RN ff kitana pyaar hai tumseNOTE 264 - Page 15

sweetcandle
thank u so much for ur comment.

i know sab ko rn k scenes bahot pasand hai aur i m sure k aage k parts main jo rn scenes hoge woh to sabko bahot acche lagege.

HEY SANA, TUMNE LAST COMMENT MEIN KAHA THA KINAINA KO PATA CHAL JAYEGA KI RAHUL HI RAJ HAI PAR PLZ TUM ITNE JALDI SUSPENSE MAT KHOLO KYUNKI AGAR NAINA KO PATA CHALA TO RAJ USSE PHELE KI TARAH BAAT KAREGA AUR MUJHE YEH NAUGHTY,FLIRTY RAJ BAHUT PASAND HAI AUR PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UD YAAR 😆

LOTS OF LOVE,
SAM 😛

hey am so sorry for replying so late. i had missed so much!! all the updates were just mindblowing!! the way raj acts as sherry's rahul is just too good. i must say you've potrayed the character of rahul very well!! all i hope is naina comes to know that rahul is raj. waiting for that preciosu moment!! i love this fic entirely!! it rocks seriously. please please update soon. waiting for it!!!

jaychan
tumne last comment part6 k baad diya tha. aur ab part 10 par de rahe ho i remember u thank u so much for ur comment.and i ud soon. 😊

update fast plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only waiting eagerly for it.

update fast plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only waiting eagerly for it.

sana ud karo na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭 😭 😭

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only.

ok i m so sorry for late ud but main kya karu kal main todi busy thi par aaj subah jaladi ud kar rahi hoo.i hope aap sab ko acchi lagegi. 😉 😉 😉

part 11

naina kisi aur se nahi raj se takrakar girane lagati hai tabhi raj use girane se bachane k liye apni taraf leta hai aur dono soft toys par gir jaate hai.😛😛
saare toys dono par gire hua hai aur dono bas ek dusre ko hi dekhe ja rahe hai. todo der baadi ek choti bacchi aa kar unse kaheti hai

baby:aap dono aisehi agar ek dusare ko dekhte rahe to main apna toy kaise lugi.

raj aur naina dono use dekhkar khade hote hai.

naina:i m so sorry ... woh main..
raj:naina tumhaara dyan kaha tha agar kuch ho jata to.
baby:kaise hota aap the na in k liye.

dono abhi bhi wahi khade hai aur ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe hai.

baby:accha ab aap dono ghar jaa kar romance kariyega. mujhe mera toy lene do
raj:beta jaisa aap soch rahi ho waisa kuch nahin hai. yeh meri friend hai.
baby:aapki girlfriend hai yeh.
naina:girlfriend. no beta.
raj:nahin meri girlfriend yeh nahin hai
naina:aaj kal k bacche bhi na kya kya bolate hai.
sherry:raj naina tum dono waha kya kar rahe ho yaha aao.
naina:yeh hai inki girlfriend main nahin.
raj:ok beta tum apna toy lo hum chalate hai.
baby:uncle main aap dono se ek baat kahu .
raj:ha bolo.
baby:aap na unke saath nahin inke saath acche lagate ho.
naina:kya.
baby:ha bhale woh aapki girlfriend ho par shaadi aap inse karana.

naina aur raj dono uski baat sunate hai aur kahete hai.

both:dont worry beta hum aapki baat par sochege. aur dono hasane lagate hai.😊

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hooda:aalekh dekh kaisa lag raha hoo main .
aalekh:abe jaisa hai waisaj lagega .
hooda:are aaj party main sab mujhe aur naina ko hi dekhege.
aalekh:party ka to pata nahin ha par abhi main jo dekh raha hoo. woh couple best hai.
hooda:kaha.
aalekh:woh dekh teri naina aur woh rahul kaise perfact couple lag rahe hai bacche ki bhi kami nahin hai.
hooda:abe yaar yeh painter babu har baar meri phoolan k saath hota hai.
aalekh:tu jo naina ko akela chod deta hai.
hooda:ab kya karu.
aalekh:ja aur naina ko bol k woh teri help kare.

hooda raj aur naina k paas jata hai.

hooda:tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho.
naina:is bacchi se baate.
hooda:are wah kitani pyaari hai .
raj:iski baate suno woh to aur bhi payari hai.
hooda:kyun aap inse kya bol rahi thi beta.
baby:yahi ki in dono ko shaadi karani 😉chahiye.kyun uncle.sahi hai na.
hooda:bawari ho gayi hai yeh chori .kya bol rahi hai😡.
raj: hooda to kaisi lagi isaki baate.
hooda:jayada der suni to main to bimar ho jauga i think hume jana chahiye yaha se.chal phoolan.😕😕
naina:bye beta.

naina aur hooda dono waha se chale jaate hai.

raj:beta ab main bhi chalata hoo aur ha waise aapka idea hai to accha par main aisa kar nahin sakata.
baby:kyun.
raj:aap nahin samjhegi.abhi aap bahot choti ho na.
baby:to aap un aunty ko bata do woh samajh jayegi.
raj:yahi to problam hai beta woh aunty ko main nahin bata sakata b/c woh nahin samjhgi.🤢

raj smile and say bye beta.

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sherry:naina kaha ho tum chalo late ho raha hai.
naina:bas yeh hooda ki help kar rahi thi.tum logo ki shopping ho gayi.
pooja:nahin yaar hum to confused hai k kya le.
sherry:hey! i think hume boys ki help leni chahiye .
pooja:ha rahul tum meri help kar do na plz.
sherry:ha RK plz tum hi batao hum kya le.
raj:ok than chalo.
sherry:dekho in dono mainse kaun sa loo.
raj:aisa karo dono lelo.tumhe dono pasand hai na.
sherry:RK i love u.
raj:love u 2. dear.
pooja:waah ! ek yeh salman hai aur ek ali jo kabhi ek gift bhi nahin deta.
sherry:salman
pooja:ha jaise har ladaki ko salman pasand hai waise hi rahul bhi .
raj:chalo mujhe yaha aakar ek aur naam mil gaya.
naina:pooja tu bhi na pagal hai tujhe bas bahana chahiye ali se ladane ka.
raj:aur tumhe hamesha beach main bolaneka.
naina:main apni dost se baat kar rahi hoo tumse nahin .
raj:pooja meri bhi dost hai kyun pooja?
pooja:yes naina rahul mera dost hai aur woh sahi bol raha hai.
naina( gusse se):ha galat to main hoo na.
pooja:rahul tum naina ko chodo batao yeh dress kaisi hai.
raj:pooja tumhaari choice sach main bahot acchi hai .
pooja:acchi hai na dekha mera signal hamesha on raheta hai sherry , chalo hum bill pay karte hai.
shery:ok naina come fast hum neeche hai tum jaladi se aa jao.
naina:ok .tum log chalo main aati hoo.
raj:pooja kuch khaogi.
pooja:rahul abhi.
sherry:ha waise bhi naina ko time lagega .
pooja:thik hai chalo rahul.
hooda:rahul tumhaara jaadu sab par chalata hai.
raj:kyun tumhaara nahin chalata kya.
aalekh:iska sab pe chale na chale par naina par to zara bhi nahin chalata.
raj:accha to yeh baat abhi bhi ataki hui hai.
aalekh:bole to.
raj:bole to naina jo accha lagata hai woh karo.
hooda:tum batao na main aisa kya karu ki naina meri ho jaaye.
raj:yeh tum mujhse nahin apne aap se pucho. naina ko mujhse jayada tum janate ho.
aalekh:baat to sahi hai par yeh baat ise samajh aaye to na.

saare raj k saath restorent main jaate hai .

raj:gyus tum log order karo tab tak main aata hoo.

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abhimanyu ali aur yudi se milata hai.

abhi:cadets aapke baaki dost kaha gaye hai.
ali:sir woh sab rahul aur sherry k saath bahar shopping par gaye hai.
abhi:shopping?
yudi:yes sir aaj unke kisi friend ka birthday hai to hum sab bhi unke saath jayege.
abhi:par maj.nair.
ali:sir woh sherry aur rahul hai na .
abhi:par phir bhi aap sab , accha bataiye aap ko pata hai woh kaha gaye hai.
ali:yes sir.
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naina dress dekh rahi hai tabhi raj waha aata hai.

raj:main koi help kar du naina.
naina :tum phir aa gaye.tum to abhi neeche the na.
raj:ha sab neeche restorent khana kha rahe hai to maine socha ki
naina:naina ka toda dimaag khalu hai na.
raj:no maine socha ki tumhe bhi meri help chahiye hogi .
naina:bilkul nahin mujhe tumhaari bilku bhi help nahin chahiye.
raj:ok par main yaha khada to ho hi sakata hoo.na

naina dress dekh rahi hai aur raj peeche khada khada har dress par comments pass kar raha hai.

raj:bakwaas.😉
naina:tume mujhse kuch kaha.
raj:nahin to main to apne aap se baat kar raha hoo.tum shopping karo na😆

naina raj ko khada dekhkar jaldi se ek dress le leti hai.

naina:ise pack kar dena.
raj:naina mujhe nahin lagata tumhe yeh dress lena chahiye.
naina:kyun maine tumse pucha kya.aur waise bhi tum pooja k paas jao na.
raj:pooja ki help karane se tumhe kya probalam hai.dost hai woh meri.
naina:wow kal tak mere saath dosti k zande gaad rahe the aur aaj pooja k saath.
raj:pata hai tum girls ki yahi baat mujhe pasand nahin hai accha hai meri sherry aisi nahin hai.

naina raj ka collar pakadati hai aur uske kareeb jakar bolati hai

naina:tum to bade lucky ho jo tumhe sherry jaisi GF mili agar main tumhaari GF hoti to.
raj:to to kya karati aap.

raj hasane lagata hai.😆

suddenly naina reallize karati hai ki woh kya bol rahi hai.aur woh waha se jaane lagati hai.

raj:naina suno na tumne jawab nahin diya.

naina ko jaate dekh raj uska haath pakadata hai.

naina:haath chodo mera rahul .
raj:ok par suno yeh jo tumhaara dress hai woh tumne galat liya hai.
naina:rahul tumhe kaise pata.
raj:tumhara dress

tabhi abhimanyu waha aata hai aur raj aur naina ko ek saath dekhta hai.

abhi:mr. rahul aapne suna nahin naina kya bol rahi hai.haath chodiye unka.
naina:sir aap yaha.
raj:i think aap galat samajh rahe hai .woh main aur naina to bas.
naina:ha sir hum to.
abhi:hume aapse baat karani hai naina chale.
naina:yes sir.

abhi aur naina dono ko bahar jaate dekh sherry unase milati hai

sherry:sir aap yaha .
abhi :hum yaha apne cadets ko lene aaye hai.aapko koi problam hai
sherry:bas hum aa hi rahe the sir.
abhi:aap apne dost rahul k saath aajana hum apne cadets ko le kar ja rahe hai.
sherry:par sir kuch hua kya.
abhi:yeh aap apne rahul se puchiye.

abhi sab ko apne saath le jata hai.

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sherry raj k paas jati hai.

sherry:RK yeh abhi sir ko kya hua.
raj:kuch nahin main aur naina upar baat kar rahe the abhi waha aaya aur naina ko apne saath le gaya.
sherry:par kyun .
raj:i dont know .

sherry aur raj dono kma main aate hai aur sherry abhi k cabin main jati hai.

abhi:naina aap kyun baar baar us rahul aur sherry k saath bahar jati hai.
naina:par sir woh dono mere dost hai aur kuch nahin hai .
abhi:hum janate hai naina par aap bhi janati hai ki hume aapki kitani parwaah hai .
naina:yes sir aap naveen bhaiya k dost hai aur main janati hoo ki aap mere baare main hamesha accha hi sochege.
abhi:naina hum kabhi bhi tumhaari aakho main aasu nahin dekh sakate bas is liye hum.
naina:dont worry sir,main janati hoo aap mere saath hai.

sherry bahar khadi abhi aur naina ki baate sunati hai. aur sochti hai ki naina jisse pyaar karati hai woh abhimanyu hai.
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raj:kya hua pata chala abhi ne aise kyun react kiya.
sherry:yes RK yaha to dil ka mamala hai.
raj:dil ka.
sherry:pata hai maine tumse kaha tha ki naina k baare main mujhe kuch janana hai.
raj:ha to .
sherry:to maine jaan liya.
raj:ab plz aap mujhe batayegi kya jana aapne.
sherry:yahi ki abhi aur naina ek dusre se pyaar karate hai.

raj sherry ki baat sunkar shock ho jata hai

raj: kya tum yeh kaise kah sakati ho.
sherry:are baba maine abhi abhi un dono ki baate sunkar aa rahi hoo.aur unki baate sunkar koi bhi bata dega ki abhi naina se kitana pyaar karata hai.
raj:aur naina?
sherry:i think woh bhi karati hai b/c jis tarah woh abhi k saath baat kar rahi thi usse to aisa hi lagata hai.ki
raj:naina abhi se pyaar karati hai..
sherry:RK what happen tum thik to ho na.
raj:ha bas toda sa sar main dard hai. tum jao main thik hoo.or ha mujhe nahin lagata ki main party main aa sakuga
sherry:par RK achanak kya hua.
raj:kuch nahin main abhi aata hoo.

raj ko yakeen nahin ho raha ki naina aur abhi ek dusare se pyaar karate hai woh naveen ki tasweer k paas jata hai😭😭

raj:mujhe maaf kardena naveen aaj naina ki khushi main mujhe khush hona chahiye par main apne dil k haatho mazabur hoo. mere pyaar ko manzil to kabhi milani thi hi nahin .par main chahuga k naina ko uska pyaar mil jaaye.😭

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naina pooja k saath sherry aur rahul se milane aati hai.

sherry:are tum dono yaha redy nahin hona party k liye.
naina:woh mujhe rahul se milana tha kaha hai woh.
sherry:yahi bahar hi hoga .woh uski tabiyat thik nahin hai party main bhi nahin aane wala RK.
pooja:aise kaise hum baat karate hai usse.woh raha rahul.chal naina.

naina aur pooja raj k paas jati hai.

pooja:rahul.
raj:are tum dono yaha party main nahin jana kya.
naina:tumhe kya hua sir ki baat ka bura lag gaya kya.
raj:nahin to aisa kuch nahin hai.
naina:rahul unki taraf se main sorry bolati hoo .
sherry:ab naina chodo bhi hum janate hai abhi sir ko tumhaari bahot parwaah hai.kyun RK.
raj:ha abhi tumhaara bahot khyaal rakhta hai.
pooja:ha bilkul jaise kajol ki parwaah arbaaz khan ko hoti hai film pyaar kiya to darana kya main.aur bechara salman ko kajol ki wajah se use kya kya karana padata hai.
sherry:kya.
pooja:ha abhi sir waise hi to naina ka khyaal rakhte hai.kyun naina.
naina:ha waise baat to sahi hai aaj to unhone bilkul bhaiya ki tarah hi react kiya tha.
sherry:naina u mean..... tum aur..... abhi sir....oh no main to..😆.

raj yeh baat sunkar jor jor se hasane lag jata hai .b/c naina kisi se pyaar jo nahin karati smile to aani hi thi.😊😊

raj:sherry plz ab bas tum na .
naina:kyun kya hua kuch galat kaha maine.
raj:no bas yeh hamari sherry hai na inhe aadat hai meri jaan leni ki.
pooja:matalab.
sherry:nahin kuch nahin .
raj abhi bhi hasata ja raha tha .
sherry:stopid RK . tumhe to .
raj:ab tumne kaam hi kuch aisa kiya hai.
sherry:tumhaari tabiyat kharab thi na.
raj:woh to pooja ki baate sunkar acchi ho gayi ab chalo party k liye late ho raha hai

tabhi maj.nair aate hai.

nair:humne suna aap sab aaj raat party ja rahe hai.
sherry:yes sir.
nair:kya hum aapke saath chal sakate hai.😡

saare shock k saath maj.nair ko dekhte hai.😆

pooja:sir aap aur party main.
nair:kyun cadet hum nahin aa sakate kya.
raj:sir woh kya hai na aapko date k saath aana hoga koi date hai aapki.

nair pooja ko dekhta hai.aur pooja wahi behosh ho jati hai😕.😕

naina:pooja ...kya hua pooja.
raj:i think sir pooja ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai. so plz .
nair:ok to main chalat hoo.
sherry:pooja uth sir gaye.
raj:pooja tum ali k saath party main jaogi nair k saath nahin.
pooja: ha... mujhe nahin jana ... suna main nahin jaugi.
naina:pooja uth tu ali k saath hi jayegi .tu bhi na.
raj:bechari sirf sun kar hi neeche gir gayi agar sach main jana pade to upar hi pahoch jaati.

pooja hosh main aati hai aur saare uspar hasate hai.

pooja:tum logo ko hasi aarahi hai aur woh mucchad .
naina:ok baba sorry ab chalo hume redy bhi hona hai.
pooja:accha chalo.

sherry:chalo RK main bhi chalati hoo.
raj:kaha.
sherry:woh abhi sir k paas subah woh milana chahte the na.
raj:hey! suno ab plz apne is chote se dimaag par jayada jor mat dena.
sherry:are yaar tum kyun itana has rahe ho ok ho gayi galati.
raj:par aisi galati agar kuch ho jata to.
sherry:kise kuch ho jata.
raj:kisi ko nahin tum jao.
sherry:pata tum aur naina dono hamesha golmol baate karate ho.

sherry abhi k office main jati hai.

sherry:sir may i come in.
abhi:yes plz.
sherry:sir aap mujhse milana chahate the.
abhi:ha sherry aapne kma kyun join kiya hai.
sherry:matalab.
abhi:aap kabhi bhi kma main raheti nahin hai hamesha bahar jana aur baki ka waqt aapke RK k saath.
sherry:sir woh .
abhi:plz hum chahege k aap ek cadet ki tarah kma main rahe naki ek mantri ki beti bankar.
sherry:yes sir par sir aaj hum phir se bahar ja rahe hai .
abhi:what.
sherry:last time phir i promise k main aapko sikayat ka mauka nahin dugi.
abhi:ok but last time.
sherry:sir aapko chalana hai to aap bhi chal sakate hai.
abhi:no hume yeh sab pasand nahin hai u carry on.
sherry:bye sir i mean thank u sir.

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hooda apne room main yeh soch kar khush hai ki aaj woh naina k saath hoga.

yudi:agar tum aisehi khush hote rahe aur redy nahin hua to naina kisi aur k saath chali jayegi.
aalekh:are isaka kya hai yeh waha kisi aur ladaki pe line maarega.
hooda:aur tu kaidi tu waha bhi botal lekar beth jayega.
aalekh:to apun ko yeh dance aur party main kuch accha nahin lagata.
yudi:no yaar aaj hum itane dino k baad kahin bahar enjoy karane jayege . warana kma main to.
ali:guru baat to sahi hai . raj sir k baad to kma main kuch bhi pehale jaisa nahin raha.
yudi:ok than chale .rahul wait kar raha hoga.

pooja aur sherry dono redy hai dono naina k paas jati hai.

pooja:chal na abhi aur kitana time lagayegi.
naina:bas aa rahi hoo tum dono chalo.
sherry:hum neeche hai ok make it fast.

naina ne dress leto li par ab use raj ki baat yaad aarahi thi b/c naina ne kabhi aisi dress paheni nahin thi use samajh nahin aaraha tha ki woh kya kare k yeh dress main woh comfortable feel kar paaye.

saare neeche naina ka wait kar rahe hai.
yudi:are yaar ab aur kitana time lagega.
hooda:aaj naina ko hua kya hai itana time to woh kabhi nahin lagati.
sherry:ha yaar sahil bhi waha party main wait kar raha hoga.
aalekh:aisa karo tum log jao apun naina k saath aa jayega.
raj:par tumne sahil ka ghar tode hi dekha hai.
sherry:aisa karate hai main aur baki sab jate hai RK tum naina ko le aana.
hooda:hum raj k saath jate hai aur sherry tum naina ko lekar aa jana.
sherry:hooda mujhe drive karana nahin aata.waise bhi sahil mera friend hai main agar late gayi to use bura lagega.
hooda:(mummered) : yeh rahul kyun hamesha beach main aa jata hai
pooja:ok than hum sab chalate hai rahul tum naina ko lekar aa jana.

hooda bechara chuchap gaadi main beth jata hai aur ali ,yudi ,aalekh sab use dekhkar hasate hai.😆😆

end of part 11😳