Painful Rapture thread3 last part/ p.133~ 28.12.12 - Page 54

Originally posted by: -bharti-

😆 hi bart... so you made it at last.. haan you never let his sad hammie down do you? yep can bank on you.. ke tu aye ge apne boom boom,rocking comments ke saath firing all guns!

mooli is back before u smack... now dont u dare give those smelling dakaars, chup chap pado..haaa love these creatures now are they felines or canine friends... but bundar ummmh don't know.. but 10/10 for creativity ... so your kala bandar is a square??😆... aacha hai

The journey back was forlorn with downcast faces, alround gloomy feeling, the inevitable seperation looming closer... but the two holding each others hand desperately, fingers entwined, hmm d most romantic thing to do also meant some dhamaka ahead...

ohhh ,you too expecting the unmentionables... ummh, me lowering my eyes and looking the other way..

As baaji n roops indulge in their usual antics with naku, major,s patience was wearing thin..could sense his turmoil, he wanted to savour every last moment with her, wantimg her close, was fighting a losing battle, lol... yeh kya? major day by day losing his sanity, meeta kha raha hai ya meeta dekh raha hai? oh god! is this the same major who a few months ago looked like an invincible sage...ab naku pe peeche lattoo 😆...loved the fab description ⭐️ yaat what invisible sage?.. now he is an overheated sher overrated with pyar ka rage! aise come on sab full final aur legal hai!

It was a foregone conclusion when AS decided that major would be dropped by baji n naku to the airport irrespective of his disapproval..it was the lakshman rekha he dared not cross 😛 ...good! me allowing readers the haq of predicting too

Now what transpired in d room was not totally unexpected 😉.. the bottled up emotional levee breaks n the passion takes over, best was when naku says, saab koi dekhlega? matlab naku is worried of an unwanted intrusion, 😆😆 n not the onslaught. The shower scene umm ab kya batayen ☺️.. me was under d impression that the honeymoon period was wel n truly over, but yaha toh tutor major full on with naku, the pet student learning vital wifey lessons except it is under a shower, ... atlast! long imagined shower scene, major ke saat koi kitne din bach sakta hain..😆 the song that instantly came to my mind was "aakhir tumhe aana hai, zara der lagegi...baarish (shower) ka bahana hai, zara der lagegi"yeppp me remember that song... very well bartee.. aand yes, i feel my writing of the scene is well appreciated... ummh truly a big high for me from you😛 hohohooo., Hammoo tu toh gayi kaamse, tere saat saat hum bhi ...ummh i think I owed the bit of hot stuff for the readers who like masala in the UD..

Gadha apni gadhapan dikhana hi tha, jab biwi raazi, miya kaha kya badbada raha tha,..uff! [slaps forehead] paise, AS ki dekhbal ??..🤪🐷 😃 tutor was goin off the track n naku had to remind him 😳 online skype romance karna hai, major saab..huh! so naku, be prepared for many many more classes...mostly late evening well into early morng sessions..lol

now you don't think he's serious do you? kabhi koi kamkiya hai us ne theekh se? ummh no not on others terrms , I think he threw that one into shut her up .. you know what a mule he can b

The breakfast minus sandwich, a lesson tad too late...and the parting at PN was hmm sad, goes to show the strong bonding the family share, but the nautanki of baji til the last moment and the teary eyed face of naku, should keep major in goodstead til he returns.tried to capture the home scenario as much as i could..hummh yess kuch changes tu ayen ga uske life mein.

The precap, major in london [dreams] brings to mind another song, "mein jaha rahoon. mein kahi bhii hoon, teri yaad saat hai" .. chal, b4 i go off d track,,wit a song for every line. ye noticed aaj you are lapsing into song and...[dance?] a bit too much.but yes as you know this song mentioned too is another one of my favorite.

Hammie, enjoyed reading the UD so much, that didnt feel upto commenting immediately, later wanted to edit wit a oneliner, but had to wake up frm d slumber cause of the constant distant roars ringing in my ears..lol.

yes i new tera pe drowsy effect hoga UD ka, i now the pulse of my readers, 😉aur teri pulse tu 100 ke speed se chalte hai , tu knew you'll be knocked out on a sixer!,aand glad you heard the roars... my canines were beginning to show!

Thank you hammie, waiting for ur annots. eagerly n sorry for keepg u waiting this long. Enjoying your other treats as wel on the forum, 'blasts from the pasts'.. luv you for being there n giving us so much joy... 😉

blasts from the past?😆 only you could come up with such a remark... you dhande hawa ke jhonke... bhooli bishre yadien...😆 seee me not bad... tooo .. learning from the best!you! thanks baaby for a super duper comment.. as always.. remo ke words THIS IS IT!😛 MUCH LOVE XXX EVER YOURS HAMMIE.

Originally posted by: Nakusha

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hi hammieehi mynaku tu h gayee .me smiling.ummh..

as always loved the ud 😊naku & dutta back to pn ,naku journey was tough with dutta will back to duty soon yes iam afraid Naku... all good things come to an end..

baji is such a sweet soul ,his unconditional luv for his friend makes him a lovable soul

dutta when AS reminds so much of LTL..yes baji is the brother that dutta needs in a house hold that is predominantly occupied with 4 close females..

.the relationship u project is with a difference much more relaxed & expressive 😊

i try to deviate where i can, but am care ful not to wholly change the essence of ltl1.

AS asking naku to pack sheera & badam shows he is still a little kid for mom . baji & roops lighten the atmosphere with pulling their beloved couples leg.itslike a typical situation in a household where a member is going broad.. the mothers try to..send a bit of home with their loved one...

is food stuff still not allowed at london airport ? thankfully the situation isn't as tough in india anymore

dutta & naku parting is a sweet sorrow ,its equally difficult for both . nope ,food not allowed they re finicky .. if its not bottled or tinned... health and safety reasons. one can have it booked separately like mangoes .. pay extra duty.

the 007 bag code ,is mish the secret code for our indian agent😆skype can do good for both with to connect with eachother with nakus luv has gone saat sumdar paar...well tried to pull a three digit number... out of the air..waise 303 ..rifle hote hai😆

waiting for dutta journey & experiences at ur majesty i mean hammiee land .waiting for the long ud next time...yes naku... trying to still finish the UD.. and long..ummh yes sure if i can last..

ur amazing hammiee 😊tc

yesss tera magic pep words that wait for naku... bahut dum hai un words mein...😉

thanks,so much for continuing to read all work that I put up Naku... with much love as ever yours xxhammie

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet

awesome ud ...distance makes them fonder for each other ...dutta on new mission ...waiting for next chapter ...have a great weekend.regards uvi😊

hi uvi, great to see you... ummh yes so they say that staying apart, makes people closer.. situations are such that life has to move on and relationships have to come around them.. hanks for reading and commenting ,my friend... with much love ,as ever yours xxhammie

Hello Hammie! Me here (here here) < that's an echo LOL
I'm Back ! To re-read these chapters and comment :D
So here we gOo ...

.:: Painful Rapture * Chapter 62 ::.

Haa for starters I need to mention the chunni is back yay was pestering you about the missing important member of the family and now its taken its rightful place once again wrapped all around him...that chunni will be more co-operative than Naku 😛

Oh our Major is wanting some passionate love and getting nothing haha to bad she managed to close that bathroom door 😆 at least he got his sweetener after although he had already had is morning chai first

Loved the natter between Baaji.Dutta.Naku on their way to the airport...how typical of them but love their comfort and love for one another it always shows in everything they do/say...and then have to mention the lovely send off...before baaji leaves from dropping them off...

Their travel to settling in another world...army world..was quite interesting. Of course you described it all well...I could picture and understand what the idea you painted was..

I liked seeing Naku more standing independent even though Dutta was there...her wanting to experience areas that might help her understand roles better...

Ahh just their type of honeymoon suite ... lol things seem to go hot between them on when they're put in such places...now to add to the excitement this one like you stated through Dutta is a wild exotic place for a honeymoon haa...

Enjoyed the UD hammie...well written as always ..thanks mate..moving on to the next chapter...

.:: Painful Rapture * Chapter 63 ::.

SoOo carrying on with our favorite couple, Major is certainly knows what he wants and when he wants it ... but still on guard with where they are even if that means he has to force himself to be aware of those around and the situation they're in and stay in control...or at least he was in control until she came out of the make shift shower in a ankle length towelling dress..that kinda sent his thoughts and control right out the window...haa...well I guess it is still also a honeymoon 😳

Ohh my gawwd ! he got his sandwiches here...wow Naku is too good !...
in the previous UD was graced by the presence of chunni and this one sandwiches show up ...

Now I certainly love Naku's input and Dutta's ideas in the UD...she managed to tackle some very important aspects that may reduce harm ...and got her chance to go around and check out some of the patients also...and done everyone proud even her husband with her suggestions and efforts...and on the other hand we have Dutta preparing for Ganesh chaturthi which was intended as a form of support for all, was quite good and probably needed...kind of brought everything together...

And the final bit ...back to the tent..for their last day in their special honeymoon suite... to get busy with the tizzy like you put it 😆.

Enjoyed the UD...it was short...i notice d that more this time around then when I first read it...

And @your thanks to me...well no problem...siggy/dp...you know they don't take me very long to do and I enjoy it...glad you liked them...

.:: Painful Rapture * Chapter 64 ::.

So our TaSha dearest on their way back to PN, now what would've normally been something to smile about is actually something that's not this time only because the separation between our lovers is approaching all the more quicker with each inch km they go closer to home. Although its not said in certain terms the environment and fell you put forth through your words definitely set that mood..and told us what is the underlying reasons for the silent ride back

When they reached the added little gesture between Dutta and Baaji was endearing...the friend that would be missed dearly...definitely was shown through their affection for each other...

Oh lol how embarrassing when a parent wants to know if they've consummated. Gosh! And they went for work/duty not really a honeymoon although its was partially that as well...

Now what can I say about mother and son bond. We all know how strong it is and I loved the added bit of his head in her lap...reminds me of LTL1...

Meanwhile Baaji and ROops on Naku's case in the kitchen lol they are adorable the pair of them.Enjoyed the whole bit especially with Dutta's entry and Ahh I have the perfect GIF (not mine but one I found) for D's response and Baaji's reaction...ready for it ...

I have to say I chuckled reading the part when AS said "sun Dutta, ab tera lagan ho chuka hai tu Rahman ka peecha choor de ab! waise bhi Naku ko pata hoona chaiya teri chazzion ka..is liye packing woh he kare ge.." his batman vs his wife ...who will he choose...difficult na?

Oh packing time...both almost silent...him speaking to his father to take care of Naku was brilliant addition and then telling her to pack the chunni...aww I totally saw a meltdown coming and there she ran straight into his arms...completely breaking with the idea of them being separated for sometime..

Now the lighter mood wali baat...haaa I had to chuckle ...katrina Kaif and Salman? Now a the pair of them you know i am not a fan of ...so u can just imagine my thoughts...i was thinking be glad both of you are neither of them LOL...

Now where that all led...UFF its getting it hot and steamy in that bathroom. He's been trying to get her and him in one together for too long...I bet he yelled SUCCESS in his mind ...well the idea of parting has heightened their needs to feel the other closer...and Nope it didn't stop in the bathroom now did ...the gentleman he is was so concerned for her well-being as she stood drenched in her clothes so did the right thing and freed her from the potential health hazard HAAA and carried her to bed...

Now I laughed here with his sudden mention of family...really now? Was this the time...? Haa...but ok at least he thought of it all before leaving...now back to his flirty romance heated mood...

OMG what is he saying about SKYPE ROFL...I laughed so hard more because I know u and skype are not friends hammie...and u added it in here, Now i know the idea of using Skype came from hoo haa!

Oh morning of departure...aww poor guy was cut off his life support...no i meant his sandwiches...his last day to enjoy them and everyone forced him to get into habit of not having them...aww...i felt bad for him ...LOL...

Loved the bicker about send off...Baaji and Naku being told to go and AS telling Dutta not to argue to that much...the two people important to him to send him off...on a good note...and obviously would be emotional. Parting is such sweet sorrow!

Again mate , your very welcome for the DP/Siggy...!

Thank you for a lovely UD ...I enjoyed them...! and now me finished with my comments before your next UD ...oh this is an accomplishment ! lol...

Now talk to you uhmm in pms...lots of love and hugs...

Later my dear alligator

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi tahera..good to seee you mate
@ hammie this must have been one of the easiest ud so far of the PR for u to do.
😃 you reckon?...haaa haa actually it was a real sticker this one..ummh kya lehkoon? kya omit karoon.it actually drove me up the wall.. waise personally prefer a bit of research .. but still how much can one talk about army life..

no i don't mean the romantic scenes etc. no i mean koi research waghera nahin kiya, straight story liness and beautiful emotions of the family get together and then came he parting. wll lees see how they will get on without each other and with nakku probably returning to her duties also. mus be a surpris for her co workers as i don't think nakku came with the prospect of getting married during her leave, and no one was there for her

wedding from the hospital as guest.actually tu ne bahut valid ponit diya hai tahera.. i guess hammie was plain forgetful... hope i can make up some other way..

the parrting of the couple was only to be for 2 weeks is it still he case waiting for next ud to see our major pe gorian kitna marti hain . we know yahan tall dark handsome ka jeena muskil hai😆 so thanks for pm and a very enjoyable read. welll as you said rather reminded me ke fortnight hai uk mein.. we'll see kya bunta hai... gorrian.. ummh are you sure woh gadhe dekhe ga unhe?... i doubt it tahera.. very much...thanks so much for reading all my work and giving lovely useful comments ,much appreciated.. with much love as ever yours xxx hammie..

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi ham hi imli... my poetess
super udthank you
tasha back at pn . Duji hug kitne dinno ke baad baji apne bhao se mil raha hai n naku getting emotionalyes dutta namukamal baji ke bahger..ummh
AS welcomed them with arti love mother son bonding dutta such a baby always need to be pampered spoilt dead

Naku back in kitchen with baji n roops following her both are so interested in tasha love story . one request ab baji ki shaadi karwa hi donow phele let him and roops grow up a bit...

D ordered tea n roops wants to know if dutta continued with his sudharrhoistic tendencies i think someone needs to sudhararo him kahin bhi shuru ho jata hai well ... he's changing gradually

Enjoyed dujis leg pulling n baji complaining AS n he is ladla beta

AS asked naku to do the packing but dutta want rahman to do the packing n naku finds a solution smartrahman has been with him since 10 years

It was so emotional dutta wants his baba to look after naku

Dutta asked naku to pack her white chunni mere bas me hota toh mein naku ko he pack kar deteyes he knows what he wants and what he misses.

Salman khan n katrina kaif hmm so ham u must have watched ek tha tiger..actually know.. but barfi yes and salman fan yes.. kat fan no.

Shower scene dil khush kar diya😃 haaa haa . tu bhi..?

Dutta not happy to see toast in his plate n AS wants him to get used to it..well he'd better get used to the change starting from home..

AS wants baji n naku to see dutta off at airport

now time for dutta to leave n baji calls to ask if dutta changed his mind n he is worried about naku such sweet hubby

precap dutta in london n ham plz no more chudail...hain kaunse chudial? koi hai mind mein tu pm ker ke bata.. send her after dutts..

thanks for pm n tc 🤗

thank you my lovely imli , lovely jubbly comment...with much love ,as ever yours xxhammie

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet awesome ud 😊
hi dilse,
thanks or reading it,liking it and commenting about it.. great to see you... with much love,as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet

amazing UD...dutta going to uk ...feel sorry for both ...its part of life 😊i want to see how tasha over come distance ...trip is short hopefully😆...UD soon tc
hi sonaaa..good to see you mate
thanks for enjoying the UD, yes that's life.. have to come to terms with it, and make the best of it..yes will UD and pm you when it's finished. with much love s ever yours xx hammie

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi hammie amazing ud thanks 😊

ud soon

oyeee kaka balli!

itna tiny sa comment? tu theekh hina?. thanks for liking the update.. and yes love your kittens and poems on my thread..mate..with much love as ever yours xxhammie

Originally posted by: mirage123

superb ud ! waiting for london dutta's london trip😊

hi mirage.. good to see you

thanks for loving the UD and commenting on it.. ummh yes his london trip. with much love as ever yours xx hammie