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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: litika

its really good..plz continue with next part soon... 😊



Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

aweosme start........ 👏



Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Ok please change somethings!!!!

Sagar ki opposite Ganga ko karo!!!Sagar ki behen Ganga odd lagta hai!!!Tum chaho toh Nandini ko Abhimanyu ki wife bana do!!!!

Like, I told you i'll think about it! Also it doesn't matter who is paired up with who or their name cause its important, who plays their role anyways i'll keep you request in mind...

Thank you, 😛

Kashish

Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish

Originally posted by: prerna1

its too good plz continue and update soon........

Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

How can Sumit be married!!!If he is then how come he is admitted to the academy!!!Naina ka samaj mein aata hai because no one knows about her marriage!!!!

By the Yudi's name is Yadhuvansh Sahani!!!

About Sumit... well you will have to wait and find out 😉 also thank you, for correcting me... about Yudi...

Kashish

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Yaar story line acchi hai.
Pae ek baat batao ki ek married person ko ARMY ME ENTRY KAISE MIL GAYI JAB KI YE LAW K AGAINST HAI.
To thoda change kar lo baaki cheejen sahi hain.
Cont. soon.

About Sumit... well you will have to wait and find out 😉

Kashish

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow yaar nice story...different one too..please continue soon yaar

Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

The story seems to be interesting😛😛 but even I think that it is against rules to admit married people as cadets in army.
continue soon👏👏

About Sumit... well you will have to wait and find out 😉

Kashish

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

ur story seems to be interesting plzz cont.. soon
i'm waiting for d next part

Thank you, so much 😳 it means a-lot to me....

Kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Before... I post first part, I would like to make few things clear... I know its against to get admission when your married as a cadet... but what if you are related to someone in the army and you know 😉 also second thing Naina's real name is something else and that will be relived later on and also her surname before marriage is Sharma so if I use Sharma than please don't get confused... 😳

Thanks again for understanding me 😛

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Part One

Narrator's Voice… Nobody wants to keep relationship with a desh drohi… but after many years.... (Naina comes and picks up Navin's picture) my death brought my sister-in-law, Naina Singh to KMA (Naina looks at Navin's picture with tears rolling down her cheek)… but the sad part is she has to keep her identity hidden from everyone or else she would have never gotten admission…over here in first place…

Naina was about to leave when Rajveer caught her from behind…and says "you must be a new cadet so what's your name?"

Naina turns around; looking at Rajveer with a smile than says "Naina Singh Shek…" stops right there…

"Naina Singh Shek…" he repeats after her, than says "is ka kya matlab hai?"

"Sir, yeh kaun hai?"

Narrator's voice… Naina always been smart in changing topic… even if it's her friends or her husband, but not in-front of me or her sister Nandani…

Afterwards, the scene, switch to Alekh & Ali in their rooms…where Ali is not getting sleep and Alekh is sitting on the window.

"I never knew that over here power also goes… I thought it only happens at my place" Ali told Alekh

Alekh just stares at Ali than says "I turned of everything because I hate moving things" he told Ali, while Ali just stared at him…

Next day, Naina was the first one to get up and all dress; Ali finishes up his prayers than wakes up Alekh.

Our beauty queen, Pooja gets up and asks for her breakfast & her towel in her sleep mode… Naina just looks at Pooja than says "madman, this isn't your house" Naina told her, Pooja just stares at her in her sleep mode…

Few minutes later, they all are ready for their first drill of the year… with Major Nair…

Narrator's voice… Whenever, I got the chance I would inform Naina about all my trains with all kind of teachers… but Major Nair himself is a good experience… that every cadet will remember him through-out their lives…

At the training ground, Pooja, Sumit and Naina arrived first afterwards all the reminding cadets joined…

"I can't believe it" said by Pooja, "he is sending us out on our first day for a jog" she told Yudi, even Yudi agreed with her

Quarter, pass nine… Naina bumped into Brigadier Chandok; for awhile they stared at one another…

"Cadet, I hope you will prove me wrong?" Brigadier told Naina,

Scene switch to Alekh, Sumit, Huda, and Ali….

"Dude, I can't believe it" Yudi told Sumit,

Alekh looked at them than says, "what you don't believe?"

"I mean, how did you get admission" Yudi looking at Sumit, "over here when you're married?" asked Sumit

Narrator's Voice… How much Sumit tries to avoid… all questions related to his marriage, but ends up getting trapped in them… Only Sumit knows the truth behind his marriage… not even his family or more friends… meaning my sister-in-law too… doesn't know the truth about Sumit and Kumkum's marriage…

Sumit, some how changed the topic or else everyone would have found out about his connection with Major Nair…

Narrator's Voice… How much Sumit tries to avoid thinking about his relationship with Major Nair…but he ends up thinking about him and how he forced him to join the academy to prove himself and also he convinced higher authority… for allowing Sumit to be part of the academy even though he is married… or else Sumit wouldn't have gotten admission over here in first place… And over here at the mess Pooja is trying to get to know Naina, but Naina never opens up to anyone that easily… but also scared if anyone finds out about her marriage with my friend… meaning Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekawat….

"So Naina" said by Pooja "tell me, why did you choose coming to the academy when you could have completed your law education?" Pooja asked her…

"How did you know?' asked by a stun Naina,

"Simple" Pooja told her, "but…how?" Naina asked Pooja again…

Pooja gets up from her seat… walks over to Naina and says "because of the book you are reading instead of going over the notes we just received from Major Nair"

Naina just stared at Pooja… with tears in her eyes; because she always wanted to be a lawyer…

Narrator's Voice… Naina always wanted to be a lawyer… but now she is doing something that she never wanted to do in first place…. But Naina loves me a-lot and she can do anything for me… even if she has to give up what she loves…. Meaning, her education or someone she loved… Naina can do anything for me….

"What's the matter?" Sagar asked Rajveer…

Rajveer looked at Naina's direction before answering Sagar…. Afterwards, he excused himself from there… leaving his friends shocked even Naina…

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Thanks a million for taking few minutes out of your time to read my fan-fiction also Sumit is related to Major Nair and also their is a huge mystery behind Naina's past and that will be relived by someone close to Naina 😉

I hope you guys will like this part and if its boring that i'm sorry... 😛

Kashish

Edited by Sharman-Siya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome yaar......... 👏 👏

i'm loving d mystries sorrounding d chrachters...
its makin it more interesting....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part but Raj aur Naina k bich me koi misunderstanding hai kya aur agar hain to kya jaldi mention karo. 😊
aur Sumit aur Mj Nair relatives hain kaise ...
ur fic is really interesting plz update it fast....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
superb
ud was amazing ab jaldi se next ud de dena plzzzzzz.........
wating for d ud
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
nice ff dear... update soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi!
The update was very good.
thank you
continue soon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good part.
Bechara Sumit agar nahi chahta apni marriage k baare me sab ko batana fir bhi batana pad raha hai use. 😡
Naina bhi Mrs. Shekhawat bolne waali thi apne ko. 😉
Too good.
ud soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 nice intro...Much similar to LRL 😳 ...does RN have some misunderstanding bw them?? 😕 😕

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