FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago

@ afzal - thanks for finding the update awesome , yes nakku is surely making a place for herself in his room and soon she will end up making a place for herself in his heart as well.

@ tamanna - yup nakku too has a painful past and hopefully you shall figure it out in the future updates. thanks for commenting.

@ twinkle twinkle rocking star - i am glad you enjoyed the update a lot and thanks for the pretty rose.

@ mirage - lovely dp and you shall know soon why is nakku afraid of dutta. thanks for reading n commenting.

@ nakusha - now let me congratulate you that for first time you have guessed right , indeed nakku is afraid of alcoholic dutta and not sober dutta. happy ???šŸ˜† thanks so much for the lovely rose but i have a complaint , see i don't repeat my stories or updates then why are you posting old rose pics ? i want a new pic in every comment 😳

@ ranjana - even you have guessed correctly, the moment she see him drinking she gets tensed. must say my readers are far more intelligent than dutta 😊 thanks so much for taking out time to read and comment.

@ jedy - yeah nakku's childhood was sad and painful but hopefully with annay around she feels better. your dp is very cute and i love it , good nakusha pushed all of you.

@ fassben - aw what beautiful glittering roses. you all have rightly figured it out , it is the alcohol that scares nakku mainly because its connected with her past. thanks for the appreciation and hope you like the next part too.

@ uwith - so happy to know that you found the update awesome . i hope you continue to enjoy this story and find answers to all you queries.

@ sona - nakku has lead a very lonely and deprived childhood and in annay she sees her past , doesnt want him to go through the same. thanks for sharing your views.

@ hammie - first of amazing dp , yes nakku has taken on the role of a wife and too quite seriously so you find her setting his cupboard and ironing his clothes. thanks a lot for appreciating the part where she thinks that color of his suits match his personality and mood ..i truly believe your choice of color says a lot about you. i don't think you are expecting him to thank her for arranging his cupboard but maybe he will acknowledge her gesture and that too when he is in the right mood šŸ˜† what hammie you found the dinner scene amusing ? you should be eager to know that why she gets scared šŸ˜‰ anyways thanks so much sharing your thoughts , its always a delight reading them.

@ emily - nakku is not used to of living a comfortable life so she keeps herself busy. thanks so much for finding the update awesome and you shall know about her past soon.

@ usha - yes dutta is eager to know the reason behind her sudden change in behavior and hopefully he will find soon . thanks for the appreciation.

@ tahera - even though nakku has not been to a school herself but i guess she knows that school kids go out for picnics and even if she doesn't then i am sure madhu has explained her thoroughly about it 😊 well dutta might want to know what worries nakku but i don't see him approaching her instead he will expect her to spill the beans herself. thanks for sharing your views.

@ dilse - annay reminds nakku of her own childhood, she hasn't been to a school herself but wishes that at least annay goes and has an enjoyable childhood. thanks for the appreciation.
Edited by stranger2rose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for anno pls give us a promo too
tahera57 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks rose , I hope there is a promo to come b4 ud... too long to wait without a promo
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi rose
Waiting for UD😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi rose
chalo for a change guess work was rightšŸ˜†...wht u find the rose repetative not fresh as u r ...i will fire the florist..😔go hunting for fresh rose..😳.ud soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

res..

Hi Rose, hope you remember me ?..hi bharti , good to see you again 😳 anyway im here n you have no choice but to grin n bear..you are absolutely right and let me make it a little better for you , you are not the only one who keeps me waiting for comments , aish is also the same šŸ˜†

Chapter 5
Naku,s day out err day in the room cum bathroom was superb,..thanks if she can be overwhelmed by one soap used by him what happens when he is gonna touch her lol...well that needs to be seen, 😃
his pitiful act of marrying her has left her in a spot where she is doomed to remain a second class citizen in this house, her marital status in a limbo.
But naku has a way of making peace against all odds, an expert at that...right, here she has no one to share her problems with also no one to guide her so she has to find solutions herself. Anay,s presence should help her even more, but how come the child is alone? no trace of his parents ?..his parents are dead. You said it right rose, double standards by dutta, expecting little anay to understand n accept naku,s presence.

Chapter 6

So the stubborn mule has taken a u turn,..not a complete u turn but he is trying to adjust ready to share toileteries, bathroom, bedroom, more imp dining table with her?..about the dining table he has no issues, it is just his bedroom and his personal space that he doesn't wish to share thats a huge turn around actually. šŸ˜›
Both suffer from same mental block, pehle poochte hai sawaal pe sawaal phir khud jawaab doondte dono. ..lol, what to do , there is no baaji n babi to help them
Maybe anay can teach dutta a few social skills. How quickly he,s adopted to his mami, it sounds sweet.
Dutta finally displaying some signs of warmth towards naku. Actually he,s being posessive, atleast in front of morey, huh! morey deserves the mehman nawazi 😔

Chapter 7
Rose, your unhurried style of writing is mesmerising...really ? thanks a lot.šŸ‘ liked how you brought out the fear, anxiety of nakusha in dutta,s presence. The mere thought of him sends shudders down her spine and he is blissfully ignorant infact irritated.
Hmm he surely aint such a dreadful person afterall, Now why didnt she apply or offer to apply medication to his latest burns. ..poor girl was so terrified , how could she nurse his wound and moreover it was a minor burn I thought she is equally persistent. Hmm she is blushing watching him in his night suit, what was she thinking by the way..ask her šŸ˜†
Poor anay needs co., n naku should help the child grow up normally. Hope she persuades him in sending to the picnic for starters. Glad he took one step further by inviting her to sleep on the couch, we are waiting for the next initiative eagerly. ..what do you mean by next initiative ? kindly explain šŸ˜‰
Thank you Rose for putting up with such a lousy reader like me,..its alright , at least you read and commented on all the chapters n sorry you had to read my backlog,..please , no sorry but i wouldnt have it any other way 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago


With hands deposited in his pockets, dutta casually walked up to morey and stood just inches away from him. Today morey wasn't wearing his sunglasses as a result dutta could easily look into his eyes and see all that he desired. There was pain, anger and regret. Pain on losing his money. Anger on being helpless and unable to do anything about it. And regret, messing with him. Dutta slowly buttoned the two open buttons of morey's tight shirt. In the end he even buttoned his collar, choking him slightly.

" agli baar meri PV mein maalik banne ki sochna toh bahut door ki baat..mehmaan banker bhi mat aayio." With that dutta signaled his men to take him away. With the right he was right but with the wrong he didn't mind going down the wrong way to show them the right path. He didn't always need to defeat his opponent with muscle power, he could do the same with his brains as well.

Full update on Saturday.

Edited by stranger2rose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks rose for the promo...no clue on what's happening with our jodi
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi rosie ,thanks,for the annotations and the promo.. acshun! love it..
looking forward to sat..
much love hammie.
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Posted: 11 years ago
morey is a monster...waiting for ud

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