ff: izhaar-e-ishq part-2 pg-2 (do read)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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friends,

aaj kal lrlf par sab alsi ho gaye hain

koi yahan aata hi nahin

kyun bhai..kya kisi ko apne doston ki yaad nahi aati

kher ek aur change bhi notice kiya hai meine

yahan par bahut sarre happening writers bhi aa gaye hain

to unhi se prerna lekar i thought mein bhi kuch likhun......

so meri yeh kahani shuru hoti hai kashmir ki un hasin vaadiyon se.., jahan ka zarra zarra janat ki jhalak hai

khudai khud is jagha bas gayi hai......

cadet naina ah singh jo ab capt naian hain aur unke saath capt ali baig aur capt ud bhi kashmir mein posted hain

naina aur uske doston ka mission ek nuclear attack ko rockna hai

intelligence cell se major huda aur capt pooja bhi unke saath is team mein hai

col jai aka(gunny)

is mission k incharge hain.......

naina is standing in the window of her house..

ek ajjeeb se darr aur dard ne use ghera hua hai

is terrorist attack ko unearth karna mushkil hai..

is attack k baare mein allekh ne bataya tha ....

naina ko vo din achchi tarhan yaad hai.

delhi mein bahut tez garmi thi,,naina k cell par subha se koi phone kar raha tha lekin vo jo bhi tha theek tarhan se baat nahin kar pa raha tha.no sarhad paar se tha ....naina ne immediately apne senior officer col jai ki help mangi ..

together unhone yeh track kiya k yeh no pakistan ki imaan jail ka hai...

jahan bahut saare indian officials pow hain...

jab bahut mushkil se caller k saath contact hua to pata chala k vo allekh tha. usne bataya k yahan use bharat par nuclear attack ki khabar milli hai

naina k puchne par k yeh kaise ho sakta hai allekh ne bataya k bahut saare indian fauji yahan hai

allekh==naiana meri baat sun

peechle hafte rajasthan mein jo blast hua tha vo isi plan ka ek hisa hai

naina yahan hamare capt...........

tabhi ek goli chalne ki awaaz aur peircing scream sunayi di

phir line disconnect ho gayi.....

naina ki aakhon se aansu ruk nahin rahe the

yeh to sab man hi chuke the k allekh mar chuka hai

lekin uski kurbani vo log zahir na hone denge

intelligence cell ne pata lagaya ki information sahi thi ek terrorist attack plan kiya ja raha hai......

mustafa naam ka terrorist is plan ko execute karega aur vo kashmir mein kam kar raha hai.......

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Pakistan ki zammeen

imaan jail

jailer ghulam sahib apne fav qaidi k liye khana lekar ja rahe hain

apne isi dost kehne par unhone capt allekh ka pura illaj karwane k liya apni jaan tak jokhin mein dal di....

capt allekh ab thaak the...

unka dost aur koi nahi vo insaan hai jisne apne desh k liye apna sab kuch qurban kar diya

vo hai capt rajveer singh shikhawat...............................

this story is how two nations will establish peace and destroy those dushmans of humanity....

this was the first episode

do tell me kaisi lagi

should i continue

i know i am not a good writer and the story is confusing

love u amd miss u all guys a lot

dolly😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was really good. pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
its excellent, continue soon dear 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
excellent,superb,mindblowing,fantastic 😆
friend forever thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hats off 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
friend kuch kahene k liye dundh hi nehi pa rehi hoon.
ur attempt is really superb..............
specially ki 2 country will stand 4 peace......
go ahead
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: friend forever

hats off 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
friend kuch kahene k liye dundh hi nehi pa rehi hoon.
ur attempt is really superb..............
specially ki 2 country will stand 4 peace......
go ahead

thanx i am really eliated

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok i'll continue when i'll be next online 😳
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Ok friends so this is izharr-e-ishq episode-2=========Ok friends so this is izharr-e-ishq episode-2==========Ok friends so this is izharr-e-ishq episode-2=========Ok friends so this is izharr-e-ishq episode-2==========
Jailer ghulam sahib ,,, ko aaj bhi yaad hai 5 saal pahle kis haalat mein raj ko firangi nahi vo gadar bharat laye the……
Raj ko apna koi hosh nahi tha , bad se batter haalat this uski
Gadaron ne uske illaj k liye koi docter bhi nahi bulyaa,
Raj ka koi bahut bura accident hua tha ske jism par kai chotein thi……..
Uska bachna bahut mushkil tha..
Jailer ghulam sahid ko shayad apna beta yaad aa gaya tha
Jo Pakistan mein huye ek aatankvadi humle ka shikar ho gaya tha….
Haan raj bilkul shahid ki tarhan hi tha….
Vo apne bete ko dubara kaise marte huye dekh sakte the
Unhone vahan k hakim ko bulvaker raj ka pra illaj karvaya
Is ladke mein zaroor khuda ka noor hai……
Raj ne phir unko bataya k Hindustan mein kis tarhan usko marra hua sabit kar deshdrohi sabit kar ,,vahan se bahar laya gaya tha
Ghulam sahib ne jab use bataya k yeh sab kisi lala k kehne par ho raha tha jo ek terrorist associaton k head the….
Unka kisi desh se koi lagaav nahi tha vo to bas takat k bhuke the…
Raj ko unhone bataya k kis tarhan pak mein bhi us insaan k ek ishaare par lakhon log mar diye jate the…..
Jab is group k logon ko kahin chupne k liye jagha chahiye hoti to vo Karachi k masum parivaron ko apna shikhar banate
Unke ghar mein apne hathiyaar chupate the
Log darte the …kuch nahi kar pate the……
Raj ko jab pata chala k in sab k peeche lala gehlot ka haath hai to vo beechara apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paya…
Lalaji uske saath itne saalon se the uske pita the
Yeh kaise ho sakta hai………………..
Raj ne peechle panch saalon mein ghulam sahib ki madad se ek choti si party khadi kar li thi
Jo logon k darr ko door bhagati thi….
Jo Karachi mein tenat rehti thi
Kisi bhi kone ki koi halchal ka karan pata karte
Isi team ne ab tak kai aatankvadi humle rok diye the
Par dushman tenat ho chuke the………
Is baar unka nishana Hindustan k kayi bade shehar the
Jimmein rajasthan,kashmir ,Mumbai,delhi,Chennai,bhi the
Yeh puri conspiracy bharat k rajye ko paltane k liye thi
Kyunki lala gehlot elections haar chuke the
In humlon k zariye vo presidents rule chahate the
Aur phir khud politics par kabza karma chahate the……
Yeh hum log nahi hone denge
…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Aaj subha se hi naina bahut ajjeb sa mehsoos kar rahi thi
Alekh k vo aakhri bol,"naina humare capt bhi…..
Usko bhul nahi rahe the
Alekh kis ki baat kar raha tha
Kahin raj ki to nahi
Nahi mein khud ko unki yaadon mein nahi dhakelun gi bahut mushkil se khud ko sambhala hai
Naveen bhayiya to bekasur sabit ho gaye the lekin capt rajveer ko abhi tak shaheed nahi kaha jata the
Vo ek deshdroho mane jaate the
Tabhi phone aata hai
Naina=hello
Pooja=ho hai kaisi hai tu aur ali kaisa hai aaj mummy ji ka phone aaya tha nasim ka nigha the ho chukka hai usko bata dena. Dulha delhi se hai. Vahan businessman hai uska naam akram sheikh hai..
Naina=are vah pooja , vaise aapke miyan ki behan ki shaadi hai aap khud use kyun nahi bata deti
Pooje==dekh naina abhi tak humari ladai khatam nahi hui
Unhone mere ko vo gulabi salwaar kameez nahi lekar di aur itne din ho gaya ek baar bhi call nahin kiy
Achacha vo …… sab kaise hain
Naina=haan ali theek hai
Sidha bol uske bare mein poochna hai
Pooja==achacha huda se baat kar
Huda==haan bhai phoolan kaisi hai
Naina=theek hoon tu bata kaisi chal rahi hai zindagi
Huda=naiana Pakistan ki us jail se jailer ghulam sahib se contact hua hai
Bada achacha insaan hai
Ek khushkhabri hai
Unhone kaha apna allekh zinda hai
Aur vahan k log us humle ko rokne mein hum,ari puri madad karenge……………………
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dolly 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 gud work keep doing it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its nice but write somethin good for other cadets also....varna humein djs part 2 wala haal nazar ayega ....kiddin yaar ....but seriously yaar its really awesome....jaldi age ka likhna ....ok thanx

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