FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 65

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi rosefab story & ending...sensitive subject...you did a fab job...i had tears of joy...seeing them happy...thanxs👏
Edited by mirage123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful ending and epi...loved this joourney with u making this story touching our hearts...hats off to u
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi rose
awesome story...naku brought comfort & love in dutta's life...some scar takes time...it will heal with naku on family way...they are happy with their small family with anay
each emotion you put life in your character...its not new for to read...we want you back soon...plsss
Edited by uwith - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update~11

aww such a lovely update dear....aww naku & annay decorating lovely rangoli.....annay was taking his own sweet time to decorate them with colours....aww Dutta bought so many sarees for Naku..all were in his favourite dark colours ..Laxmi was soo jealous...She couldn't bear Naku's happiness...aww naku was continuously thinking of Dutta...she was ready to start a new life with Dutta..oh god drunken Dutta destroyed Both Ragoli...he hated to see lovely colours....he had a very terrible past...what happened to him??...naku saw dutta's rage & her past haunted her badly....but still she adjusted his leg& head's positions.....Dutta unknowingly held Naku's hand & poor naku ran off from there quickly....both have terrible past...but they didn't share it with each other.....hope they will share their past sooon....oh poor Annay...he was soo upset...his rangoli were vanished..Naku tried to console him...but he couldn't accept Naku's silly reasons....Dutta was in guilt....he unknowingly hurt Annay....but thank god annay hadn't seen him spoiling the rangoli with alcohol....but twinkle baby feeling sad for Dutta too...he was behaving like this just because of his haunted past...poor man...Naku was soo upset with him..dutta was distributing sweets to villagers...thank god roopa didn't come....dutta was respecting naku & she too offered sweet boxes to villagers...Dutta gave a bicycle as a gift to Annay..Oh god Dutta wanted annay to ride the bicycle by his own...he just held the seat for one round & he quickly withdrew his support..poor annay he pleaded him...but dutta was behaving like a strict father....naku too tried to help poor baby annay..but dutta stopped her also...oh noo annay baby

fell down & this dutta didn't bother about it &Instead of nursing the wounds he was compelling annay to ride again...naku couldn't bear anymore&she went against dutta's wish & took annay to nurse his wounds...thats what mother's love...aww naku applied the tumeric past on Annay's wounds..awww sweetest annay he took the paste on his little fingers & applied it on naku's scar..what a lovely bonding...last part was the best..loved it to the core dear.....such a mind blowing update dear..enjoyed it soo much..sweet rose..big teddy hugs from



























PS:-these comments are just for my own satisfaction dear...😳baby wants to finish all the 19 update comments dear..😳.




Edited by twinkle-star - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi rose
wonderful story...befitting end to a compassionate story
one holi day snatched everything from dutta ...& yrs after one gave him back happiness...
you weave words ...i 'm sincerely thankful to you
make a comeback soon😊
Edited by dilse14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you rose for a beautiful ending to a beautiful story of 2 damaged souls uniting forever...
it's never easy to forget a painful past , only love can heal wounds maybe not completely but true love does help, which Dutta got in abundance from his wife... thanks Rose for the lovely tory sad we won't have any ud to read, but was so good of you to have given us another wonderful ROSIE'S TREAT 👍🏼. Enjoyed reading until next time... see you Rose.😃🤗😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Update~10

aww such a lovely update dear
..enjoyed it soo much..aww sweet anay is the strong link between Dutta-Naku...Naku is so eased with the current occurrences..naku was feeding pigeons..twinkle you are the best, seriously your emoticons leave me surprised every time...lovely descriptions dear...err Roopa again entering into Naku's life...ha ha , yes she is a witch who happens to return at the wrong time..Err she is sooo selfish..she wants more & more money.....yeah , she wants money but nakku gave her babaji ka thullu dutta already gave so much of amounts to her...but she & her useless husband wasted it.....Poor Naku .roopa cast her evil eyes on Naku's gold chain /mangulsutra....naku got tensed..don't worry, dutta hai nah ..he will protect her like always ...she tried to hide Roopa from laxmi & Dutta...Awww Dutta trusting Naku & giving the household responsibilities and his cupboard key to her..Is it a key to open Dutta's heart too??...twinkle baby is getting naughty, trying to hook up tasha.hope Naku will unlock his steel heart soon...aww naughty Anay baby& naku totally drenched in water...but how could she even give an angry look to that sweeet little baby....hain?? naku in wet saree & dutta giving hot looks..now how can dutta resist her ?...aww naku she is choo shy & tightly shut her eyes...sweeetest update dear..baby will come back tonight with the next comment dear..soo sweet of you🤗...your comments are the sweetest and thanks once again for taking so much pain...you deserve a big hand.thanks soo much for the lovely update dear..big teddy hugs from twinkle baby...










wow nakku is feeding the pigeons , so sweet




..ha ha naughty annay




, he will eat her alive







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Aww mimi's Tasha siggy is mind blowing dear..lovely creations.....so happy that you like it

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi RoseAwesome...Dutta was drifting in life...He had no peace ...Naku a sad soul...entered his life...both got solace...you worded it ...touched by it...thanxs for giving a story to remember ...pls start a new SS soon
Edited by sona89 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

TMD~ chapter 19

Dear Rosie.. when I made a flippant remark on your promo.. that I await the Friday matinee.. I certainly never expected that the ending would be so soon!!! now this is the reaction writers get when readers are enjoying a story and it's taken away from them !! mera bhi kuch ye he haal tha.. but after second thought.. I have to thank you for this lovely tasha love saga...writing this ff was indeed a nice experience for me😊.

Right from the beginning it captured the essence of LTL1.. a maiden saved by a knight in shining armour.. an initially loveless marriage, the maiden with partly blemished looks.. and the knight despite his virtuous generosity.. has a darker side to him...i have to admit there are quite a few similarities though i didn't think that way. a young under five child who works wonders to bring the maiden and knight together...annay's character brought a lot of difference to the story😊.

In between Rosie, you tweaked the LTL 1 theme, by extending it ..e.g, both Naku and Dutta , accept Naku's slightly blemished face.. I also was impressed how you treated the trait of Dutta's self- harm by including his visits to the fighting ring,..even i enjoyed penning those parts . dutta without action can be a little boring.the nightmares.. and finally tackling the uncomfortable issue of child sexual abuse.. well done...thank you so much.

Now about the wrapping up of the story.. it reads as a logical and mainly realistic end...i am glad you feel that way😳. nowhere does Dutta become a new person, but one who mends his ways.. yet largely, he remains himself....hmm rightly said, some traumas are difficult to forget completely , they stay with you for a long time.with lots of working towards strengthening areas of his life that show weakness.. so yes basically Dutta is credible at the end of the story.. he's not perfect that's why as readers we can relate and accept him with his follies.. because no one is perfect..as long as we acknowledge the shortfalls and show willingness to reform.. gradually..

Thanks for giving the story a beautiful ending...Dutta and Naku.. uniting in their love and their union being blessed as well.. annay growing up in a secure family.. loved the section.. where you write Dutta misses his mother.. may be.. he will be blessed by a daughter....who knows? maybe😊 in some form his mother is returned?

Thanks rosie... yaar kitne bore hai tum.. meri fav.. story end kar de....you know all stories do end one day 🤗. ok.. ok... sowieee jane de..

[ waiting for new story] much love , grrr roaring hammie...thanks a lot dear for your constant support and appreciation , it made writing this ff easier for me😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
@ dilse - i am glad you liked the subject , yes it was tough but the support of all of you made it easy. thanks for the roses.

@ tamanna - yeah, finally all in the family are happy. annay is going to school and tasha await the arrival of a new member .

@ fassben - thanks a lot for appreciating the last part where all pieces finally fall into place. tasha have found each other and their pure love will help them overcome their dark past.

@ nakusha - i know you love happy endings sadly IWL didn't have one but this time i owed it to you guys. i am really happy to know that you think that the sensitive subject was handled well. glad that i didn't disappoint you and the story lived upto your expectations. thanks for the red roses. will surely miss them.

@ ranjana - thank you so much for finding the ff awesome.

@ jedy - thanks for the lovely yellow rose and you are right true love can make life easy. tasha have suffered a lot in the past but now they are together and surely they will heal each other.

@ mirage - yes all well that ends well. thanks a lot for finding the story and its ending fab.

@ usha - i am glad the story managed to touch your heart. thanks for the appreciation.

@ uwith - wow what a beautiful bunch of pink roses, thank you. it feels nice to know that you feel the emotions of all the character. thanks for finding this different story awesome.

@ tahera - rightly said, some wounds are difficult to heal even after years they leave a scar behind but true love does help and that's what tasha always crave for. thanks a lot for taking out time to read and comment. i am glad you liked the story

@ sona - yes tasha had a miserable past but now there's nothing to worry. their love will bind and heal them. thanks for the pretty red rose.

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