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skorpion

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Achumen,

messa like ur way of writing.
esp wen da use of the original lines like
*Prithvi thinkering - 'Mere teeno beton ki shaadi ek hi mandap me hogi' he recollected ma's words.
OR how Sameer would always retort back 'I don't know abt Prithvi Bhaiya, but I would be the first one to get married'. To which ma would roll her eyes.
OR Damini thinkering - Please let him not start the ladkiyon wala kaam again' Oh God. *
were woven so EFFECTIVELY, in ur post to make it a smooth reading flow.👍🏼

do weave more PriDa magic as life goes on'
Skorpion

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snehakapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: achumen

Thanks Sneha, glad you liked it. Why don't you join to write a part too ?

hey achumen u mst be kiddin me right????? i hve never written nthng.....nd dnt wanna dissappoint readers f dis ff.......u guys r too gud nd i dnt wanna spoil it........😆😆😆

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Archna

@achumen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

@Skorpion - thanks a ton.

Love your sigy - updated in another post too.

Too good - the latest yahoo messenger list is 👍🏼

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Archna

@achumen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Hey Sneha.....just give it a try...

U have to jump into the pool.....😃

Just try .....seriously

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Nidoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

@ Mru - 1. Sorry for replying late 2. Why did you EVER think it was sub-standard? 3. It was awesomeeeeeeeee!!!! 👏 👏... You're gonna write more now 😃.. I'll make sure of that [):}] 😆...

@ Achu - You're welcome 🤗... Thanks for inviting everyone in 😃...

@ Sneha - It doesnt matter if you haven't written before 😊.. There's always a first time 😃...

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maham

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

loved all the scenes guys great work!! would love to contribute but a bit busy writin my own FF..!! loved it when Pri hugged damz unknowingly.. the cupboard scene was awesome as well and so is the latest one...haiii he kissed her shoulder.. * Of to PriDa heaven*

Maham

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snehakapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

@achume nd nature..........thnx fr all d encouraement guys.....ill surely gve it a try nw.....

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Ekta

@Eksie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Sorry for the late reply guys ... have been too busy off late

@ Nids - Fab beginning!! Loved it!! It was so beautiful how he hugged her .. awww! And also .. the part of him talking to a sleeping Avni .. woww!

@ Achu - That was fantastic!! Wish we have such 'gira' hua scenes more often .. where Damini keeps falling and Prithvi always ready to catch her!! 😳 Loved everytime that used to happen .. 😳

@ Mru - Awesome girl!! And you re-read your part with a frown!! 😕 Read it again .. hamari nazron se .. and you will know what a gem it is!

Fab start guys 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Maz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Mru that was awesome!!...brilliant girl...i too found it quite nice the last bit!...imagine PriDa/Gaucha doing it😍..you will never frown at what you wrote then!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

@ nidz : a fab idea abt joint prida FF dear !!👍🏼👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 n dat was a perfect start swty ... esp da follwng lines were FAB n yaaaaaaaaa Xtremely cute !! 😳

Damini: I didn't know the strong and sturdy Prithvi Saxena sleeps like a baby 😳'

Suddenly she noticed his hand across her waist and back, holding her tightly to him. He had just given her , her first hug after marriage, that too unknowingly. Damini blushed and nestled deeper in his arms.

@ achu : haiiiiiii... damz falln n pri catchn.. i can nvr evr get tired of dat !!!! ma most fav scne evr.. i jus keep waitn wen she is gonna fall coz i knw.. she wil nvr reach da ground .. nly a pair of firm strudy arms !! 😍☺️.. Lovely part swty.... ⭐️ ⭐️

@ Mru : swty.. u r hidden bundle of talent thr !! n stil u keep sayn..u cant write ??!!😲 😲 😲 LIAR !!😆.. U made me blush pakka wth dat last scene !! ☺️ ☺️☺️... KUDOS !! 👏

Luv niki😊

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 15 years ago

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