Love the PriDa way |Joint FF|- Index #3, Scene4 #9 - Page 5

Awesome scene Achu!!! Liked it a lot!! Really like ur style alot!! Awww and Prithvi our MCA comes to the rescue 😉!! Loving the story guys, waiting to see what's in store next!!

achu tiotally loved it it was awesome so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Scene #3

"Bhaiyya, I... you .. said.." Prithvi roared at him "Sameer, you meet me at the hospital in 20 minutes. Don't dare to be late or else ...."

Before Sameer could reply, Prithvi hung up and started the car. He felt as if his head would explode from anger.What was he really angry at, he couldn't explain. Was it Sameer's stupid actions, his father's death, his mom's condition or was he really angry at the way he acted around Damini.

Damini, Ah, the name stirred so many feelings. His tense brow eased up a bit. He smiled at the way Damini looked with her eyes closed in his arms. He could have spent hours looking at her face. Suddenly, a car cut in front of his car. Prithvi jolted out his thoughts, and swore under his breath " Must a woman driver for sure". By this time, he was close to the hospital and Prithvi now concentrated his thoughts on his errant brother and how he must be convinced to marry Avni.

Damini was clearing up the things on the floor and putting them back in the boxes. "What should I do with this man!!", she groaned to herself. "Anytime we get close to each other, something always messes things up". She couldn't remember a time when he was completely at ease with her. She knew his mom's health was his main concern. She couldn't be angry with him for that. After all, her mama too was her priority. She decided that she would have to come up with something, which would ease his pain as well as hers. She knew that after the drama at her wedding and Avni's reaction, she needed to be with her dear husband.

"What should she do so that they could spend a few blissful hours with each other," Absentmindedly, she thought while packing the last things. "What would he and I both enjoy? Riding toofan together? Maybe or else going out to eat and then a dance together?" She blushed at the memory of that dance. How he had pulled her close, and stared intently into her eyes. She let out a wistful sigh. She knew that might not be possible right now. Her hands touched a book. Something in the title made her eyes sparkle. "That's it. I know now what to do. Prithvi darling, I hope you like it", she said to herself laughing.

At the hospital, Prithvi had a big long hard talk with Sameer. Sameer had no choice but to listen to his big brother. He always had. They agreed that Sameer would go to Ilaji tomorrow and apologize. He would have to marry Avni again legally this time.Prithvi spent a good part of the day at the hospital, first reasoning with Sameer and then meeting with the doctor for an update of his mom's health. He felt grateful; when the doctor assured him that the new medication was working wonders with her health.

Prithvi was very tired by the time he reached the Gujral Mansion. It was already late and dark, mostly due to the beastly Mumbai traffic. He first checked Avni's condition. Seeing her peacefully sleeping in her room, Prithvi was a little relieved. "Everything would be fine tomorrow, Sis", he said softly to her sleeping figure. Everything was serene at the Mansion. Considering the chaos of yesterday, Prithvi was thankful for the silence. Now his thoughts flew to Damini, his Damini. He knew that he would have to break her heart again. He felt sick at just the thought of it. He hoped, really hoped that she was asleep. With trepidation, he opened the door to their room. He was shocked at what he saw.

There was a small table for two in the room. Beautiful tulips in a dainty crystal vase sat smiling at him. Food and wine was beautifully arranged on the table. Lovely Red candles lit up the whole scene. A tiny smile tugged at his lips. He couldn't believe his eyes. "Did Damini set this up?" He reached and touched the flowers. They were so soft, just like his Damini. What did he do to deserve such a wife, he thought. He spots a book on the mantle. He picks up and almost laughs aloud when he sees the title "The Way to your Man's heart".

Just then, a familiar sweet scent filled up his senses. He turned around and saw her. She was a vision of loveliness. Damini was dressed in a beautiful red saree, with a shimmering halter-top blouse. Her hair was loose and framing her face. She was smiling. All the tiredness, sadness, tension that Prithvi felt throughout the day suddenly vanished. He kept on staring at her unabashedly. She was his, after all. Seeing Prithvi stare at her, Damini laughed. "Prithvi, I was waiting for you. I have never cooked before. I hope you like it." and She continued teasing " Even if it tastes like mud".

Prithvi couldn't help but laugh at that. "My Damini, I will always love what you do",.. She takes a step forward towards him. Prithvi catches Damini by her waist and brings her closer. Being so close to him, Damini feels her cheeks going red. She looks up to him trying to meet his gaze. Holding her tightly by her waist, Prithvi's other hand finds its way to her hair. All kinds of thoughts swirl in his mind. "Is this right, Prithvi? Aren't you deceiving Damini? How will you explain your lies to her when she finds out? " Prithvi can't help but stare at Damini's face. "She is mine, isn't she? She loves me and I love her. Nothing else can be more important than this love I feel"

With this thought, Prithvi kisses her bare shoulder tenderly and buries his head in her hair. " Everything else can wait... Damini is my first priority now ". Damini smiles as if he said it out aloud and gives in to his kisses.

-- Mru

( Hope you guyz like it 😃)

hey mru tht ws superb......👏 it actually made me blush a lil......c jst d thught f it is sooooooooo😳

Originally posted by: snehakapoor

hey mru tht ws superb......👏 it actually made me blush a lil......c jst d thught f it is sooooooooo😳

Thanks, Sneha 😳
ehhhh, you actually blushed a little??.. i thought i have the worst style of writing nething romantic !!!..at least i made one blush ..hahahaha...

-- Mru

Hey Mru, that was superb.

Originally posted by: achumen

Hey Mru, that was superb.

You had me blushing too - So thats scores increased 😃

Loved - Nothing is more imp than Damini - wow

And u were shying away from writing.

Awesome - Just awesome.....

Thanks, achu...😳.. .tum bhi na.. kuch bhi... blush... i read it a few times b4 posting, didn't blush a bit ..hahaha
in fact i was frowning at the random post..hahaha

-- Mru

Frowning at the last part - guess you not focusing..

Thanks Sneha, glad you liked it. Why don't you join to write a part too ?

Thanks Rach - trying your hand in something Prida serious ?

Thanks Maz. You should join - pl.

Thanks Mru - falling Damz....

Thanks Nids - Thanks a lot - superb idea.

Fatima, thanks a ton. Pl join to get the story going.

Thanks Soni, remember what I said pl.