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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

WHAAT . naila is pursuing law ?? no wonder she talks ๐Ÿ˜† n talks well ๐Ÿ˜‰ hi5 naila, we can hijack the thread now, hammie ki permission hai ๐Ÿ˜†

HUH colors n MR no not now plzz, i dont wish to spoil the party yet, some other time naila for sure.


OMG WAIT you're a fellow lawyer too Bharti!!!!!! Snap virtual hug and highest of hi5's to you. HAHAHA yes I love a good argument ;) (If Four years of Law school have taught me anything then it is: "Wow them with your brain,"
as to football: I know zilch so really even if I wanted I wouldn't be able to lead an anti-footie campaign LOL.

Hammie: Oh deary me, looks like I may have accidentally touched upon
a sensitive nerve. Yes let's leave it in the past. I'm not one for gossip anyway and I am rather enjoying my time here so yeah no need to divulge :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi hamletnew thread ๐Ÿ˜Šcongrats
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi hammiee hi nakooosha ๐Ÿ˜Š good to see you

Ek aur zabardast feat...another feather in u r cap which is already decorated๐Ÿ˜Š...i wish u continue writing ...entertaining u r fans...u r amazinggg hammiee in our caps naku.. nothing without your love and support.. love the image...๐Ÿ˜ƒ as ever yours hammie

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet hi jedy good to see you๐Ÿ˜Š
new thread ๐Ÿ˜Šcongrats yeshhh its ours.. thanks for your love and support.. much love hammie.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this forum is not me post my work... guess its the end of the line..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

this forum is not me post my work... guess its the end of the line..
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hain kyu ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hammie lion ๐Ÿค—
Where are you?? & what happened hammie lion??๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 11 years ago
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LTL Written Update
Episode ~ 229
6th December 2010
Dutta's Den
Well it appears that finally Naku gets to lie in her husbands bed, I hasten to add not as his wife but as a recuperating patient.. yet it's Dutta's bed she lies in .. in his den and not a guestroom! and her mother in law grants her this right.. lovingly she makes Naku comfortable , if you need anything just call out.. the maid will be posted outside at your beck and call. so it looks like Aye sahib is aware that her stubborn son will not attend to his wife.. Dutta had already shown his unwillingness to patch up .. to Aye Sahib in the hospital.
Naku gives a hopeless look to her mother in law, who instructs her, should the pain become unbearable then do take pain killers, they are over here on the bedside table.. and after a brief pause Aye Sahib says, I misunderstood you Naku ..I know it was I that told you to retain the truth about yourself from Dutta until after marriage.. and here I was getting annoyed by you too.. I knew I mistreated you.. despite the fact that you always gave all of us only love , and in return all of us have responded by hating you. But today you opened my eyes, for you saved my sons life in return for our hatred towards you. .. you are so different from everyone else ..is Aye Sahib here comparing Naku with her selfish daughter Kala.. who she knows only thinks about her self?
Naku replies, Aye Sahib ,don't embarrass me ,by saying so. Aye Sahib ,says dont speak, just rest for now...and she leaves.
Naku stares into space and reflects, FB.. I am your Nakusha! this is my real face! I'd rather die Nakusha , than trust you Nakusha.. hopelessly she sighs.. the song "muhje tum nazar se, girah tu rahe ho , mujhe tum khabi bhi bhula na sako ge.." you may cast me aside , but you will not forget me..
She recalls , how he served her water at the riverside.. despising it yet he did.. how he tucked her to sleep in the forest...don't know why ,but I believe my love you will never forget. how he held her hands in the forest; images of her marriage go back in her mind. How in the forest she slipped against him and he loathed her touches, how she still bandaged his palm, cleaned his wound in his room, whenever my name crops up in conversation, it will make you restless and you will hold your heart! darkness will cloud your eyes with sorrow! When asked the reason for your tears, even if you try, you will not be able to say so why?how her pain in the hospital transmits to him in the OT and his face tells it all.. Naku looks at her wound lovingly ..that which helped her win over his mother's trust at least. Painfully she turns to look at he painkillers and water on the bedside table. her fingers try to reach out for the tablets. Dutta strolls into his room..if my heart beat turns to fire! my emotions burn away in the form of tears! you will realize one day! but then I will not be in your life! even if you try you will not be able to forget me.Dutta looks at Naku can see what she requires, moves slowly towards the bedside.. looks down at her, turns face the other way.. then slips off his chain watch , just pushes the tray holding the tablets and water, to the edge of the table so she can reach easily.. and then in the space where the tray was , he lays down his watch.. straightens up.. puts on his folded knee on the edge of the bed where she lay.. stretches over his arm across her, gives her a sided look, and gradually reaches out for the head cushion beside her.. Naku watches him wide eyed , as he moves his arm back past her face. my memory will follow you where ever you go.. in a song or as a tear.. Straightens up and leaves clutching the cushion. Naku watches his back..then calls out Saab! you sleep in your room, I'll go! and she gets up from the bed.. Dutta stops midway and sighs.. and mutters, you have done enough favours already.. so not another one! just sleep here! and he continues to walk away.. but stops and turns.. clearly wanting to say more to her.. lest she has ideas.. don't think I am letting you stay here, out of love! would have done the same for someone else in your place! can't forget the one who saved my life! he says distantly , blanking her out completely..
Well Naku was not going to stand for his shirty attitude, so she gets up from the bed a second time...and feebly walks up to him and stands before him.. and reminds him , whatever I did it was for my love... so didn't do any favours! ..he refuses to meet her gaze .. as she may catch love in his eyes!..she moves past him slowly and trips and ends up against his chest! then moves backwards and swoons and Dutta catches her in his arms as she loses her balance.. then he scoops her up in his arms and like a good husband who tends to his ailing wife carries her to their bed.. Kala watches from the shadows of the door.. Dutta replies.. by carrying her, Naku's look up to his face by an equally, tender look.. walks to the point of the bed where she lay and carefully lowers her down in that space. While straightening her upper back his sided stubble face is near her face. She looks at his profile inches away from her forehead.. as he tries to pull back , her mangalsutra that gets caught on his kurta button! Kala grills in annoyance , Naku looks up to his close sided face, as his fingers struggle to un hook her mangulsutra.. he realizes the nearness and almost feels in a bit of a pickle, in a sulk he waits for her to do the needful becomes still and she releases the entangled manalgulsutra.. it is too much for Kala..and Dutta straightens himself up, kicks the cushion on the floor and leaves in a huff..
Down the stairs , Madhu waits for him.. she obviously wants to ask about how Naku was.. but he gives her such a freezing look that the poor girl is speechless, as in silence she watches her brother go towards the bar.
Madhu watches briefly than heads to Baji's room..
Baji's room
Baji finds a morose Madhu in his room, and ask's her what was bothering her? she replies simply, tell me what am I doing in this house? no one bother's about me Baji.. inspite of being with every one, I feel lonely.. sure I live in this family, but I share no bond with any one... really if you think about it who have I got in this family? one brother? he doesn't even give me a second glance! I feel like leaving everybody and returning to London!, she moans .. Baji goes to her side, and says, your leaving this place , what will that sort? have you ever thought about Aye Sahib? what about that promise she made to your babba. Do you think Bhau has only broken relationship with you alone? not at all, the man is even angry with himself! thing is this is life! mind you it's through rough times a man finds his true worth! how one wins people's trust! and look at you.. which Naku were you talking about? now looking at her, do you think she's weak? No this Naku is a tower of strength.. time and circumstance ,may try it's hardest to bring her down! but she fights and eventually over comes all impediments before her! because the girl doesn't know how to lose! she only knows how to conquer!
Baj adds hopefully, and also I believe that happiness will return to this house ponce again! Madhu is touched by Baji's words and she taps his hand affectionately to say thank you .and they give each other a meaningful look, and then she agrees , the good times will return to this house very soon.. Baji looks a bit smitten by Madhu.. who leaves much cheerful.
Kala's room
Kala stands planning her next move to thwart Dutta and Naku's union.. getting back together. Roops comes traipsing in full of beans, Tai guess what Bhau left Naku and went off.. Kala replies and I know and also where to ..aaand I am also aware that our dearest BIL Sudarshan ji has lost yet another golden chance, to become Bhau's right hand man! Sudarshan , sneers, fat chance of that happening.. would have done it ages ago, but Bhau never gives me the opportunity ..all the time he goes on about that Baji! gripes Sudarshan. Kala however reminds him , Baji is out of Bhau's life now! momentarily Bhau happens to all alone! so this the right time to make a place for yourself in Dutta Bhau's life, she instructs Sudarshan.
I too am thinking that why not arrange a party to celebrate Bhau's near miss of death once again! Roops gets all excited.. can I make all the arrangements? Kala snubs her, that I would have allowed if you had hooked Baji! I am warning you, act before someone else impresses Baji by telling him their sob story! and wins his heart.
Kala announces, ok then decided, shall we make arrangements for the celebration! mind you this celebration will be in the name of Nakusha!
Next morning
Kala approaches her mother and says, our family is going through tough times. First of all that fuss at the wedding. Then Apte and now Chaskar's attack on Bhau.. I suspect that Bhau's foes believe that Bhau has weakened! Kishore over hears and disagrees, these are all baseless rumours! Kala flies to him and adds, may be, but rumours spread like wild fire! people think there is dissension between Bhau and his family. Then she goes to manipulate her mother, we have to show his enemies, that Bhau's family is his real strength. Aye Sahib I want that we should all arrange a huge celebration at home! and we'll invite all of Bhau's friends, associates and business partners to this function! So that all can have evidence of the fact that Dutta Bhau's family stands by him! and Dutta Bhau is the same Bhau as before. Aye Sahib says , that's fine, but that she and Kishore are going to visit a temple in another place. this is what Kala wants.. her mother out of the scene.. so she can play her dirty moves..
So virtue is out of the way temporarily for vice to take effect.
Kala cleverly insists the party cannot be brought forward as some guests from outside have already been sent invites. Scanty Aye Sahib.. as usual falls into her daughters trap and agrees for the party to happen tonite.. at the scheduled time.. she says, besides Dutta needs both god's blessing plus the support of his friends and companions.. Aye Sahib entrusts Kala the responsibility.. besides I know you will handle everything marvellously.. Kishore though asks, has Bhau agreed to all this party? Kala replies calmly , oh Bhau understands his profession very well! he will not refuse, you people leave at the earliest and try to back before tonight's celebration..
Kala is smug as a bug! It's a good thing you two will not be here tonight.. as Nakusha will have the time of her life.. which your fragile hearts will not be able to cope with. episode ends Hamlet53~ 15.7.14
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Highlight of the episode is the Dutta / Naku scene.. have to say.. Dutta did provide both Naku and the audience some reason to chuckle by his brought on stiff.. gruff looks.. Naku in the FB.. have none that even in his off looks , he can be elusive.. hard outside .. but soft centred inside..
By now one can surmise..when ever we see Dutta and Naku.. briefly together.. the scenes to follow will all about Kala and her works..
Baji 's support to Madhu , alongside defends Naku.. and praises her for stoic courage and fortitude come what may.. he uses Naku's image and name to boost Madhu's low morale..
Don't know about any one else but I am sick to death of tasha FB.. Fillers totally.
N.B~ thanks for reading the previous wu.. fassben, jedy, uwith, naila, Naku, bart, tammy..
Terribly sorry for late monday ud.. was busy with guests.. tuesday's will be late too.. thanks for your patience.

Thanks for your help Yuvika... YOUR ARE THE BEST!โญ๏ธ... YESHHH GOT to post my
WU...
Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice episode kala stooping low as much as she can sent aai sahib away
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Hi :)
Ok firstly, Hammie you had us all a little worried there. I'm just glad you got to post! Thank you :)

Now for the episode usually I break it up characterwise but today I shall go scene for scene. Let's see how this pans out.

Scene one: Aye Sahib and Naku;
Yes as Hammie pointed out indeed we see Naku in her 'marital bedroom.' This isn't the first time, post the mandir situation, we saw her resting in Dutta's bed too. Alas then too their relationship was ambigious as it is now. Then Dutta was working through his inner demons trying to work out if and what he wanted from his 'relationship' with Naku and yes yet again they appear at the same cross roads. Except only this time, the stakes a much higher.

Back to the two. I was glad when AS finally admitted to her blunder. Yes indeed it was yourself and your daughter who insisted on keeping the secret, until after the wedding, but as soon as that idea went 'kaput' you were quick to drop Naku like a hot potato in the thick of it and deny the whole saga. Yeah kudos to you Patil women, showing how genuinely weak you are. But nonethless I shouldn't perhaps be too harsh towards one AS, considering she is a mother after all and I can (yes will you believe it) understand where she is coming from, even if I do not agree with her ways, it is understandable (I wouldn't go as far as saying that I am emphatic however.)

scene 2: the flashbacks. Yes I too am tiring of the constant Tasha flashbacks. SOmetimes it is a treat to relive those moments, but when it is shown, again, and again and yet again, to me that screams poor script writing. It shows me that a unnecessarily a storyplot is being dragged and fillers being inserted. Instead how about you actually show something else? Aren't indian soaps known for their long soliloquies and inner monlogues? May be a speech or better yet flesh out some of the other characters. The one that immediately springs to mind is Kishore and of course Leela. Kishore seems to wear that one expression and does one of two things; console his wife that everything will be ok, even when it is blatantly obvious she couldn't care less, or second he stands behind AS and nods every so often to whatever she has to say: "We're going to pray" Kishore nods, "Kale, Dutta is hurting" he nods, "Naku is Dutta's shield" he nods, "I don't wear too much blusher" He nods (Ok so may I have made the last one up, but you see my point right?) And there is Leela. Bichari, as beautiful as you are, and as spot on as your eye rolls are dear, you too must get tired from standing aroudn all day as Kala's Poosh. You know sometimes I honestly forget what her voice sounds like. So there you go, instead of the usual and mind numbing repetitive Tasha flashbacks how about we see some character development?

scene 3: the medicine. Ok now laugh with me, but Naku why could you not just swing your legs around and pick the medicine up? Oh Ok, I'm about as romantic as a wooden plank so clearly I didn't understand the whole: My Jaan has turned up 'Toh acting to banti hi hai' naturally she had to put it on a little, how else would he acknowledge her? Again Dutta made me smirk when he kept up appearances by pushing the tray aside to make room for his watch as opposed to helping Naku. Yes Dutta, smart one, but dude we see you. We know what you're doing. Good effort and all. But no. YOU CARE. We know.

This is also shown in the awkwardness of reaching out to the cushion. He could have easily walked around and picked it up, but again, my wooden romance feeds into it.

Naku always the hero: "I'll leave" here I somehow feel that Dutta's sigh and clarification of not needing anymore favours from her came off as bitter. In my headcanon this is how I see it. Had Naku not said anything. I don't think Dutta would have made the 'ehsaan' comment. I feel from his (twisted-may I add) point of view, he heard Naku saying 'I'll leave' as her doing another ehsaan on him. She treating their relationship as not being equal. Hear me out. We know they love each other, and even now they do. Yet in a desperate attempt to win back her husbands trust, Naku is pulling no stops to be the perfect partner. Except in doing that she is sidestepping the most important virtue of a marital relationship and that is equality. I feel like she is treated everything as though; 'make his life as easy as possible, smother him,' when really if he wanted that he'd stay single his whole life. He has a mother to fulfill that role. Naku as his wife should walk in step with him, she should be able to challenge him and support him. WHile there is no questioning she does the latter well-very well- I feel she forgets sometimes that she too has rights and she too is a person. She was the one that was injured, she was 'rightfully' laying on the bed. HE clearly didn't mind as he didn't say anything. May be perhaps this was one way for Dutta to move forward from their current stuck in the rut relationship. But Alas no Naku had to speak and be the hero. In doing so to me she went back to the 'ehsaan' part. Dutta feels if she is going to treat my efforts as an ehsaan: ie taking her to the hospital, letting her rest in my room- then he too will do the same when it comes to her-ie leaving the room so he can stay there. My only advice to Naku here is; that don't forget it was the vivacious, opinionated, not easily swayed Naku that Dutta fell in love with. Not the meek doe eyed enabler. He is looking for an equal one who can look him in the eye and tell him "No you're wrong" not someone who averts his gaze looks down and pretty much dances to the 'yes master' tune.

The falling and the chain lock: OK I am now laughing. But of course there has to be some filmyness right? Besides how else would dear sweet Naku have gotten the opportunity to be in Dutta's arms. For that, hi5 sister. ;)

As to the chain: I have only one thing to say: ONLY ON TV. that does not happen at all, only on TV.

HAving said that though there was a lot of symbolism involved. That despite Dutta and even to some extent naku's effort, no matter how hard they run away from each other they are soul mates and something will join them together. An invisible tether will connect them again and again. Those of you familiar with physics; would know what I mean when I say 'The string theory.'

scene 4: Bajiroa; oh how I do adore Vinay. He is such an excitable puppy. But before I get to him, let's talk about Madhu.

So far we have not really gotten to know her. Snippets of information; that she is a london resident and a student, that she craves a fmaily and from what it seems she is nice. But above and beyond that nothing. I suppose I shouldn't complain too much, she is far more fleshed out than some already existing members *cough-Kishore-Leela-Roops-Suds-COugh* ;)

But even so, we are limited. It is for that reason that right now I am quite indifferent towards her. I don't have enough emotionor depth to say whether I like her or dislike her. So for now, I will hold off from passing any remarks other than. She isn;t as clueless as she lets on, she knew what she was doing when she touched Baji's arm (Who has to be the most strange single guy in his twenties-I shall get to that below) she knew what she was doing and secretly I think she got a kick out of it. Naughty girl. ;)

Baji: Ok firstly bichara, have you seen anyone more upset about his best friend snubbing him than this guy? He's even left Joey/Chandler behind in terms of bromances. Poor guy. It was nice to see him show postivity in fact that is one of the more refrshing things about him, unlike Dutta who is just drowned in 'gham' ALL THE TIME, and AS who has a Phd in fainting and being the most depressed, even Babi and her constant crying and lamenting at her life, Baji is one of the very few more positive characters. He is always looking at the bright side. Which ties in very well with his character. Rightly so. :) Plus Vinay plays the role to perfection, so well done him.

Now to his strangeness: everytime a girl seemingly makes a pass at him, he is left astounded. First with Roops and the whole drama pre-madhu and now Madhu herself. The utter shock on his face. Wait is she talking to me? Wow is she touching me? Me? LOL. Does the guy not realise he is good looking and mostly that his dimples are his Achilles heel? Or is that he is so engrossed in work and his 'danda' that the only time he'll recognise flirting is when Kale winks at him. Which let's face it, considering the amount of time they spend together-and now that Dutta is married-is bound to happen sooner than later. ;) Either way I like it. He has that shyness and coyness which unfortunately is not shown on TV much. I don't may be He is aware but hides it knowing they are Dutta's sisters, or perhaps it's something else. But whatever it is, I like watching it. It does amuse me to no end. over all I think Roops summarised it well when she said Baji is ajeeb aside from bhau he see's nothing else.

scene 5: the Witches Den, oops I mean Kala's room. It really is like Kala is leading a bunch of idiots (SPOILER ALERT: part of me seems to understand why she would treat them or rather 'lock' them the way she does eventually-if I was in her position I too would grow tiresome of their idiocy)

scene 6: Next morning: And Kishore is doing what he does best, stand behind AS and nod. Well done lad. I've already pretty much comemnted on these two so I'll leave it to that.

Thank you for reading.
Once again thanks Hammie, don't worry take as long as you want between updates :) we'll all eagerly await :)

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