was shown in the promos! Means he has to do "setting". Like 4 different looks and one poor Avni! HAI RABBA!!

carie yaar read all your parts......love it....u made Pri-Avi nd Rosh bro-sis.....that's an awesome idea........Sammy was sameer in full avatar!!!!.....Sammy nd Varun as buddies were even more fun!.....Prida ka I luv u was really funny..Poor Damz 😆.....Oh i love how u switched the charcters!

OMG Carie.. Fabolous its just faboulous.... I really really Liked it... heck no LOVED IT.... Your Savni scene was Bloody Brilliant... I know you are a huge Savni fan.. But pls do some justice to Prida love scenes too yaar... pls pls pls