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Posted: 17 years ago

hi,helloo ,aadab to all my ff readers 😛😛

ok to dekhte dekhte hamare ff k 100 page ho gaye,🥳
yeh ff mera nahin aap sab ka hai jo mujhe reply karate hai aur jo nahin karate unka bhi😳.😳
is ff se mujhe bahot kuch mila taarif ,pyaar khushiya aur mere bahot saare dost.🤗🤗
ha main bahot khush hoo aap sab ne hamesha mera saath diya ab to main sach kahu.
jab tak aap sab k comment nahin padhati to need nahin aati hahahahaha,😆😆pyaar jo ho gaya hai sab se.🤗
thank u so much friends k aap sab mere saath ho aap sab ne amreen k liye bhi jo kiya woh bhi kam nahin tha
i m so happy k mujhe is ff k wajah se bahot saare acche dost mile jaise ,,,,

koi dhamki dene main ustaad hai😛,koi mujhe roz i love u bolati hai,😳koi mujhe If ki don bulaati hai,😆
koi phone par meri ud sunati hai😉 ,koi mujhse chatting main ud k baare main puchati hai,😆
koi apne hostel ki library main mera ff padhti hai aur zor zor se hasati hai😆.to koi raat ko ff padhati hai.😊
koi apne office se mere ff ko padhati hai 😃to koi apni mom ki daat khaate hua ff padhai hai.😆
koi apne comment main hamesha ek hi baat likhati hai 😕to koi sirf mere liye IF par aati hai,😳koi itani bade comment deti hai ki lagata hai yeh ud hai😆kisine ne to apne pehale comment main hi burai kari thi,to kisi ko mere ff ki wajah se mujhse pyaar ho gaya😳iska matalab ff k side effects bhi hai😆😆
koi hamesha mujhe comment dene k baad bhi pm karana nahin bhulati,😳to koi mujhse aage ki story janna chahti hai.😆
bas bas yeh list bahot lambi hai kisi kisi ko to maine bahot kuch bata bhi diya hai ek ko to aage 4 month ki story bhi hehehehe.par ek baat kahu aap sab comment dete ho aur ek amreen hai jisne sab se kam comment diye hai 😕i know sunne main kaafi funny hai par yeh sach hai.😆😆😆

aap sab mere dost ho. jo hamesha mere dil main rahege,aur ha kabhi
kuch bhi mujhse galat hua ho likhne main ya kabhi aap sab ko reply karane main kuch galat kaha ho to i m so sorry.😭😭
kahete hai jiske dost hote hai woh bahot lucky hota hai to ha main bahot lucky hoo😳😳
b/c aap sab mere dost ho,i hope aap sab ko ff aage bhi utanaa hi accha lage jitana abhi lagata hai,aur aaj ud bahot khaas hai 😳
i hope aap sabko accha lage.

thank u so much,meri zindagi main aane k liye.aur mujhe itanaa special feel karane k liye.
main aap sab ko bas ek hi baat bolana chahati hoo.aur woh baat hai.

I LOVE U ALL.uuuuuuuuummmmmmmaaaaaaa.❤️❤️

Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

part 27😉

naina apne room main hai aur raj ki gift ki hui watch ko apne haath main lekar raj k baare main soch rahi hai.

naina:aapne mujhse kaha tha ki main apnaa aur apne waqt ka khyaal rakhoo,par maine kabhi bhi apnaa khayaal nahin rakha ,
aap jo the mera khayaal rakhne k liye par aap bhi mujhe chodkar chale gaye ,par main aapse wada karati hoo.main hamesha
apnaa dyaan rakhoogi ,wada to aapne bhi kiya tha mujhse k aap hamesha mere saath rahege to wapas aajayiye na mere paas.😭😭

tabhi darwaaze par knock hota hai.naina darwaaza kholati hai.aur raj ko dekhti hai.

raj:lo maine apna wada nibaha diya.main aa gaya i hope main late nahin hoo.😛

naina rahul ki baat sunkar heran hoti hai.

raj:lagata hai tum bhul gayi hume 5 baje jana tha na .
naina:ohhh ha,rahul mujhe yaad hai bas main tumhe bulaane aane hi wali thi.
raj:to chale waise bhi hume jaladi aana padega.
naina:kyun?
raj:mujhe aaj hi goa k liye jana hai na .
naina:sherry se jaladi jakar milana hai ,hai na.
raj: ha aisa hi samajh lo.
naina: ok hum jaladi aa jayege waise bhi tum mere saath jaladi bore ho jaoge.😕
raj:accha dekhte hai waise mujhe lagata hai tum mujhse bore ho jaogi.
naina:yeh to jab hum saath main time spend karege tabhi pata chalega.
raj:to chale saath main bore hone k liye.😆
naina(with smile):sure rahul.😊

next scene

hooda:lo bhai hum to mumbai aa gaye ab kya.
ali: bas ab shaam ko goa pahoch jayege.
shalini: ha waise mumbai se goa k liye kaafi flight jaati hai hum jo pehali milegi usi main jayege.
pooja: hum aisa kare shahrukh k ghar jaaye waise bhi mumbai main aaye hai to usse milkar hi jayege.😆
aalekh: ha woh to tere liye apne ghar k bahar hi khada hoga, phool haar lekar.😆😆
hooda:ha yeh kaheta hua ki meri mobile ki dukaan aa rahi hai.😆😆

saare pooja par hasate hai.

pooja:oye tum sab has kyun rahe ho maine to aise hi bol diya tha.😕😕
sherry: pooja tum na inki baato par dyaan mat do,hum na kabhi na kbhi shahrukh se zarur milege.
abhi: lo ab aapko bhi SRK se milana hai.aapke paas to RK hai na.😉
sherry:par abhi mera RK kaha hai isliye maine socha SRK se mil lena chahiye.😛
neelu: ha baat sahi hai waise sherry tumhaari.
aalekh:kya sahi baat chup chaap chalo,tum sab ko to goomane ka bahana chahiye.😡
neelu:i think tumhe jalan ho rahi hai aalekh.😉
aalekh:apun kay ko jalega apun ko pata hai tereko kaun accha lagata hai.😳
yudi:accha neelu ka kaun fav hai.😕
shalini: yudi aalekh aur kaun tum bhi na .neelu ko isse jayada aur koi pasand nahin hai,right neelu.😳
hooda:waah qaidi tune to SRK ko bhi hara diya.
aalekh:chal ab tu mat suru ho .😉
abhi: agar aap logo ki baate finish ho gayi ho to hum airport chale.
shalini:yes captian chaliye.

saare airport par jaate hai.

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cut to raj n naina.


raj:waise naina tum yaha last time kab aayi thi.
naina:school main thi tab hum sab picnic par yaha aaye the.
raj:tumhe abhi bhi yaha k raasate pata hai na kahin aisa na ho k hum kho jaaye.😕
naina:oh come on rahul main koi choti bacchi nahin hoo.dekho hum pahoch gaye.
raj:yeh kaunsi jagah hai?yaha to kuch bhi accha nahin hai.😆😆
naina:tum bhi na abhi aur aage jana hai waha us pahadi par.waha ek bahot khubsurat lake hai.
raj: par itani dur tum thak to nahin jaogi.
naina:main to nahin par lagata hai tum abhi se thak gaye ho.
raj:main bilkul nahin tum kaho to waha tak race laga du.
naina:accha to chalo race lagate hai.
raj: RACE naina koi race nahin ok hum waha chal kar jayege maine to bas aisehi kaha tha.
naina:kyun darr gaye rahul.😉

raj naina ki baat sunkar use dekhta hai.aur naina use dekhkar hasati hai.

raj:accha agar aisi baat hai to chalo dekhte hai kaun waha pehale pahochta hai.
naina:ok ready 1 2 3....

raj aur naina race laga rahe hai aur yeh sab janate hai ki raj hi jitega,aur raj jeet jata hai.

raj:dekha maine kaha tha na k mere saath race mat lagao.tum haar jaogi.
naina:rahul tum olympic main the kya.
raj:aisa hi samajh lo.waise naina hum pahadi par to pahoch gaye ab aage kya.
naina:ab isse aage nahin jayege.
raj:kyun?😕
naina:b/c isse aage main kabhi nahin gayi,b/c waha jo saamane lakadi ka bridge nazar aa raha hai na waha se
jana padega aur mujhe usse bahot darr lagata hai.main lst time yaha aayi thi na tab bhi main waha nahin gayi thi.😆
raj:naina tab tum school main thi ab kis baat ka darr.😆
naina:no main nahin aanewali.agar main gir gayi to.
raj: mujh par yakeen hai na main tumhe kuch nahin hone duga.chalo.

raj naina ko bridge k paas lata hai.

naina :nahin rahul mujhe darr lag raha hai aisa karate hai hum wapas chalate hai.😆
raj:ab yaha tak aaye hai to lake dekhkar hi jayege tum chalo.😛
naina:nahin mujhe nahin aana.
raj:naina plzzz baccho ki tarah darana bandh karo accha apnaa haath do.

raj naina ko haath deta hai aur naina soch rahi hai ki woh jaye ya nahin.

raj:agar mujh par toda sa bhi yakeen hai to tum aaogi.😳

naina raj ko dekhti hai aur use haath deti hai.😳

naina:dekho kuch hoga to nahin na mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai.
raj: naina bas tum apni aakhe bandh kar lo aur mere saath chalo.

raj aur naina dono bridge par se ja rahe hai aur naina ki aakhe bandh hai ,raj use dekhkar has raha hai.

raj:naina tum bhi kya baccho ki tarah aakhe bandh kar k chal rahi ho dekho kitanaa
khubsurat nazaare dikh raha hai yaha se.😛
naina:tum hi dekho mujhe nahin dekhna .
raj:accha ab to aakhe kholo hum ne bridge cross kar liya hai.

naina apni aakhe kholati hai aur dekhti hai ki woh dono abhi bhi bridge par hi hai,aur
naina darr jati hai .😆😆

naina:rahul tumne mujhse juth kyun kaha .hum abhi bhi bridge par hi hai
raj:isliye taaki tumhaara darr nikal jaaye chalo ab aakhe kholo kuch nahin hoga.
naina:nahin.
raj:aakhe kholo kuch nahin hoga main hoo na.

naina aakhe kholati hai.

raj:dekha kuch hua nahin na tum bhi na .
naina: wow kitani khubsurat jagah hai aur yaha se sab kuch kitana chota nazar aa raha hai.

achaanak naina neeche dekhti hai aur apne aap ko itani uchai par dekhkar darr jati hai aur raj ko hug karati hai.
aur raj naina ko apne itane kareeb dekhkar woh kya kare kuch samjh nahin paata.

raj:naina ..kya hua yeh kya kar rahi ho tum?😕😆
naina:rahul hum gir gaye to mujhe darr lag raha hai plzzz mujhe apne paas rahene do.
raj: hahahaha tum bhi na ok thik hai tum aise hi raho main bridge cross karata hoo.

raj aur naina dono bridge par hai aur naina raj k gale lagi hui hai uske baal raj k chehare par hai naina ko apne paas dekhkar
raj naina k saath apni hi dunia main khoya hua hai.aur background main song aata hai.i hope u all like.😉

Kyon Chalti Hai Pavan
Kyon Jhume Hai Gagan
Kyon Machalta Hai Mann
Na Tum Jano Na Hum
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

Kyon Aati Hai Bahaar
Kyon Lutta Hai Karaar
Kyon Hota Hai Pyaar
Na Tum Jano Na Hum
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

Ye Madhoshiyaan Ye Tanhaiyaan
Tasabur Mein Hai Kiski Parchhaiyaan
Ye Bhiga Samaan Umangein Jawaan
Mujhe Ishq Le Ja Raha Hai Kahaan
Kyon Gum Hai Har Disha
Kyon Hota Hai Nasha
Kyon Aata Hai Mazaa
Na Tum Jano Na Hum
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

Dhadakta Bhi Hai Tadapta Bhi Hai
Ye Dil Kyon Achanak Bahakta Bhi Hai
Mahakta Bhi Hai
Chahakta Bhi Hai
Ye Dil Kya Vafa Ko Samajhta Bhi Hai
Kyon Milti Hain Nazar
Kyon Hota Hai Asar
Kyon Hoti Hai Sahar
Na Tum Jano Na Hum
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

Kyon Chalti Hai Pavan
Kyon Jhume Hai Gagan
Kyon Machalta Hai Mann
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

Kyon Aati Hai Bahaar
Kyon Lutta Hai Karaar
Kyon Hota Hai Pyaar
Na Tum Jano Na Hum
Na Tum Jano Na Hum

suddenly raj realize k woh dono ne bridge cross kar liya hai.

raj :naina hum pahoch gaye tum apni aakhe khol sakati ho ab darane ki koi baat nahin hai.

naina raj ki baat sunkar aakhe kholati hai,par woh abhi bhi raj k gale lagi hui hai.

naina:thankkkk goddd hum pahoch gaye .

naina jab dekhti hai ki woh abhi bhi raj ko pakade hua hai to woh hasane lag jati hai.

naina:hahaha i m so sorry rahul tum pata nahin mere baare main kya soch rahe hoge.par mujhe bahot darr lag raha tha.
raj:mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum uchaai se itanaa darati ho.
naina: maine tumse pehale hi kaha tha ki mujhe nahin jana par tum mane hi nahin.
raj: ha par agar tum nahin aati to kaise dekh pati itani khubsurat jagah.
naina:hey woh dekho lake kitani badi hai chalo na waha chalate hai.

raj aur naina dono lake k paas jate hai.

naina:wow kitana accha hai na saamane boat bhi hai rahul hum boat main jaye.
raj: naina tumhe ho kya gaya hai pehale yaha aa nahin rahi thi aur ab .
naina:pahele koi lekar nahin aaya aur ab tum lehi aaye ho to mujhe enjoy karane do.
raj:thik hai jo karana hai woh karo.
naina:wow pata hai main hamesha se aisi jagah aana chahti thi.yaha sab kuch hai bas music nahin hai.
raj:MUSIC.
naina:ha itani kubsurat jagah par music hona chahiye.
raj:dont worry music bhi aa jayega.
naina:woh kaise?

raj apnaa cell phone naina ko deta hai .

raj:yeh lo ismain FM redio hai.
naina:thanx rahul.

naina raj k paas bethti hai aur FM on karati hai.

Tu Hi To Mere Paas Hai
Phir Yeh Kaisi Pyaas Hai
Yeh Kaisa Ehsaas Hai
Koi Bata De Mujhe
Aaj Main Hoon Aur Tum Ho Aur Mohabbat Hai
Aur Mohabbbat Hai Aur Mohabbat Hai
Main Bhi Ghoom Hoon Tum Bhi Ghoom Ho Hai Yeh Chaahat
Haan Yeh Chaahat Hai Aur Mohabbat Hai.

naina lake k paas paani se khel rahi hai aur raj use dekh raha hai.

Yeh Kaise Mumkin Hai Tumko Kisi Ne Ab Tak Pyaar Na Kiya
Main Kaise Yeh Maanu Tumko Ab Tak Dil Na Diya
Kaisi Hai Yeh Uljhan
Dil Yeh Laga Sochne
Tez Hai Kyon Dhadkan
Koi Bata De Mujhe
Aaj Main Hoon Aur Tum Ho Aur Mohabbat Hai
Aur Mohabbbat Hai Aur Mohabbat Hai

naina:rahul tum waha kya kar rahe ho yaha aao na.

raj apne hi khayaalo main hai naina uske paas aati hai.

naina:hey kaha kho gaye?
raj: hhhmmm kahin nahin kuch bola tumne?
naina:i think tum kuch bolana chahate ho ,hai na?
raj:main....nahin to mujhe kuch nahin bolana.


Jo Tumse Kehna Tha Maine Kaha Na Lab Par Baat Hai Rooki
Lagta Hai Yeh Aksar Mere Liye Hi Shayad Tu Hai Bani
Kaisa Aitbaar Hai
Kaisa Intezaar Hai
Kyon Tumse Itna Pyaar Hai
Koi Bata De Mujhe
Aaj Main Hoon Aur Tum Ho Aur Mohabbat Hai
Aur Mohabbbat Hai Aur Mohabbat Hai
Main Bhi Ghoom Hoon Tum Bhi Ghoom Ho Hai Yeh Chaahat
Haan Yeh Chaahat Hai Aur Mohabbat Hai......

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IN GOA HOTEL.

abhi:shalini yeh rahi aap k room ki keys.
shalini:thanx caption waise aapne bahot accha kiya k pehale se sab k room book kara diye.
sherry:yes sir warana agar room nahin milate to pata nahin hum sab kya karate.
aalekh:accha to ab chale apun ko to need aa rahi hai.
neelu:tum yaha sone aaye ho kya?
hooda:nahin yeh to yaha peene aaya hai kyun qaidi sahi bola na.
neelu:aalekh tum aisa kuch nahin karoge ok.
aalekh: apun nahin peeyega,tu bhi na yeh hooda ki baato main aa jati hai.
pooja:are chalo na sab k room bhi dekhne hai .
ali:yudi bhai to sab se pehale ja chuke hai.
hooda:kyun?
ali:b/c unko sab se accha room jo chahiye.
hooda:kya are yaar kahin mujhe sab se bakwaas room na de de woh abhi jakar use dekhta hoo.
sherry:lo yeh dono yaha bhi suru ho gaye,well ab hum bhi chale.mujhe RK ko bhi phone karana hai.
pooja:kyun yaad aa rahi hai salman ki.
shalini:sherry ka to pata nahin par rahul zarur tumhaari yaad main ro raha hoga.
sherry(mumraad): ha khushi se.
shalini:kya kaha tumne.?
sherry:kuch nahin chale.


next scene

raj aur naina dono sunset dekh rahe hai.

raj:pata hai naina aaj kitane dino k baad main sunset dekh raha hoo.
naina:main to first time dekh rahi hoo.main to kabhi aisi jagah aayi hi nahin.
raj:kyun tumne pehale kabhi nahin dekha.
naina:nahin kabhi mauka hi nahin mila,jab school main thi to papa kahin jane nahin dete the,aur phir bhaiya unke baare main to pucho mat ,
maine ek baar kaha k mujhe apne collage k friends k saath bahar jana hai to pata hai mana kar diya.kaha jaha bhi jana ho shaadi k baad jana apne husband k saath.
raj:what??? hahaha naveen ne,,,,, i mean tumhaare bhai ne aisa kaha tha tumse.😆😆
naina:waise unki baat bhi sahi thi aisi jagah par hume uske saath aana chahiye jisse hum pyaar karate ho.b/c uske saath hum aur enjoy kar sakate hai.
raj:ha par aisi jagah bhi to milani chahiye.
naina:hey tum na sherry k saath point 1857 par jana.

raj pani pee raha hota hai aur naina ki baat sunkar .

raj:point.1857....... .raj spat out his water.😆😆
naina: r u ok?
raj:yaah i m fine ha to tum kya bol rahi thi.
naina:ha yeh jagah bahot acchi hai.
raj:tum gayi ho waha?
naina:nahin to main nahin gayi.
raj:phir tumhe kaise pata is jagah k baare main.
naina:actually maine waha k baare main suna hai.
raj:kisse suna hai.
naina:tum jaan kar kya karoge?tum waha sherry k saath jana.i m sure tumhe bahot accha lagega.
raj:to tum mujhe yaha kyun laayi hum waha bhi to ja sakate the.abhi chale kya?
naina:no mujhe waha nahin jana.
raj:kyun ?
naina:bas nahin jana.i think ab hume chalana chahiye.waise bhi hum late ho rahe hai.
raj: ha hume chalana chahiye abhi to tumhe lekar bridge bhi cross karana hai.
naina:tum mera mazaq uda rahe ho.
raj:nahin to tumhe aisa laga kya.
naina:tumhe kya lagata hai main tumhaare bina cross nahin kar sakati.
raj:well yes mujhe to aisa hi lagata hai.
naina:ok to ab main tumhaare bina hi jaugi.
raj:accha dekhte hai tum din main to cross nahin kar paayi to ab raat ko kaise karati ho.

naina aur raj dono bridge k paas aate hai .

raj:ok to chalo naina.
naina: ha ha aa rahi hoo.

naina bridge k paas aati hai aur neeche dekhti hai.phir aage jaati hai par phir darr kar peeche ho jati hai.😆

raj:hahahahaha are waah tumne to cross kar liya.😆
naina:has lo koi baat nahin mera bhi time aayega kabhi.
raj:accha baba ab nahin hasuga chalo haath do.

raj naina ko apnaa haath deta hai,aur naina uska haath pakadti hai.

naina:rahul yeh jagah to bahot acchi hai bas yaha yeh bridge nahin hona chahiye tha.😆
raj:ha next time yaha aayege na to hum aisa karege by air aayege.😆
naina:stopid bahot mazaq bana liya tumne mera aaj.aur waise bhi main tumhaare saath ab yaha nahin aaugi.
raj:kyun mere saath kyun nahin aaogi.
naina:b/c tum to sherry k saath aaoge aur tab tum kaha mujhe aise bridge cross karawaoge.😭
raj:ok to hum aisa karege sherry ko yaha nahin laayege,hum dono yaha akele aayege.😳

naina raj ko dekhti hai aur hasati hai.

next scene

raj aur naina dono dinner kar rahe hai tabhi sherry ka phone aata hai.

raj:helloo.
shery:hi RK h r u?
raj:hey hi tum log goa pahoche ya nahin?
sherry:ha bas abhi hotel main aaye hai waise tum kaise ho i hope tum jis kaam k liye waha ruke the woh kaam ho gaya ho.
raj:yes toda bahot.
sherry:accha tumhe pata hai naina hamare saath goa nahin aayi.
raj: i know woh mere saath hai mujhe bhi subah pata chala k woh tum sab k saath goa nahin aayi.
sherry:accha use phone dena main zara uski khabar leti hoo.
raj:yaah 1 mini.naina sherry tumse baat karana chahati hai.
naina: mujhse oh no..helloo hi sherry kaisi ho tum?
sherry:helloo ki bacchi tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin ki tum goa nahin aarahi ho.
naina:so sorry woh bas mera ma baba se milane ka dil kiya isliye.
sherry:naina tum kyun nahin aayi, agar tum yaha hoti to mujhe bahot accha lagata.
naina:sherry main nahin hoo to kya hua baki sab hai na tum unke saath enjoy karana aur waise bhi rahul bhi to kal aaraha hai.
sherry:yes woh to hai ok yeh chodo tum ghar jaogi to aunty aur uncle ko meri taraf se hi kahena ok.bye take care.
naina:ok goodnight.
raj:naina main tumse ek sawaal puchu sach sach jawaab dogi.
naina:ha pucho na?
raj:tumne achaanak goa jane se mana kyun kar diya?

naina raj ka sawaal sunkar use dekhti hai aur sochti hai ki woh use kya kahe.

naina:woh bas aise hi,ghar jane ka dil kiya tha.
raj:ghar jane ka ya kisi cheez se dur rahene k liye tumne yeh sab kiya?
naina:nahin to aisa kuch nahin hai.
raj:naina maine hamesha dekha hai tum khush hote hua bhi khush nahin hoti jaise k kuch hai jo tum kahena chahti ho par kehati nahin.
naina:aisa kuch nahin hai rahul.
raj:to tum apne friends k saath goa kyun nahin gayi tumne khudh mujhse kaha tha abhi k tumhe picnic par jana accha lagata hai,phir jab
aaj tumhe apne saare friends k saath jana mila to tumne mana kyun kar diya.naina main nahin janata ki tumhaare dimaag main kya chal raha hai.
naina:rahul kabhi kabhi humare liye kuch faisale karana mushkil ho jaate hai.hum kya chahte hai yeh hum bhi samajh nahin paate.
raj:naina jab bhi tumhe samajh na aaye to ek kaam karana apni aakhe bandh karana tumhe sab samajh aa jayega.
par main itanaa hi kahuga ki tum wahi karo jo tumhaara dil chahata hai,kyunki dil kabhi bhi galat nahin hota.baaki aage tumhaari apni life hai.
naina:tum bhi na yeh kaisi baat lekar beth gaye main apni life main bahot khush hoo.ab chale agar tum time par goa nahin gaye to i m sure sherry udas ho jayegi.

raj aur naina dono kma main aate hai.

naina:ok than ab main chalati hoo tum aaj hi goa k liye ja rahe ho na.
raj:ha aur tum.
naina:kal subah ,i hope tumhe meri company acchi lagi ho.
raj:mujhe tumhaare saath bahot accha laga specialy bridge par .😆
naina:hahaha vvv funny😡.ok bye.goa main sab ko meri taraf se hiii bolana.
raj:main bol duga .goodnight.
naina:waise kal christmas hai to abhi se marry christmas rahul.
raj:thank u naina tumhe bhi marry christmas.

naina apne room main aati hai aur apnaa bag pack karati hai tabhi use raj ki gift ki hui choodiya nazar aati hai,jo usne rahul bankar naina ko gift ki thi.

naina(to her self): maine inko aaj tak kayun sambhaal k rakha hai ,yeh kyun mere lite special hai,main kya karu bhaiyaa mujhe kuch samajh nahin aaraha yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe.

tabhi naina ko raj ki baat yaad aati hai ki jab bhi koi problam ho to apni aakhe bandh karo tum sab samajh jaogi ki tumhe kya chahiye.
naina apni aakhe bandh karati hai.

aur woh dekhti hai ki ek chota sa par khubsurat sa ghar hai jaha balcony main ek ladaki white salwaar kameez main khadi hai.uske baal khule hua hai aur woh apni hi dunia main khoyi hui hai,
tabhi peeche se koi aata hai aur use hug karata hai aur dheere se uske kaano main kaheta hai I LOVE U CADET NAINA AH..... SINGH.aur woh ladaki turn karati hai jo aur koi nahin naina hai ,

naina:kaha chale jate ho mujhe chodkar tum janate ho na main tumse kitanaa pyaar karati hoo.
raj: ha main janata hoo par ab main aagaya hoo na to plzz aise sad sa face mat banao main meri naina ko hamesha hasata hua dekhna chahata hoo.
naina:to uske liye tumhe hamesha mere paas rahena hoga.
raj:main hamesha tumhaare paas hoo naina tumhaare chahere ki smile bankar.


naina apni aakhe kholati hai .aur woh samajh jati hai ki woh kya chahati hai.

naina:main samajh gayi rahul ki main kya chahati hoo,meri zindagi sirf ek insaan se hi suru hoti hai aur koi bhi uski jagah nahin le sakata koi nahin,
rahul sirf mera dost hai mera pyaar nahin ab main wahi karugi jo mera dil chahega b/c main janati hoo rajveer sir hamesha mujhe khush dekhna chahte the aur ab main khush rahugi,
unke liye sirf unke liye I LOVE U RAJVEER SIR.................................😳😳

end of part 27

Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
excelent Sana,itz simply superb hatz off 2 u 👏 ,
the bridge scenez realy superb 👏 ,
dialogues rocked as usual n u hav done the best thz time also,U Rock SANA 👏 [=D>


SANAZ the best in FF'z,


👏


Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good lovely 😳 very nice part now waiting eagerly for naina to know about rajveer's identity and plzzzzzzzzzzzz do update soon asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i thought she was gone realize rahul is raj..uggrr..jaldi bataoona use please......

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sam.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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bas ab mere haath dukh gaye 😉 ........

dis part was toooooooo good...........loved it...........rn wer best......specially woh bridge wala part was very good........

aur aalekh n srk wala bhi accha tha......

also d way u ended d part naians imagination.......dat was fabulous....

in all a gr8 part........
once again
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Posted: 17 years ago
congratulations on the completion of 100 pages of ur ff sana... 🥳 just keep it up and you very well that i luv u..........and u deserve all the appreciation & luv frm ur ff readers.........
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hi sana, i jst started to read ur ff and finished it from start to end in one day & so i m writing u for the first time.
First of all thank u so much for showing us an lrl world parallel to the orignal on tv and must tell u this one is best.
I m a great lrl & RN fan but nvr knew something like this existed on the net otherwise i wud have joined it long back esp post rajveer's exit when i was missing this show too much.

i stopped watching lrl from then only but the loose ends of the story on tv are been tied by u.

i was always glued to yhe RN part coz it was one of the most unique ones one can imagine. when lrl started and the promos were on i felt it must be jst another kind of youth based shows but the presence of rajeev in it made me hope a little more out of it.but still it looked predictable that rajveer will be paired opp ritu mam, naina with hooda, and mobile ki dukaan usool bhai chalane wale hain.alekh and yudi to freshers ball mein pair the hi {ha ha}but this twist in the tale of RN jodi was superb.
this part was the jaan of lrl but unfortunately was very less in the show and rajveers untimely exit was the biggest blow.and now u r fulfilling this desire to see them more.

Also sana, i feel ur imagination has surpassed even the best of its actual episodes.the turn which u have given to the story is probably the best way of taking it ahead.

but one complaint,,,the show made me wait forever to see RN confession n even in ur story the wait is still on.but this wait is not less interesting than the actual confession probably wud be.

i think only you can express so well in words not me so all these praises are just 20 percent depicting what i really want to say.

earlier my day wasn't complete without lrl episode on tv...after rajeev's exit their existed no tv for me but believe me i m waiting with more curiosity for ur update as it is the lrl which i wanted to see.

bye and take care
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aarsow

excelent Sana,itz simply superb hatz off 2 u 👏 ,
the bridge scenez realy superb 👏 ,
dialogues rocked as usual n u hav done the best thz time also,U Rock SANA 👏 [=D>


SANAZ the best in FF'z,


👏


Aarthi

hey Aarthi,,,

tum hamesha mere baare main likhti ho plzzz mere ff k ki taarif karo meri nahin,waise thank u so much dear 4 ur comment😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good lovely 😳 very nice part now waiting eagerly for naina to know about rajveer's identity and plzzzzzzzzzzzz do update soon asap.

thanx sweta 4 comment.😛

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