'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 18

tooo good...also liked ur work for dis fic........ 👏

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj and Naina on the same bed with Shona in between ............. how sweeettttt!!!!!!! 😳 Kya ek din woh aise hi apne bete ke saath .......... 😳 😳 !!!!!

Shona ........I just love her!!!!

Navin......... he just can't stop teasing Aky!!!!

And yes loved Raj's pipe climbing incident and the feeling of nostalgia in them!!!!

Waise Naina must have loved his coming to her room again!!!!!

Haan Naina jaldi se make Raj smile again!!!!

waiting eagerly for todays update asap with long part.

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i liked the description of the scene in which naina slept in sofa ,it waz super 👏 n also shona in between Raj-Naina is realy super very nice😳


u'r dialogues r realy super dear,n u'r presentation is super,

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2 gud and a complete hatz off 2 u dear 😳

All the best 4 the next update 😊


Aarthi

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PART-16

Naina was reading the paper when Navin opened the door..

Navin-Kahan gayi thi??(with a serious look) 😡

Naina--Bhaii main yahin thi paper lene ayii thi....yeh article dekh rahi thi tabhi darwaza bandh ho gaya hawa mein...aur ab apney khula jab mein bell dalney hi wali thi..

Navin--Kaisa article? 😕

Naina--Bhai RAj ke bareyy mein yeh dekho..(showed him the paper) 😊

Navin--Ohh and he startss reading the paper and goes in... 😊

Naina in her mind---Its still very easy to fool you bhai...hahah.. 😆 😆

Navin was reading the paper when shona came running inside and Raj behind her...

Raj--Shona stop.. 😡

Shona running around the sofa...and Raj behind her..

Shona-No veeruu da I wont give you.. 😆 😆

Raj--Shona quietly give me my phone..

Shona--Nooooo(shona showed it to him but dint give it to him) 😛

SUddenly shona banged into Naina..

Shona--Niaaa keeepppp thiss.... 😊

Shona ran to where her mom was..

Raj--Umm please mera phone dee doo Naina..

Naina-Aisa kya hain iss phone mein jo tum itna ghabra rahe hoon Raj?? 😛

Raj--Naina please mujhe mera phone de doo...please....

Naina-Ummm I ll think about it...thoda inspection kar lo phir dongi... 😉 😉

RAj--Nainaaaaaaaaa please.ee......

Naina--Ummm...

Raj--Naina cockroach.... 😆 😆

Naina--AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🤢 🤢

Raj snatched the phone from her hand...


Naina lept into Raj's arms...hugging him tight...her eyes closedddddd and mouth screaming...........

RAj's heart skipped a beat. 😳 ..He wished to hug her backk with the same intensity but he knew he couldnt firstly coz of the relationship they shared now secondly there were many other people around...Raj just stood there Naina hugging him tight..

Raj-Ahh k..ko..koi co..cockrooachh nahi hain..

Naina opened her eyes...

Naina--Huh...nahi hain...

Raj-Hann maine apna ph...phoo phone lene ke liye ka...kaha tha..

Immediately Naina left his shirt 😳 ...and moved away from him..

(okk i knoe next part is little filmyy ..nevertheless)

Naina's hair got stuck in his button...

Naina was trying to pull it out....

RAj stood there gazing into her eyes..... 😳

Naina kknew he was looking at her....in that tension she couldnt pull out one strand of hair..(kya karein raj ke personality aisee hain) 😳 😳

Raj looked at her trying to pull out the hair.. 😊

Raj--Har cheez ko aaram see aur thoda waqt dekar karna chahiye aisee zald-bazii mein aur itnee zoor see kuch nahi hoga..

Naina dropped her hand..

RAj slowly removed the hair..

Raj--It was just that much..

Naina smiled and went of from there.. 😊

Navin sitting on the dinning table..reading the paper..

Navin--Agar tumhara timepass khatam hua hoo to yahan aa ja raj..

Navin saw raj nd naina were talking something but he couldnt see clearly...from his P.O.V he could just see the two of them...

Raj--Aata hoon..

Navin--You knoe 2-3 din se paper itna boring tha...tumhare bareyy mein koi article hi nahi tha.... 😉

RAj started eating a slice of bread...

Raj--Toh aaj intresting hain kya?

Navin--Hmmm aya hain aaj tere naam se article... 😛

Raj-Kool what does it read...hope all good 😉 ...(Raj said casually munching his bread)

Naina stood in the kitchen heard the conversation..

Naina--Raj tumhare barey mein article aaya hain and your soo chillledd out.... 😕

Raj--Ummm woowwwwwow Navin mere bareyy mein articlee dekhao dekhaoo baba mein bhi dekho.. 😆 😆 😆

Navin burst out laughing.. 😆

Navin-Naina ke liyee yeh sab karne kee koi zarorat nahi hain.. 😊

Naina came with some more stuff to eat...and sat down next to RAj..

Naina--Matlab?? 😕 😕

Navin-BAhut common hain Naina...RAj ke bareyy mein bahut sareey article chapthe hain...pechle do char dino see kuch nahi chapa tha so paper was so boring.. 😆 😆

Naina--Really???

Navin--Yooo bahut hii famouss hain.. 😉 😉

Naina--Kool mein toh ek bahut hee badee admi ki dost nikli....i am so lucky....hey kabhiii mera naam lena apne interviews wagerah mein..

Navin--haan hann isko to koi kaam dandha nahi hain tera naam leta phirega...niana naina naina 😆 😆 😆

Raj--Navin tohh over-exagerate karta hain...ek-do article chappe hongey.. 😳 😳

NAvin chocked on the food he was eating..

NAvin--Ek do?...Raj are you crazy...tumhara dabba to dekhao apne ek-do article.... 😆 😆

Naina--Dabba?? sab sambhal ke rakhte hoon??

Raj--Ummm haan.... 😛

Navin--apne ek-do article.... 😆

Naina--Heyy main to yahan nahi the some day aggar tumhari permisiion ho toh kya mein woh articles dekh sakti hoon?

Raj-Sure... 😳

Naina-Tumhare ek-do article....kaffii modest bhi ho gaye hoon.. 😆

RAj--Ummm what am i supposed to say now?

Navin and NAina laughed...Shona came with Aky there..

Navin--Morning Aky.. 😳

Aky--Morning... 😊

Raj--Abbey salee...tereko bola naaa meri behen ke satth flirt mat kar.. 😛

Navin--RAj kisiko gud morning bulna flirting nahi hota ok...

Raj--Morning AKy...woh flirt hota hain...

Navin--NAhi hota.. 😆

Raj-Hota hain.. 😆

Navin--Nahi 😆

RAj--Haan 😡

Navin--Nahiiiii 😡

Raj--Haan. 😡

Aky--Stoppp ittt,.........

Raj and NAvin started laughing.. 😆 😆

Navin--Raj kal subhe se dekh raha hoon kuch to alag hain...wohh purana Raj wapas dekhiye de raha hain?? 😳 😳 ...chakar kya hain boss?? 😆 😆

Raj--Navin ek baat bata jab mein zyada serious tha too sara din puchta raj problem kya hain?...jab mein thekh hoon toh puchta hain aisa kyun?...akhir tujhee chahiye kya? 😡

Navin--Teri khusi Raj usse bad kar mujhe kkuch nahi chahiye...bas puch raha hoon...shona ke aneyy se pehle too itna khush tha..isliye puucha ki chakkar kya hain?? koi ladkii wadki ka toh phir see chakkar nahi... 😆 😆

Raj--Navinn stop it not in front of di.. 😡

Aky--Abbey bata....kaun hain woh ladki....bata na Raj...maine bhi notice kiya 2 saal se bahut serious phir achanakk itna happy-happy.... 😆 😆

Shona--Haan veerru da....batao.. 😛

Raj--Oyye kya bataoon?? 😃

Shona--Jo mummy puch rahi hain...mummy aap kya puch rahe the?? 😳 😛

All started laughing,,,,shona was also laughing.. 😆

Nia--Kyun hass rahi hoon shona? 😉

SHona--Kyunki sab hass rahe hain.. 😛

Followed by another round of laughter... 😆

Just then neelu and aalekhh come out..

Both highly sleeypy....

Shona--Hii aluuuuuu.. 😛

Aalekhh--gud morning (still in slumber)

Neelu behind him..

Raj--Navin mujhe laga aalekh tere satth tha.. 😆

Navin--Raat koo bhukhar ho gaya neelu ke pass chal gaya.. 😳

Raj--Bhukhar? 😕

Navin--Haan girlfriend bhukhar... 😆 😆

Raj-Hahahahah. 😆 😆 .....aalekh neend aa rahi hain?

Aalekh--Haann..

Navin--Ayegii sarri raat soye kahan hongey.. 😉 😉

Raj and Navin exchanged hi-fi's...but just then Raj realized shona..

Shona--Kyun nahi soyee alu?? 🤢

Raj looked at Navin....an angry glare.... 😡

Navin said sorry...

Raj-Ummm bacha wohh raat ko bahut machar the na...isliyee... 😕

Naina started smiling....and was controlling her laughter... 😃

Naina to herself--wahi hoon....wen ur in a catch situation bahar niklaney ki liyee koi ghatiyyaaaa idea sujtha hain......i love i love my company...hahaha...gawd raj.. 😆

Raj saw her and understood what she was thinking...couldnt help a smile appeared on his face...

Everyone engroosed in eating...raj popped his head in front of naina's...

Raj--Aaj bhiii utna hi bura hoon....koi ghatiyaa excuse banata hoon.. 😳 😳

Naina started laughing...RAj back in postion..

Navin--Nainaa hass kyun rahi hoon??

Raj--Haan Naina kyun has rahi hoon?
😆
Naina--Yuhin..

Navin--Ohh gawd meri behen yuhin hass rahi hain pagal ho gayi hain

Naina--bhaii

Raj--Wasiey mujhe paper do apna article to dekhoon..

Navin passed Raj read it and was smiling..

Naina--by the way congrax for the contract..... 😳

Raj--Thanx.. 😳

Navin--Mera bhi.. 😕

Raj-You knoe congraxx phir se bulega tooh aasman nahi gir jayega... 😆

Shona--Correct aasman girr hi nahi sakta.. 😆

Navin started laughing.. 😆 😆

Navin--congraxxx raj.. 😛

Raj-Thanx... 😳

just then there was a bell...

Shona ran to open it..

shona very sweetly asked the person about who she was and stuff...all others eatingg in the other side from where you cant see the door..

It was Rosy...ROsy walked in a few steps....so that she could see Raj..

Raj--Rossyy hey come in..Navin is here 😉 😉

Rosy looked upsett her eyes full of tears...Raj realized something serious

Raj--Umm main dekhta hoon....

RAj got up from his chair..

He went to rosy...shona back to her mom...

Raj-ROsyy what happened.. 😕

Rosy--R...RAjj...

Tears flowing down.. 😭 😭

Raj--Please tell me kya hua??

Rosy--Boarding se phone aaya tha...rohan ko phir seee attack hua hain....I need to go....3 din ke chuthi chahiye..

Raj--Ohh mann...dunt think about the leave take off for how many ever days you want....I'll manage..

(Raj hugged her..told you they were gud frnds before)

Raj--Its okk he'll be fine....

Rosy--hmm...Will you be able to manage...

Raj--Ofcourse i will....dunt wory about me...ill be fine..

Rosy--You ev got important meetings linedd upp for the next 3 days...ill mail the schedule to you....pleasee be careful..

Raj--Rosy relaxx i'll mange everything..

Raj-Jus wait i'll be back..

Raj went back to the table..

Navin--WAt happened?

Raj--Rohan's not well....another attack....could you just be with her for a minute i'll be back...

Navin went...

Raj looked at Naina...

Raj--I need some money...I dunt have much at home it's all in the office...right now i need to give her some....could you..

Naina stopped him in between ran to her room....brought some money..

Raj was waiting for her....

Aky--I could help...

Raj--No thats fine naina would get it..

Navin and Rosy...

NAvin--Rosyy..all wil be fine...

Rosy clutched to his shirt....she was crying... 😭

Rosy--I am veryy scaredd....

Navin--Dunt worry it will be fineee...he will be fine nothing will happen......

Rosy was crying...
😭 😭 😭
Naina was counting money and coming out of her room she saw navin consoling rosy....

Naina gave the money to Raj..

Raj-Thnxx thnx a lot..
Raj went back to Rosy..

Raj-Rosyy..

She broke from Navin......

Raj--Here is some money..

Rosy--No raj i wont need it..

RAj--Shh...in case of emergencyy otherwise ill take it back baba nyway its lyk ur money onlyyy naina gave me..... 😆 😆 (trying to lighten the situation)

Rosy smiled..

Rosy--Thnxx a lot...

Raj--I aint your boss only haan we are friends remmeber....now take care....and relax..

Rosy--I need one more favour..

Raj--Pleasee tell me.. 😛

Rosy--I am driving to pune...My car is not in good condition...it will run fine in local but long distancee it wont run...soo if you could keep my car and i'll take yours...

Raj--My keys are in my housee come..

Navin--Here take mine (he took out his key from the wall hanger)

Rosy--THnxx NAvin...hers my key...its down in your garage..

Navin-Wont be needed coz i am driving you in my car.. 😉

Rosy--No navin really not required....please i will manage i cant bother you so much..

Navin--SHhh!...i am not your boss i am your friend....i hope...atleas you are my friend..

Rosy--Cmonnn your my friend too...but i can manage..

Navin--I will drivee you......(he said strictly)

Rosy--I really can manage...please dunt bother yourself so much..

Navin--Rosyy stop it pleasee...i am drivng to pune are you coming or not..??

Rosy--I cant change your decision can i?

Navin--Noo...

Raj--I would have driven you....but i have an important meeting today.. 😉

Rosy--please one personn is enough..

Raj-Yeaa yea you woulld prefer Navin to me...your to-be-boyyfriend after all 😉 ...(raj tried to lighten the situation)

Navin--Raj shutt up...itney serious situation mein tumhe mazak sujh raha hain.. 😡 😡

Rosy-Navin he was just trying to make me feel better....relax...

Navin--ok...Ab chalein?

Rosy--Hmm.....waiseyy raj paper padha maine...too kool...way tooo go.... 😛 😛

Raj-Thnx....now you take care... 😉 😉

Navin quickly changed and came..

Raj--Stay in ur limits...meri dost aur secretary hain wooh..

Raj got a punch in his stomach in return...

Raj--Seeyya havee fun....and rosy rohan will be fine....dunt worry.. 😛 😛

Rosy--hope so..

Rosy hugs raj and leaves with navin..

Raj goes back to the table..

Four pair of eyes looking at him....and shona smiling..

Raj--Umm sab mujhe aiseyy kyun dekh rahe hain......

Neelu--Abhi puchna padega kya?...lafda kya hain..navin uske pechhe kahan gaya aur woh rohit kaun hain??

Raj--Rohit??...umm its rohan...

Neelu--Wtever itna perfect lip reading main nahi kar sakti.. 😕 😕

Evryone burst out laughing.. 😆 😆 😆

Raj--Uska bhai hain chota bhai rohann pune mein boarding mein padtha hain...uski tabyat thekh nahi hain.....so she wanted to drive to pune and wanted navins car....navin gave his car with his driving free...gadi loo driver free....haha 😆 😆 ...anyway serious..navin just offered to drive her down to pune..

Aky--Raj are you nuts??Baat toh aiseey kar rahe hoon jaise bazar tak gaya hain....hes driving her to pune (she mimicked him)its punee man....sooo farrr....

Raj--I knoe but humm teeno bahut achey friends hain since college...sooo friends ke liyee kar saktey hain na..

Naina--It looked much more than "just friends" 😳 😳

Raj was amused ..naina talking about navin..

Raj--Tumhara bhai hain woh...

Naina--thanx for reminding 😆 😆 ...duh....bhai hain toh kya pyar karna gunna hain...jus coz woh naina ka bhai hain...

Raj--Umm tum uske barey mein aise kaisey baat kar sakti hoon..

Naina--CMon love isnt a crimee for god sake...love is love man...kisi ko bhi kahin bhi jo sakta hain...

Raj saw the pain in Naina's eyes..

Raj-Ok relax...

Neelu-I think they are seeing each other secretly... 😉 😉

Naina--Me tooo..

Raj-Ahan i dunt think so...If it was that he would have told me..

Naina--Not neccesary bhai thode reserved hain..(naina said seriously)

Raj--No wayy aisa nahi hain...mera best friend hain.....mujhe sab kuch bateyga 😛 ...he has a crush but he hasnt asked her out ....hum unn loggon ko chidhatey rahte hain... 😃 😃

Naina--Kya tumne bhai ko hamesha sab kuch kahan hain?? 🤢 ...kuch bhi nahi chupaya......apni sareey crushes aur affairs girlfriends sab ke barey mein bataya hain?...(naina looked stargith into raj' eyes)

How would he ever tell navin that dude ur sister is my girlfriend...

RAj looked into Naina's eyes...he would have been lostt in them if not for the kick he got on his legg by aalekh..

Raj--Umm mostly sab bataya hain...

Naina---Mostly not evrything right....waise shayad bhai ne bhi kiya hoon..(naina said seriously)

Four people(r-n aalekh nd neelu) understood to what she was referring except Aky...SHe dint connectt like the others did..

Aky--Am I missing on some story....Something which all of you knoe and i dunt...tum sab toh aise ek dusre ko dekh rahe hoon jaise raj ne navin se kuch chupaye hain aur tum sab ko batay hain... 😆 😆

(bang on target aky...) 😆 😆

Raj--Nothingg di....

Aky--Hmm navin see baat karni padegii daal mein kuch kala hain....ek woh hi toh hain mere side par yaa mein ek hi toh hoon uske side par....haha... 😆 😆

Raj--Kahinn mere pyareyy jijaji ko talak de kar rosy ka dil dukha kar navin se shadi to nahi kar baithogi na.... 😆 😆

AKy--Shuuutt upp Raj... 😳 😳

Luckily shona this time was playing with a ball in the hall....

Raj--Uff shona nahi hain thank godddd...

All were laughin.. 😆 😆 😆

Raj--Neelu kya tumm 2 din ke liye free hoon....rosy ka kaam backup karne ke liye..you knoe i will mess up everythin if i plan it out..

Neelu was about to sayy yes sure.....she got a kick in her leg....she looked at aalekh....aalekhh gave her the killing look...and said noooooo

Neelu--Umm i would be more than glad to help but i have an important assignment to complete today and tommorow i have given the day to aalekh...even if he lets me today i am busy...i am so sorry Raj.. 😕

Raj--Umm never mind...

Naina was left but Raj dint have the gutss to ask her to help him..

Aaekh--Raj...(aalekh said with a bigg smilee)

Raj kinda understood his act..

RAj--Hmmm i guess i got some workk....ill leave..

Aalekh--Listen listen...Why dunt you ask naina to help....... 😉 😉

Raj looked at Naina...

Raj--Umm i would have but i guess shes busy too...she isnt joining work coz of that...

AKy--Work?

RAj--Ya she would be joining us.....from next month

AKy--Kool..

Aalekh--Naina awesome mujhe bataya nahi.....congraxx..

Naina--thnx alekh..

Aalekh--Lekin Raj ko help kar sakti hoo na please....bechara bina secretary kee maar jayega.. 😆 😆

Naina looked at Raj he should have asked if he wanted her to help...but maybe he dint want her to help...

Raj-Ummm if your not free its ok.....aggar tum do din ke liye free hoo toh..

Naina--Okk i will help..no problem.. 😊

Raj--Umm thnx...

Naina--Noo probss...

Raj smiled... 😛 😊

Aalekh looked at neelu....

smileddddddddd 😊

Raj--You get ready i am waiting 15 mins..

Naina--Kool...

Aalekh--Naina knee-lenght skirt hain na??? 😆

Naina--Huh?

Aalekh narrated the story to Naina...Naina looked at RAj...Raj was way emabrrased....

Aky--Hey bhagwan mera bhai aisa kyun hain??? 😆 😆 😆

Naina went to get ready....

Aalekh smiled att Raj..

Raj no response....a smirk...

Aalekh started laughin....

Raj-Shut upp..

Aalekh--I dint open my mouth..

Raj-SHut up aalekh...please stop laughin...

Aalekh--Okk r u ready to be open-mouthed??...She will come soon...

Raj--SHutt uppppp 😡 😡 😡

And in no time raj was open-mouthedd...

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.