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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey awesome part............ yaar but itna chootooooooo sa............... not fair............ ab jaldi continue karna aur bada wala update karna...................... ok good girl.......... ok take care bye.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 9

raj aur naina dono film dekh rahe hai.naina film ka sad scene dekhkar rone lagati hai.

raj:naina kya hua.
naina:kuch nahin bas .kisi ki yaad aa gayi.
raj:kiski.
naina:hai koi .
raj:kya tum mujhe nahin bata sakati.
naina:tum mere dost ho par sabse acche nahin.
raj:to tumhaara sabase accha dost kaun hai.
naina:hey koi .
raj:kahin wahi to nahin jise yaad karak tum ro rahi ho.
naina:main yaha movie dekhne aayi hoo ya tumhaare sawalo k answer dene.
raj:ok i m sorry.

raj naina ko rumal deta hai .

raj:ab dost rumaal to de hi sakata hai na ya woh bhi wahi dega jiske liye ro rahi ho.
naina:stopid rahul.woh agar yaha hota to mujhe rone hi nahin deta.
raj:to kya karata.
naina:woh kabhi meri aakho main aasu aane bhi nahin deta.
raj:accha yeh to main bhi kar sakata hoo yeh dekho.

raj naina k aasu pochta hai .raj ne kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki woh kabhi naina k itane kareeb hoga par woh janata hai naina use rahul samajhti hai rajveer nahin.


film main enterwal hota hao

raj:kuch khaogi naina.
naina:popcorn
raj :ok main le kar aata hoo.

raj naina k liye popcorn aur apne liye cold coffee lata hai.film start hoti hai.

naina:rahul tum bhi lona popcorn.
raj:no its ok.
naina:oh come on have it.
raj:no yeh tumhaare liye hai.
naina:yeh tera mera kya hai tum bhi na school k bacche ki tarah behave kar rahe ho.
raj:par naina.
naina:dekho friendship main tera mera nahin hota hamara hota hai .
raj:accha to tum meri dost ho.
naina:ha kyun tum nahin manate.
raj:nahin aisi koi baat nahin .
naina:to lo na tum khate kyun nahin.
raj:ok baba lao happy .
naina:yes.
raj:waise main tumhe apni coffee offer karata par woh meri jhuti hai.
naina:to tumhe kyaa lagata hai main mana kar dugi.lao main tumhe abhi coffee pikar batati hoo.

naina coffee piti hai .

raj:naina stop.tum yeh
naina:oh no i m sorry rahul main yeh to bhul gayi ki tum kabhi meri jhuti coffee na piyo so sorry for this
raj:naina aisi koi baat nahin hai .tum dosti main kam jayada manati ho main nahin
naina:accha to hum ab friends ban hi gaye.
raj:yes i think so.par abhi main tumhaara sabse accha dost nahin hoo.
naina:woh to tum kabhi ban bhi nahin sakate par abhi k liye yeh kar sakte hai

naina raj se haath milati hai, aur film dekhne lagati hai film main song aata hai jo bilkul raj par suit hota hai.

" aakho main teri ajab si ajab si adaye hai"
" dil ko banade jo patang saase teri jo hawaaye hai"

" aayi aise raat hai jo bahot khushnaseeb hai"
chaahe jise dur se duniya woh mere kareeb hai
kitana kuch kahena hai
phir bhi hai dil sawal kai
sapano main jo roz kaha
" hai woh phir se kahu ya nahin."

aakho main teri ajab si ajab si adaye hai
" dil ko banade jo patang saase teri jo hawaaye hai"

film k baad dono bahar aate hai.

naina:nice movie .
raj:ha tabhi to tum itana royi ho .
naina:main kyaa karu jab bhi main koi sad scene dekhti hoo main rone lag jaati hoo.
raj:ha tabhi to mera pura rumal kharab ho gaya.
naina:rahul stopid
raj:ab batao khana kaha khaogi.
naina:khana.
raj:ha ab mess to bandh ho gaya hoga to khana to bahar hi khana hoga .

dono hotel main jate hai.

raj:tum order do .main sherry ko phone karta hoo.

sherry:hello.
raj:sherry main aur naina abhi dinner k baad wapas aayege to plz maj nair ko dekh lena.
sherry:dont worry RK nair abhi kma se bahar hai .
raj:ok than bye aur suno love u n miss u.
sherry:wow lagata hai naina kahin aas paas hi hai is liye love u acting bahot acchai hai tumhaari RK.
raj:ab kya kare karana padata hai bye.
naina:rahul kya karana padata hai
raj:kuch nahin sherry aur meri private baat hai.

naina raj ki bat sunkar kuch nahin bolati naina ko samajh nahin aata ki kyun use rahul ko sherry k saath dekhkar accha nahin lagata.

raj:kya huaa kaha kho gayi
naina:kahin nahin.rahul main tumse ek baat kahu.
raj:ha kaho na
naina:nahin kuch nahin.
raj:kya baat hai naina
naina: hum kisi cheez ko dil se chahe to kya woh hume mil jaati hai.
raj:kya.
naina:jaise film main kaha tha ki agar kisi ko dil se chaho to puri kayanat use hum se milane main lag jaati hai.
raj:naina yeh film hai asal zindagi main aisa nahin hota.
naina:par agar hamara pyaar saccha ho to.
raj: naina agar hum kisi se pyaar kare iska yeh matalab nahin ki hum usko haasil karle.kai baar to pyaar samane hota hai phir bhi hamei usse dur rahena padata hai
naina:aur pyaar hum se bahot dur chala gaya ho to kya woh kabhi wapas aata hai.
raj:matalab
naina:kuch nahin .kabhi saccha pyaar bhi haar jaata hai.
raj:pyaar main haar jeet nahin hoti naina pyaar koi game nahin hai aur hamesha hum jisse pyaar kare woh hume mil jaaye yeh bhi nahin hota.
naina:sherry was too lucky ki use tum mile. tumhe dekh kar lagata nahin hai ki tum is tarah ki baate bhi kar sakti hoo.
raj:chalo tum ne kuch to accha kaha mere baare main.
naina:nahin sach main rahul i wish ki tum jo chaho woh tumhe mile.
raj: sach main jo chahu woh mile.
naina:ha bolo tum kya chahate ho.

dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai,tabhi


sahil:hey RK tum yaha .
raj:hi sahil how r u.
sahil:sherry kaha hai tum aaj akele.
raj:ha woh hum dono dinner pe aaye the.meet my friend naina aur naina yeh sahil hai sherry ka friend.
naina:hello.
sahil:hi naina u looking so beautuful.RK kahin tum aur naina .
raj:oh come on sahil tum bhi na main aur sherry ek saath bahot khush hai naina is just my friend.

tabhi music suru hota hai.
sahil:RK kya main tumhaari friend k saath dance kar sakata hoo.
raj:yeh tum naina se hi pucho to accha hoga.
sahil:naina may i.
naina:ok par sirf todi der k liye

dono dance karate hai.raj dono ko dekhta hai.

sahil:ok RK ab main chalata hoo.aur ha kal meri birthday hai tumhe aur sherry ko aana hai
raj:ha yaar mujhe pata hai. sherry ne aal hi kaha tha
sahil:naina u also come in party.
naina:main par main kaise.
sahil:oh come on tum RK aur sherry ki friend ho aur ab to mujhe bhi janati ho .
naina:ok main aaugi.
sahil:yeh hui na baat bye RK.

next scene

sherry pooja k room main jati hai.

sherry:pooja kya main andar aa sakati hoo.
pooja:yeh koi puchne ki baat hai come on in.
sherry:naina abhi tak aayi nahin to maine socha todi der tumse baate kar loo.
pooja:bahot accha kiya.main bhi bore hi ho rahi thi naina jo nahin hai.
sherry:tum naina ki best friend ho na.
pooja:ha bhi aur na bhi
sherry::kyun tum aisa kyun bol rahi ho.
pooja:woh is liye aalekh aur main hum dono naina k best friend hai.
sherry:naina aur aalekh k beach main kuch hai kya.
pooja:are nahin aalekh to neelu se pyaar karata hai.
sherry:neelu.
pooja:neelu yudi ki sister hai.
sherry: to naina signal kisse juda hai.
pooja:ab yeh to naina hi janati hai. mujhe pata nahin .
sherry:accha aisa koi to hoga jise naina pasand karati hogi
pooja:naina ki pasand chodo hum koi aur baat karate hai.
sherry:accha tum bolo kya baat kare.
pooja:tumhe bura nahin laga rahul naina k saath movie dekhne gaya.
sherry:to rahul aur main ek dusare se pyaar karate hai agar woh kisi k saath ek movie ya kahin bahar chale jaaye to hamara pyaar khatam tode hi ho jayega.
pooja:ha baat to sahi hai par rahul .
sherry:par kya.
pooja:kuch nahin.
sherry:accha to main chalati hoo naina aati hi hogi.
pooja:good night.


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naina aur raj dono raste main hai.

raj:naina ek minute main abhi aata hoo.
naina:par tum ja kaha rahe ho.rahul suno.

raj flowers le kar aata hai.naina sochti hai ki rahul yeh use dega .

raj : maine socha sherry k liye lelu acche hai na.
naina: ha bahot acche hai tum sherry ko bahot pyaar karate ho na rahul.
raj:yes tumhe koi shaq hai kya.
naina:bilkul nahin tum dono ko dekhkar koi bhi bata dega ki tum dino ek saath bahot khush ho.
raj:naina jo dikhta hai woh hota nahin aur jo hota hai woh dikhta nahin.
naina:kya?
raj:kuch nahin tum nahin samjogi

raj aur naina dono chal rahe hai achanak kuch ladake saamane se aate hai.jo kafi drunk hai .raj naina ko apni side kar leta hai .naina raj ko dekhti hai.

raj:kya hua aise kya dekh rahi ho.
naina:rahul tumhe yaad hai tumne ek baar mujhse pucha tha ki main tumhaare baare main kyaa sochti hoo.
raj:ha to .
naina:tum bahot acche ho rahul and i trust u ha main tum par apni aakhe bandh kar k bharosa kar sakti hoo.
raj:aur main ek baat kahu .
naina:bolo .
raj:mujhe tumhaari baato se darr lag raha hai.
naina:kyun?
raj:kahin tum sherry aur mere pyaar k beach to nahin aa jaogi na.
naina:rahul i kill u main tumhaare baare main itana accha bol rahi hoo aur tum.
raj :ab kya kare main to aisa hi hoo.

naina:jaise bhi ho bahot acche ho.
raj:accha ab kma chale warana maj.nair aa gaye to woh zarur bure ban jayege.

next scene
sherry abhi bhi pooja ki baat soch rahi hai aur apne aap se baat kar rahi hai.

sherry:aakhir woh kaun hai jisse naina pyaar karati hai aalekh to nahin hai woh yudi aur ali bhi nahin ho sakate kahin hooda to nahin ho bhi sakata hai kyunki naina ne kaha tha jab woh uske paas tha tab usne uski kadar nahin ki
is baare main mujhe aalekh se puchna padega .kyunki pooja to kuch nahin bata rahi hai.bas ek baar naina jisse pyaar karati hai woh mere saamne aajaye.

tabhi darwaze par knok hota hai , sherry darwaza kholati hai.

naina aur raj khade hai.

sherry:aa gaye aap dono naina RK ne tumhe pareshaan to nahin kiya na.
naina:nahin jayada to nahin.
raj:naina jhuth bolana koi tumse sikhe.

naina hasati hai

naina:nahin sherry rahul ne mera bahot khyaal rakha .
sherry:chalo accha hai warana mujhe tha ki pata nahin RK aur tum kya karoge saath main.
raj:sherry this for u.
raj sherry ko flowers deta hai.sherry raj ko gale lagati hai.
sherry:thanx RK this so beautiful.
raj:par tumse kam .

naina raj aur sherry ko bate karata dekh room main chali jaati hai.

sherry:RK yeh flowers sach mere liye hai ya phir sirf naina k samane acting.
raj:sherry flowers tumhaare liye hi hai isme koi acting nahin hai.
sherry:accha ab tum change kar lo mujhe tumse baat karani hai.
raj:abhi .
sherry:ha tum jao main pooja k paas apna mobile bhool gayi woh lekar aati hoo.

sherry pooja k room main jati hai

raj naina ko dekhta hai jo raj ko hi dekh rahi hai.
raj:naina ek minute yaha aana.
naina:ha rahul bolo.
raj:yeh tumhaare liye.

raj naina ko red rose deta hai.

naina:yeh tumne kab liya tha.
raj:jab sherry k liye flowers liye tab .
naina : thank u rahul.
raj:waise thanx mujhe bhi bolana chahiye.
naina:kyun mujhe thanx kyun.
raj: bas ise hi tum nahin samjogi.

naina raj ko dekhti hai raj kuch nahin bolata aur chale jata hai naina uska matalab samajhne ki koshish karati hai par samajh nahi paati(u know naina suru se stupid jo hai)
raj naina ke saath tha apne pyaar k saath aur yeh uske liye sabse khubsurat shaam thi . jise woh chah kar bhi kisi se nahin kah sakata tha.

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raj apne room main naina ki baate yaad kar raha tha aur muskura raha tha.

sherry:RK kya hua.

raj ka dyan naina main hai use sherry ki awaaz sunai nahin di.

sherry:helloooo RK kaha kho gaye.
raj:nahin to kahin nahin kuch kaha tumne.
sherry: ji main to kab se bol rahi hoo par aap ko kya hua hai jo man hi man main aap ko hasi aa rahi hai.
raj:nahin kuch yaad kar raha tha.
sherry:accha aisa kya hai jo yaad kar k itani khushi ho rahi hai.
raj:naina movie dekhte dekhte rone lag gayi thi.
sherry: what naina ro rahi thi .phir tumne kya kiya.
raj:kuch nahin rahul ki tarah hasane lag gaya.
sherry:god tum bhi na RK tum use itana pareshaan kyun karate ho pata hai aaj bhi woh darr rahi thi ki tum use dekh kar kya kahoge.
raj:i know usne mujhse kaha tha.par kya karu mujhe raj se bilkul ulta behave karana tha isliye.
sherry:accha agar raj hota to kya karata.
raj:raj waha hota hi nahin .
sherry:kyun.
raj:sherry naina aur main i mean rajveer film dekhne jaaye yeh namumakin hai.
sherry:accha RK naina aur tumhaare i mean rajveer k beach main kaisa rishta tha.
raj:kaisa rishta matalab.
sherry:naina aur tum ek dusare k kitane kareeb the.
raj:bas teacher aur student ka aur kuch nahin.par tum kyun puch rahi ho
sherry:bas aisehi main naina k baare main kuch janna chahati hoo.
raj:kya.
sherry:jab pata chalega tab bataugi.accha yeh sab chodo mujhe tumse baat karani hai.
raj : ha bolo na.
sherry:cap. abhimanyu aaye the aaj woh tumse milana chahate the.
raj:abhi use kya kaam ho sakata hai.
sherry:pata nahin tumhaara pucha to maine kaha tum aur naina bahar gaye ho.
raj:thik hai main kal usse milata hoo.
sherry:ok RK good night.
raj:good night sherry.

raj sherry k jane k baad guilty feel karata hai ki usne apne aur naina k baare main sherry se juth kaha par agar woh yeh baat kisi ko bataye bhi to kaise ki raj naina k liye kya feel karata hai.
raj khud aaj tak yeh baat kabhi naina se nahin kah saka to sherry ko woh kya kaheta.

end of part 8

Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
ok happy ab plz bahot saare comments bhejo aur plz bar baar yeh mat likhna ud soon plz con yaar kuch aur bhi likh diya karo 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
that was really good.. even i was smiling when read the rn part... i do hope sherry comes to know abt raj's feelings for naina soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
hey let sherry know about their feeling soon and make her to help both of them to come together........

and ya that was rally nice update sweet and simple........waiting for your next part like anything........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
hey budyy simply superb............awesome.....brilliant....


yes yes plz let sherry know abt rajveer nd naina plzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no yaar abhi nahin sherry ko toda wait karana padega.aur aap sab ko bhi. par ha in sab main maza bahot aayega b/c sherry sab par saq karegi.😉
Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yipeeeeeeeeee ek aur part itni jaldi........... wooooooooooooooo and this one was splendid................... a clap 4 u 👏 ............. keep ur gr8 work going

love
sana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey itz realy 2 gud,
especialy tat filmy songs n thngs

jaldi logon ko patha chalni chahiye ki woh Rajveer hi hain,n RN 2 be 2gether

u hav dun an excelent fic


Aarthi


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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW AWSOME PART KYA BAAT HAI YAAR TOOOOOOOO GOODDDDDDDD
IT WAS REALLY GOOD PART I ENJOYED IT AND YES PLEASE KOSHISH KARNA KI SHERRY KO SAB KUCHH JALDI PATA CHAL JAYE AUR HAAN IN THE UPDATE NAINA CALLED RAHUL RAJ HPW IS THAT POSSIBLE?
NEVER MIND LOVED IT WAITING FOR THE NEXT
👏

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