Do Pal Ek Dashtan (R-N)10/9.....

Hi! 😛 i am BHUMI..... i am trying to write this FF about rajeever( raj) and naina...i love those two....especially raj b/c it is played by RAJEEV😳..........they have great chemistry....😆This is the 1st time i am writing a FF...so if u dont like my concept..plz tell so i can improve it.😛

My FF revolves around KANCHANGA MILITARY ACADEMY...and My main characters.......RAJ and NAINA...and their friends

My FF contains ROMANCE😳, TRAGEDY😭, TRILLER, SUSPENSE and funny at some point😕....and many more things....i hope u like this story....and plz keep commenting😛

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i hope u like the intro........i will post the character sketch soon😳

Thanks😛

Bhumi😳

so my story starts from thh 1st episode of season 2...we see that RAJ-NAINA-RITU were standing in the truck with guns on their hands. raj in b/w and he is pointing gun to RITU (who is spy) and naina who is standing behind RAJ is pointing gun to him.

~:PART 1:~

wat r u waiting for naina...kill him? said RITU

naina before firing think......i dont care about my life...but plz think before u fire? exclaimed RAJ

naina dont listen to him he is one who killed your brother navin and my love..my life SAID RITU

(naina pulled her triger of the gun)

naina dont listen to her she is misleading u....think wat she did to navin..said RAJ.

NAINA KILL HIM? sais ritu

naina think about ur country...think wat u r doing is wat is good for ur country.....dont take wrong decision....think wat navin wanted to do for his country....SAID RAJ

(now we can see a confused naina...who is trying to make a decision but only think that she can think of is RAJ KILLED HER BROTHER...)

in background we can see that a tunnel is coming

ritu said wat r u thinking about naina KILL HIM...HE KILLED UR BROTHER...KILL HIM...

(now we r in tunnel and their is darkness so we cannot see anything......but we hear a shot)......

(who is being shot naina, ritu or raj............)

now the trucks came from the tunnel and we se that all 3 r standing in the same position...............we see all 3 r sweating......their face are wet...ritu has her eye wide open.....raj are red and naina looks like she is about to fall (unconcious)..........

~:PART 2:~

RECAP: we saw that RITU-RAJ-NAINA are standing in a truck with guns pointed to each other, and then we hear a gun shot?

the scene starts as all 3 are standing and camera focuses on ritu's eye they r wide open, raj's eye are red and naina's eyes seems like she is about to fall(unconcious)

they all stood at the same position for 2 minutes and then we see that RITU falls on ground. RAJ was socked to see that ritu is lying infront of him with blood all over her. raj then turns over and sees that naina still has gun on her hand pointed toward raj. as raj was about to say something NAINA falls down but raj catches her and places her head on his lap. He takes water and splits on her face.

he sees that NAINA is gaining her concious back. naina opens her eyes and sees RAJ so close to her and suddenly sits up. RAJ WAS CONFUSED BY HER BEHAVIOUR. naina sees ritu lying on floor with blood coming from her stomach. she signs and goes to other end of truck.
raj follows her and keeps his hand on her shoulder. naina turns and says I AM SOORY SIR.

RAJ was shoked ...after a while he said for what?

NAINA said: for behaving do rudly with u. i was so taken back by wat u said in academy that i forgot that you were best friend of bhaiya...i only thought u as a KILLER...who killed his best friend...(by now she had tears in her eyes and raj too )i just wanted to kill u at that movement.....so i took gun with me so i can shoot u as u did to my brother...BUT
RAJ said: but wat? (said in low tone)

she continued....SIR but when i was thinking i though when wat if i was at ur place how whould i do to handel that situation ? all those time that we spended together to find out who was the person who tried to fix this trap to get trrigers and blame bhaiya.

but when i was coming i heard ritu talking to someone........

FLASHBACK:
ritu: i know today cap.rajveer is going to die...not by me but by naina...his time is over..that trap that i formed 2 yrs ago in which NAVIN got traped...and got killed by me. yeah it was me who KILLED NAVIN.....when navin told RAJ to shoot him...raj refused as he wanted to save him...but at that time i fired gun from the bush...and killed navin as raj though he killed him...and today he told naina that her killed navin...
that made my plan more easier to steal trriger...

dont worry boss no body will kow that i am the SPY..

ritu: BYE

FLASHBACK OVER..

raj was shocked to hear and was happy to know that he didnt killed navin.
RAJ: naina i am proud of u that u took right decision, not b/c u didnt killed me but b/c u thought wat was right at that movement.

NAINA was silent..after a while raj again spoke up

RAJ: naina have you forgiven me?(he still had tears in his eye. and sounded low)

NAINA: she was silent for a while..YES SIR..

RAJ: raj was so happy that movement that a big smile came on his face..

NAINA: but

RAJ: but wat?(he said sounding unhappy)

NAINA: but i dont trust u anymore as i use to do.

raj was unhappy to hear that and his smile dissapeared from his face. but then he smiled as he thought

raj thought naina u will trust me as u use to do before...i am goin got win ur trust once again.

NAVIN spoke in background..

(TODAY RAJ GOT A NEW MISSION IN HIS LIFE..HE HAS TO WIN NAINA'S TRUST ONCE AGAIN...AND I KNOW THAT HE WILL DO IT VERY SOON)

hey wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon m waiting

cheers !!!! 4 ur new ff {m the ist one 2 reply}

again..............

cheers

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

hey wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon m waiting

thanks yaar.😛

Originally posted by: friend forever

excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting 4 next............

thnaks a lol 😛

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

cheers !!!! 4 ur new ff {m the ist one 2 reply}

again..............

cheers

thnaks a lol yaarr

RECAP:~
until now we see that naina tells raj truth that he haven't killed her brother infact ritu killed him and also tells him that she have forgivn him but doesn't trust him as she use to do.
THEN WE HEAR WAT NAVIN SAYS.

After their talk naina and raj took their seats and sat their silently. raj was just looking at naina and naina was looking outside and she was thinking something. raj could see that, that she is thinking and ask's her wat is she thinking?

NAINA: woh SIR, i was just thinking that wat ppl say about love is true.

RAJ: wat do u mean?

NAINA: ppl say that LOVE MAKES YOU BLIND.....and today i saw that too.

RAJ: naina why are you talking like this today?

NAINA: bhaiya fall in love with ritu and ritu took advantage of his love. she played wth his emotions and b/c of that LOVE today my brother is not with me. he knew that it was ritu who was spy and stole that trrigers but b/c he loved her he didn't said anything about her in the court.(tears fall from her eyes)

RAJ was silent..
after a while he said

RAJ: naina have u loved anyone?

NAINA looked at him with suprise and then said: NO..i dont want to fall in love. i dont want anybody playing with feelings.

RAJ: how do u know that u love him/her?

NAINA smiled and said: SIR, when you are in love u always want to look that person happy, you cannot see her in pain. you always imagine her with you. you have a different feeling for her. when she is near you, u smile but when she is not near you, u are sad. you always want her to be a with you. whenever you close ur eyes you see her.
i thinks that enough to tell that if u love someone.

RAJ thought for a while and then closed his eyes and he saw NAINA....many questions were arising in his mind. he questioned himself...WHY DO I THINK OF NAINA EVEYTIME? WHY CAN'T I SEE HER IN PAIN? WHY DOES I IMAGINE HER WITH ME? DOES THAT MEAN THAT I LOVE HER? NO THAT CNANOT HAPPEN.....I CANNOT LOVE HER..SHE IS MY STUDENT...?

NAINA looked at him and saw his confused face so she decided to change the topic
so she said SIR WAT POINT DO WE HAVE TO PUT THIS TRRIGERS.

RAJ said: at point 385N at jannat millap.

now the truck is stopped and raj and naina look at each other and then we see that driver comes to them and says that their truck had no GAS...raj yelled at him but then he thought it was of no use.

RAJ to NAINA: naina i think we have to walk from here.

NAINAl: lets go then SIR..b/c the sun is going to set soon so we better find the point.

RAJ: u are right..lets go

SO THEY BOTH HEADED TOWARD JUNGLE WITH A BOX CARRIED BY BOTH RAJ AND NAINA....both were silent while talking... it was quite dark.so.and they both decided to set a camp....raj said naina to stay their until he comes with some wood to set fire.

raj goes to get soem wood from forest and naina is setting tents..

we a person heading toward naina..(we cannot see his face, we an just see his legs) he has a gun in his hand...and he is behind naina now with gun pointing to her..naina feels like raj is behind her but as she turns see's a man who is not raj........

naina screamed...and raj hears her scream and suddenly he heard a gunshot...he got shocked...

and the camera ends on her shocked face...

hats off 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
perfect creating!!!!!!!!!!
good symbol of a future writer.........
waiting............
enjoy!!!!!!