~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 30

Krupsie

sistu - ohk..but i can write a scene of mah own right?!

ur welcome..well here it is -

" Why u so obsessed with me?..boy I wanna know! " She kept singing and Prithvi looked at her from behind. Slowly, he came and stood right behind her and whispered in her ear " because ure so hot.."

She turned back with a jerk and started into the most handsome eyes she had ever seen. They were starting back at her with love.

" tum yahan?"

" apne hone waali biwi ke kamre main nahi aa sakta?" he asked in a flirting mood.

" nahi..uske permission ke bina nahi aa sakte" she said joking.

" accha.." he said taking hold of her waist and bringing his face close to hers. " ab to permission milegi na" he breathed into her lips.

" haan" she blushed.

" that's like my girl" he said and planted a short but passionate kiss on her lip.

" so ab batao, meri dulhan kya pehanne waali hai kal?" he asked sweetly.

" secret hai" she played with him.

" mere liye bhi?" he asked with a pout.

" sirf tumhare liye" she said with a naughty expression.

He sighed " fine..lekhin kal to dekh lunga.."

" yeah u will" she winked.

Then she pushed him onto the bed. He gave her a puzzled look.

cute and really naughty updates.. keep it up.. really sweet and lovely fictions

@ Achu, thanks a million, friend..Thank you for those kind words..

LOVED what you said about the rustic husband, the polished wife( Chandana got it absolutely right, BTW😊), and the battle of wits..Yes, it'll be back to awesome again after the initial pain..Just a lil wait, just a lil..*smiles*

@ Nisha..Many thanks, Nish..Glad I could portray their emotions somehow..

Beautifully said @ what you wrote about them..Exactly, I don't think Damini can undo the love she feels for Prithvi, but she'll be too hurt and angry to realize or acknowledge that, and like you say, she'll want to protect herself by the shield of her anger..It's understandable..Awww..

@ Diya..Thanks a billion, friend..Thank you so much for being so sweet..Awww @ having a lump in your throat..I feel stupid admitting this, but while writing that thing I felt their heartache too, especially Damini's, and it was a sad, sad thing..

@ Sistu..Thanks, friend..Glad you could feel the emotions of PriDa while reading that..


Diya, just read both of your scenes..Wonderful job, again..Felt so much for PriDa while reading the first one, it brought out their angst and pain really well. Great job..

The second one was all things cute..Awwwww, Damini was so cute, just like a child..LOVED how Prithvi made her feel better with chocolates..Awww, sweetness!! Damini saying that 'stable' line to him cracked me up..😆 Apt!

Keep up the good work, babe..

@DIYU.....fantastic scenes girl!!!! The first one broke my heart......as the thought of damz finding about Prithvi always does....I esp loved the shower part...where Prithvi realises that he pained the girl who he loves so much and relating the emptiness of her eyes to his mom's ....excellent!!

Aish

Sarah

Honey

Pri as a father to be would be a man treading a fine line cos Damz+hormones=Tantrums+Chaos! Poor man will have to be really careful... 😆

@sarah: wow...i absolutely love the way you bring out the emotions...terrific writing!...you understand these characters soo well..i'm amazed!!...heck i don't think even the cvs think about these characters in such depth!...brilliant sarah!👏 i hope that CS and GK portray similar emotions equally well on screen when the truth is revealed!

@diya: awesome scenes babe!👍🏼..the first was totally wow..
second sooo cute i like pregnant damz she sounds so much fun than actual pregnant avni in the show!😛
@aish: short and sweet me liked! 😊