FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 31

Hi rose

Superb ud...naku did try to talk about anay ...it does require courage...she is trying...morey will develop enimity more than he had before...ud plsss soon😊

TMD~ chapter 8

Hi Rosie..

I was amused by her confusion over whether he smoked or not.. surely she can smell it his clothes, smokers garments reek of tobacco!

Ladoo making scene was a great activity of interacting with aanay. It also made Nakusha aware of other odd issues related to the little boy and more so his uncle.. who obviously things home tutoring is the best one to one academic attention aanay can get.. Dutta is unable to see the importance of social skills developing in the lad.. which he is denying aany...

The little taking lunch activity, that turns out into an idyllic picnic.. was well described and there is a relaxed ring to it.. although Dutta disapproves of it at first.. Naku gets to learn something new about uncle and nephew.

Dutta is wary of aany being brought to his work place, I wonder why? is it that Dutta fears aany may see Dutta's method of operating at work, roughing people up on occasions if the need arose..? I mean look what he was doing to Morey a while ago.. or is it that he doesn't want his gangster lot knowing he has a young child in his family, as it might prompt aanay's kidnap..?

So it seems that aanay for the minute remains point of interest between Dutta and Nakusha too.. around him many questions are raised.. waiting for more answers to unfold.Thanks a lot for an interesting and well written chapter rosie.. enjoyed it.. much love hammie.

Chapter 6

Welcome to the "who is more mature" competition

Annay v/s annay ke sexy maamu☺️

Round one

Annay: 01; Annay ke maamu: 00

Round 100

Annay 100000; Annay ke maamu:00🤣

OMG he actually did that? Sulked over cold water and hot water! He is so cute😆, I feel like pulling his cheeks, especially when he tries to reason out that how things are easy for annay and not for him😆.and when he vowed to arrange separate cupboard and toiletries for her...even the wedding vows were not that genuine.😆 And the high point was when he rubbed the soap closing his eyes tight...it reminded me how during childhood after listening to ghost stories we used to cross the dark corridor to reach the bathroom.🤣

Anyways let me inform you that both annay and his maamu are more mature than you. God the tantrums you throw.

Coming the update.

Wonderful start...the insecure dutta who fears of failing as a husband. Sometimes I wonder did he actually not wish to settle down or that's what he always wanted?

You were brilliant while penning down a five year old dutta, who throws his shoes and shouts, I hate you when not complied. I didn't enjoyed the bathroom scene much AND take it as a compliment, in course of one update you have managed to establish nakusha so firmly in her new surrounding that it seems that she has belonged to there for ages. Not only him but even I could feel her presence everywhere even in the bathroom🤢. Well a bath works exactly the same to dutta's brain as almonds do to ours😆. Right when I was all preparing myself not to cringe at his shouting over these mundane stuffs, you saved him.👏

Why her pain does affects him so much? Just because somewhere he feels himself responsible for it or does he relate to it. I love how he keeps getting flashbacks of the wedding with nakusha's pain being the highlight. He is intrigued and I like that.Okay umm...I said earlier that I didn't enjoyed the bathroom scene, errr I take my words back, I reread the sequence(mind you I always read bath sequences three times😆) with my imaginations running wild, it was a fab scene, I love the fact that in each of your updates dutta avoids using normal water, be it cold or hot it has to be extreme, enhances the effect of the bath.☺️ And thank you for that messy wardrobe detail, I'm sure you know how much unrealistic dutta's well maintained wardrobe in the show was to me.

Well rosie, you were amazing in showing both amateur and mature side of dutta. It was so well gelled together..it was many dimensions of one personality- dutta... rather than dutta being a multi dimensional personality. And still while trying to be mature and all, he was thinking about having a new towel and toiletries😆. And what was that having a separate set of toiletries will make servants doubt? I guess he likes removing strands of hairs from his soap.😉

And OH MY GOD...he in his vest and pajama, drying his wet hairs with that red towel❤️. Mere imagination of the sight makes me go weak in my knees☺️...and alas chudial ne maari entriyaan😡. She did that purposefully😡, I'm telling you she did that on purpose😡. No body can be so lucky😭. And she spoiled the site as well😡😡...or else sweetu would have taken his own sweet time in getting ready. See! I try so hard to like her, but she just makes sure that I hate her🤢. LOLzzz...a confused dutta over turmeric paste was so cute and funny as well. Imagine if naku would have said "saab isko lagaane se aap aur bhi gore (fair) ho jaoge.😆

I feel that the fact that nakusha witnessed him having nightmare has changed a lot. Dutta isn't as formidable to nakusha as earlier, she realizes that he is human with his own share of pains.

The breakfast sequence was very refreshing in an otherwise serious story. Though it was more on nakusha bonding with the family, but I couldn't help but notice the small sequence where annay threw a chikoo towards dutta, it was adorable. Anyways dutta eating a fruit...sigh! it's a treat❤️. I'm so glad all because of laxami , sweetu gets nice breakfast, else in the last ff it was all toast😡. I just loved the whole breakfast scene but more than because of dutta nakusha or annay in person but all three of them together..it was a lovely scene😳 and with a heavy heart I have to admit that nakusha had my attention way more than dutta through out. She created home , and it was heart warming and the way she was hoping to find a place for herself was heart wrenching.

And OMG Malmal moore...first anna and then moore...back to back my favorite villains. More than anna it feels nice to have moore...coz I have full faith in you..I'm sure you will fulfill my long desire of seeing moorey being whipped. So my anticipations were sky reaching while having the last part and you certainly didn't disappointed me..in fact you have mastered the art of pleasing me.

First thing first..uff rolling the paper weight...the power he executed the initial opening made sure that it remains a lion and a doggy conversation. So newly baptized harilal is also there😉😆. I'm so happy, I feel like jumping over the fact that... yes dutta is NGO type but he is a shrewd businessman. His money, his land matters to him and I Iove this fact, absolutely. I'm so happy for BG kaale ji at last he got his due footage and he is khaoing kuch jayada hi footage.😆

Life mein kabhi bhi..mark my words kabhi bhi I was not this happy over nakusha's entry, she just changed the whole parameter😃...she has raised the bar so high. She is complementing dutta...the way he reacted, the very gesture of throwing that paper weight ...it has given dutta and all together different dimension...he was chilling in that sequence. It took a while to the idea that something like this took place to sink in. I was clearly not expecting the update to turn out like this. So far this is my favorite update surpassing the street fight one. Umm but I loved the street fight as well,...okay decided street fight and this one both are my favs.❤️

So iss update ke liye itna (?) hi,...will be back in a while

Chapter 7

Wow...what a trunk, mightier than a Maleshwar Anna.😆 One bruise in foot and banda line pe.😆 And let me appreciate his messed cupboard once more. You know sab kuch theek thak jaa raha tha...unless she decided to touch my sweetu's clothes😡. I mean what was that?😡 Time pass nahin ho raha toh kisi bhi paraye mard ke kapde utha kar press karne lage gi?😲😡 And leech kahin ki...imaging him with that white kurta pajama, and having unethical thoughts. I'm telling you I hate her!😡 Look at me, such a sanskari ladki, never imagines him in any of his kurta.😛😆

Dutta is possessive way too possessive. But then an over possessive dutta, nakusha and malmal moore are an ideal combination.😉 And I like it this way, that's what and that's how dutta is...extreme!! Look at this nashukri (thankless) girl...she thinks what he did to moore was because of anger issue...gadhi it was for you😡 But then I'm glad she didn't noticed...abhi ke liye she has enough respected her

And the best part... though nakusha has nothing to do with annay-dutta bond (the bond is already there and is great) still I can see the scope of nakusha playing an vital role in it. It was nice to see for a change that heroine gets to reshape an already stong bond between the hero and his loved one in a more healthy way.If it plays one of the binding cause of tasha..that would be great.😳

Annay is really cute😆...and I liked the detail of his eagerness to get the class over. School rooms are different, there's lot many scope to entertain oneself but private tutions at the age of annay can be boring to death. For all my school days I have pitied those who used to take private tuitions. So, we have maadhu as well...well I have always liked her, she was one of those very few females of LTL who had a soothing persona.

Hey when she asked him about dinner and he replied "haan laga de" it was so normal'. There was an ease. I guess he has most of the issue with her inside the room. So, its dinner time and lolzzz but I thought that dutta would bring out his gun if once again she refuses to have food.😆 I guess annay has more patience than him and I swear this is the last time I'm comparing him annay, what he did with the coriander after than comparing him with annay would be an straightaway insult to annay.🤣

Now, on a serious note there are two sequences which make this update absolutely adorable.❤️

First, where we got a glimpse of nakusha's past. It was heart touching. Everyone should take a lesson from this girl. Seriously this story stands apart in all your works in the sense that very subtly it teaches us to respect whatever we got coz many don't even get that.

Second one is annay dutta scene...he reminds me of my dad sometimes. Even his extra protectiveness😳. I quiet liked the detail of annay's love for balls...explains how much he desires to be outdoors...but alas!!Gadha doesn't understands it...not his fault, it's the forte of his community, apart from work men can never be farsighted.🤪

Look at this girl's audacity...thoda sa achcha behave and bandi is checking him out!😡 Okay tell me one thing what exactly she thinks that she starts blushing? 😉😛Lolzz...that was funny how she decided to postpone discussing about annay's schooling and decided to concentrate on having a conversation, with more than syllables.😆

Okay the whisky petrified her...as far as I can guess?😕 But why? Some past issue, any assault by any drunkard..probably. But whatever I quite liked the way it was penned down, she sounded terrified but at the same time she leaves you with a feeling of going to her and comforting her. And what I loved most was how dutta was not exactly apathetic towards her changed behavior, in fact doesn't appreciate it as well!! Though he tried hard not caring about it especially when he "decided to make himself another drink. This one she didn't let him enjoy"😆

Poor dutta...now I realize why he turns so hostile towards her inside the room...her presence doesn't let him practice kick boxing properly..poor guy was so alert about avoiding his nightmare and super kicks.🤣

Chalo the best part that came out of whole whisky thing is that dutta is intrigued about her past...hope the layers delayer soon

Will be back with the next...

Originally posted by: Nakusha

plzzz ud