Fettered Affection~thread 2~chp 36 p.107 30.5.14 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ivy_11

@ Tamanna -- Great photo essay. Dutta and his expressions

@ Bharti - Brilliant comment and thanks for the Dutta vm.😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi hamletnew thread congrats...awesome ud! dutta felt betrayed by all...naku confessed ...dutta can find solace ...if naku trys to win him back...dutta has taken hard way ...naku can help him...pls ud 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie. Firstly congrats on this brand new thread, may this bring new vigour n loads of joy, Happy Writing !

But Are you for real? 😃 What a superlative start to the second thread, im spellbound by the intensity of the update.. 👏

Dutta has come to mean dard to me.. Nothing comes easy to this man. Just when he begins finding a hold on his life, there,s another hard fall shattering his trust in himself n his trusted ones.

The accidental bumping onto the truth has pushed him backwards n he,s once again left suspecting his own ability to judge people. As if it wasnt enuf babi rejecting him, his family sheilding him from the truth has singed him more.

It was not as if he would slip into some coma if the truth had been revealed, it was silly n preposterous to assume he needed to be protected from the bitter truth 😡 cmon, he,s no pussy, he,s seen worse times in life n fully capable of handling adversity. Im totally with dutta n detest bein mollycoddled by all n sundry.

Luvd his tirade against his family n making sense too, haan you can call me overly biased for dutta, but he,s a man who,s like an open book n when things are withheld from him, its naturally demeaning to him. Bravo dutta, was cheering him when he says "jail ka chakkar khake aya hu, koi zoo nahi" 😆 N these minnows doubting his capacity to soak up rejection, haina dutta? Baji bearing the brunt of his rage lol.. Was amusing him being pushed n shoveled, as ever i gues... The eternal punching bag in a way 😛

He,s takin AS headon then turns the heat on to the hapless purohit, WAY TO GO BHAO, how can a girl who hides behind soot be the suraksha kavach of the mighty dutta 😆Brilliant ! More hurtful words for naku, but she asked for it by not comin clean.

Haaiinn ?? AS stealing dutta,s words n is chanting "mujhe naku chahiye" 😆... I thought this was dutta,s prerogative.
Hmm, he,s reflecting how kali gori had played a game of hide n seek, so now its payback time, is he convincing himself to hate her, lol..

What a twist hammie you gave, bringing in sups, luved it thoroughly, that was a master stroke.. 👍🏼 SIC,, once again its setup by naku.. ok, ok whatever, im waiting to see what he has to say to the sexy supriya. He,s almost guessed if naku had any role in setting up this meeting, YES YES dutta i was screaming 😆

Hammie you are in full control of the plot i thought, words just kept flowing at full speed n hitting the sweet spot everytime, yeah, thats a tennis phrase... 😉
Once again enjoyed his candid tete a tete, well almost cause he was not sure if he wished to accept his strong feelings for naku, oooh poor gadha, just like naku flip flops this fella oscillates between bein a sher n a gadha every few minutes... Kamaal ki jodi banaya rab ne 😃

Supriya was bang on asessing him, but why did he stiffen at her slight leaning towards him, its as if he fears for his chastity with supriya around 🤣... Haye, one woman man 😉 The discussion was more like dutta moaning n supriya,s soothing words a healing touch, this part was beautifully written hammie, actually the whole thing.

Come again? 🐷😆 "mardon se age nahi poochte" ?? ooh God, this man is such an adorable gadha.. But Hey wait, where is your manners man? not a charming patient now is he,..rudely cuts short the meeting. Baat khatam meeting khata

Finally naku confessing to babi, but what a quick uturn babi makes, no wonder naku has mastered the same trait lol... Now both mother daughter duo will woo dutta, should be fun. Pantry queen knows best way to a man,s heart is thro his stomach, but will it work with dutta, i doubt, not with his appetite.. But he,s a weakling when it comes to naku, she has cast her magical spell around him, yet he has scathing words in store.. It felt as if he,s screaming on the inside for naku,s love but faking revenge outside, Tit for tat, grow up dutta, yaar he,s enjoying her misery 😈

Haye haye, dutta ka majnu missing him dearly lol.. Mehbooba ke saat ?😲 N i take it as the pistol, oh no! A hurt sher seeking to taste blood n as they say a wounded animal is more dangerous.

Hammie, the long wait was more than worth, n we couldnt have asked a better opening for the 2nd thread. It was a gripping update with a wounded sher at his best, Fantastic effort hammie, you truly deserve all the adulation n pampering.. I know its a herculean task managing 4 threads n it takes a heavy toll of your precious time n energy.
But this poor reader can only Thank you for everything 😳 dilse.. ❤️
Take care, God bless you

Hammie here,s a vm depicting a hurt dutta n i luv the song too, hope you enjoy it...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a4Dxy39Lh3Y&sns=em[/YOUTUBE]
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hi maal
loved the comment & VM...all fond memory rewind...thanxs dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats fr the new thread...awesum updt...duttta tooo hurt...nakkku hav to try really hard...continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI Hamlet

First I what to say congrats on starting thread 2 and what a start. So Dutta find out the truth and Is hurt not just that they said no to this marriage but also that his own family hid It from him and for this dutta now himself say No. I hope some how and soon Nakku will win his heart

Thanks as always take care



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Posted: 11 years ago
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hammie ..must say a very power packed start to the new thread ..lots of drama , lots of crying tears and dhokha ...but sorry to say for the first time after reading an update i don't know how to react ..i mean i can't point out who is right who is wrong ...dutta's ego is hurt by seeing him rejected by babi or knowing that he is not fit for nakusha ..after having a traumatic past , all he needs is pure love and acceptance..something he is not getting and that is infuriating him...he is a straightforward guy and expects the same from people around him..to an extent i feel nakku is at less fault than dutta is assuming n blaming her to be..now if i look at babi , even her concerns are quite justified and coming to the family they were only discussing about his marriage ..deep down they all want to see him happy ..so in a way everybody is right but still nobody is happy and now to make things worse he has picked up his gun
waiting to read how you take this story further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awe...What an awesome start for our thread 2...Awe..Such a wonderful treat for us dear...Full of our wounded sher's Roars & rage...Hammie!!!!...Really enjoyed your energetic pack dear...Superb job...Hats off to you Hammieee





Awe...Dutta knew about Babi's refusal...This is the much awaited part dear...Perfect reaction from Dutta...You did full justice to his character...This is our very own Dutta...enjoyed his rage...Hammie!!!..You are an excellent writer dear...His baji ,kala Tai& his his whole family the truth from him...Dutta got into his Dhoka Dhoka mood...Everyone got hot words from him...Poor Purohit ji...Dutta's rage turned to him... ...Oh!!!!...Kali gori is Dutta's Suraksha gowaj...This word added fuel to his rage...Thank god nothing has happened to Purohitji...baji is always Dutta's angry carrier...But he is a cool person...He signaled others to keep quiet... He knows about Dutta very well...Poor naku...He used hard words for her...He got angry & he lost his brain..Finally Dutta went out after finished his hot roars ..Kala consoled AS...Baji dialed dutta's number but it was non reachable...Hammie!!!...I totally loved this rage part dear...Your descriptions , narrations & everything are mind blowing...I'm totally awestruck dear...













dutta drove his jeep in a angry mood & received call from Supriya...It's naku's idea...Who else can think brilliantly other than Naku???...Dutta needed a strong counseling..Supriya did a great job..Loved her advices...Her words soothed Dutta's pain ...Anyhow Our gadha is gadha.But hope Supriya's advices knock some sense into him..he needs more time to convince with Supriya's words...Hope he'll realize the situation& back to his normal mood soon ...





Poor Naku!!!...Finally opened her heart to Babi...I can't believe this...such a positive reaction from Babi...But it's too late now...Convincing Dutta is not a easy task...Our Sweet gadha hasn't give up very soon...BUT his only weakness is Naku...Naku prepared food for Dutta...Kala & Roops Consoled Naku... Dutta behaved very rudely with Naku...But inside his heart he is missing her a lot...He feels lonely now...Loved Naku's confidence..Dutta's angry can't stand behind Naku's continuous love..This guy will definitely totally bowled down by Naku soon...Awe...finally this angry stubborn baby had his food..Naku saw this & peacefully went away...Dutta gave dirty job to Baaji..








Awe how can we wait until Friday now???...OK ...OK...I heard some angry roars& grrrs from our writerji...But hammiee!!!...You can't blame us..We all are innocent babies...Your superb updates are always making us like a crazy fans...We all are eagerly waiting for the next update Hammieee...Please update soon...Thanks sooo much for your mind blowing action package dear...Loved it sooo much...Specially Dutta's angry glares & roars...OMG!!.I missed them soo much...Hats off to your dedication dear...You give up your shopping & relaxing time for entertain us...We don't get enough words to say Thank you dear..We all luv you sooo much..sooo sweeet of you...Take care...TRA' Twinky...








Edited by twinkle-star - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@twinky.. Hey you got all the sexy glares of dutta in one place 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi hamletawesome new thread😊nice UD..its sad dutta's proposal got rejected even before it was discusseddutta acted in haste naku should win him overone thread over kick start their luv story in full swing 😆pls ud soon
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Edited by dilse14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

@twinky.. Hey you got all the sexy glares of dutta in one place 😉




Hi Bharti🤗
Thank you so much dear...🤗.This angry rage Dutta is Twinky baby's favourite Dutta☺️☺️...I was waiting for this dhoka dhoka moment......Hammie did a brilliant job....what an amazing update dear......loved your's & Tammy's awesome comments dear..❤️❤️.your vm also awesome ..Enjoyed them sooo much dear...

Edited by twinkle-star - 11 years ago

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