Fettered Affection~thread 2~chp 36 p.107 30.5.14

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uwith

@uwith

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

hi hamlet

nice ud...dutta & naku are still not over with their tiff...dutta & baji convo was good ...baji get sense & stop following diggu & madhu...dutta fought & taught lesson to his enemy...dutta & naku in precap...plesant precap...pls ud soon

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

for dedicating this update to me ..it feels nice to sizzle around , i will take my time to come up with a new story , sorry to disappoint you. Now enough of me , lets move on to this action packed update.

now can i pull dutta's cheeks ? seriously he is such a baby won't have a pain killer till it is given by nakku as though it will not work if he has it on his own and same goes with the food will not have it until its served by his lady love , even babi is getting around and pushing her daughter to him ..what babi, couldn't you do this before..unnecessarily making her lion roar ( but i do understand her pov as a mother)..nakku can sense that he is in danger ..wonder what will she do when she knows about it

this deegu never lets me down , always proves he is good for nothing ..aw i wished AS had heard dutta saying main sirf apni aayi ka beta hoon ..I am sure AS would have fainted out of happiness

wow dutta getting ready for action in black pathani ..i just love it , thanks for bringing back old memories ..seriously hammie you deserve applause 👏 for the way you have penned the action scene , seems so effortless and perfect , i could easily visualize the whole scene ..well done dear , i should take tips from you for writing such sequences and dutta is more like robin hood than a gangster , hope nakku also feels that way when she knows the truth until then nakku take care of this stubborn child who is again in need of painkillers , seriously what was the need for him to jump around the jeep like this , unless he is craving for her attention that he will get next day😉

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Hi ham
Love the ud
Ye dutta bhi painkillers bhi chahiye to wo bhi naku ke haath se dutta ko naku ke zaroorat thi ya painkillers ki lagta naku dutta ke liye painkiller ka kaam karti hai
Good dalchini out of the picture
Enjoyed the action sequence
Hammie where do you get such unique name jabra chachaa i hope there is no character named batisi chachi
Thanks for pm n ud
Hope next chapter naku nursing dutta

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

hi hamlet

superb ud...jabra & digu out of scene awesome...naku is keeping vigillance ...dutta be aware...😆...plsss next ud soon

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sona89

@sona89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Hi hamlet
awesome ud...dutta fighting the goon...he has exerted himself...wht nobody can do dutta can.😊...he doesn't need anyone other than baji...he proved it...naku is waiting for dutta...pls more of dutta & naku...ud soon