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Posted: 13 years ago
RESERVED ! I will be back ...by tonight ...PROMISE !


Crash !

Bang !

Thud !

*daya falls back into hammies thread*

Just when you thought you could kick me far away and be rid of me...forbidding me from returning psht ..you're forgetting if ur Dutta then me Baaji! kick me where ever you want me am not going anywhere 😛 but that does not mean it goes without punishment...especially because it was not just me but *ahem* my sweet friend.warda ko bhi ...u kicked her far...she came back with gajar ka halwa
but you know that Daya will come with a Bang.Boom.and BAT!

gosh did that feel good :P
but anyway I do owe you an apoloy for being so late...with both UD's


hmmm so now getting to the comments ...

Chapter 40 ~ love can do much, but duty more...

hmmm so dutta is smashing away with the punching bag...oh and what a scene that is ...punch punch ...pause...haaye...hottie...wiping off his sweat on his sleeves and pulling out that whistle...can I steal the whistle?? 😉 hmmm anyway moving out of my lala land...so Major lets his OUTS in on the fact he will be absent tmmrw for he has official work to carry out...but of course that did not mean those outs get to slack...no no ...they will have much to do as he has ordered ...and now this kapur is surely one concerned romeo...bold too...asking straight up about Khan...but Dutta gave him the right answer in the most firm, stern and point blank manner..

hmmm now that shower scene, I was like did he seriously stand and think about his fun childhood showers LOL ...oh well whatever delights the man ...water ...hmmm oh here is bathroom romeo now questioning about khan while in the shower seriously there is a time and place for things ...but anyway again Major sir did give exactly what Kapur deserved ...

here we are the janwar inside of him awakens...first mission for major...mission attack chunni! taking out his anger and rage on a piece of cloth...what a man !... LMAO ...ohhh jagooo mohan pyara...so the song he needs to wake up haha ... got a good chuckle out of me ...now nakus turn but difference is she lets the kurta engulf her...while major engulfs the chunni himself... how apt is that for these two ...oh here we go the children are bickering? or going at it ...whatever it is these two do...well they are at it again ...and of course it gets all lovey dovey and baamm...OHHH those bloody tears...aagayi haaahaaa special guest appearance ...I would say they are becoming regulars these days...so love birds went off track ...meanwhile there is a mission at hand here...i know its not as interesting to them as their own love story .talking about lagan ke raat...but uff time to chop chop ...back to work ...forget the laal rang and focus ...mission rescue khan ...Rajooo :P

so on their way...on the railways ...I enjoyed their little journey...it was well penned. The whole chatter, subtle pyaar...eyes talking...or rather checking out ...and their little chats...enjoyed it...and then him getting her what she wants...how sweet ...what a couple and really they had to be stuck with two faujis ?

Me loved that Dutta was not just about his own work when ordered but rather whatever help he can do and where ever it is he will help ...definitely leaves his mark on everyone's heart...

oh the garden scene was beautiful...thoda romance in the middle of work :P taking her in his overcoat...holding her close and attack the lips...mission two accomplished ...haha ...now there's mission marriage thats on his mind lol ...now wen that will be who knows...but until then the two have their wonderful moments...

so now coming to Khan's world...the way its was all handled was wonderful...no drama...straight and to the point...and loved how Naku stepped into it...she just knows how to get people on her side doesn't she.. and khan is free of the marriage...and they're ok with it as she did not say no to wassim but rather the relationship for the time being was not of focus...

oh Dutta again shows his authority and skills and fixes yet again another problem...great man he is ..and we all know that...wonderful update ! loved it as always ab time to read and comment on the next ...

Chapter 41 ~ "Am I in earth, heaven or in hell?"

Dutta ogling his wife to be ...but only to be interrupted by a call...of course Parekh and of course he knows the job will be done if D himself is going...so they need to be back on the double which means airlines not rail...and poor Naku her desire to travel by train again all down the drain...

Well well I love how Dutta went back to the security at the check post and handled the fact that they need to do their jobs correctly... and ordered & warned them to do it and do it right ...or else...they will be reported...truly this man has great values...

Aww Naku is scared and the poor girl tells her man only to be yelled at to suck it up ...and not act like a child. But then of course the temper is short lived and they share a cute moment...aww he's so cute...the way he's handling her ...poor girl is so frightened lol...but why fear when major saab is there...

So going through security checks...naku whisked away to be frisked and D gets all protective...surely he would hurt the person who would dare think to do anything to her...

So tea time...and Dutta so kindly offers to grab something for the ladies...and of course...Naku wants chai ...and something to munch on ...LOOOLLL ohhh hhooo haa oh hammie hammie hammie...inflatable mattress...that has a history in our pms ROFL...very aptly fit in...me read it and busted out in laughter...not good ...in a library it is not the best thing to do so randomly, suddenly and so late into the night...lol ...weird looks from those around ...probably thought I'm some nut case...

pata nehi hai use main woh he kerta hai ,ju mera dil kerta hai..hmm hammie...this line is urs truly :P

I was wondering why she was frisked away ...and it came up ...well she brought it up ...great...so let's hear it ...hmm her view said then he clarifies the point...and naku burst...yay and I am getting good entertainment...but the way Dutta answered...well the way you have penned his dialogue...simply superb...loved it !

Haaayeee omg cutie ...a little cute chubby cheeky girl awww...and her behavior brought Baaji to mind well he was being missed i guess greatly D's eyes all misty ...and the girl starts crying.haa and he's clueless now uuhmm errs and here come the women to help him ...indeed woman naturally have maternal instincts...haha Dutta concerned with being called uncle LOL...

Woah take a chill pill DSP ...bacchi hai...but it was kind of cute between the two of them...haaa if I was Naku would've laughed when I heard her say action man uncle haha adorable little girl still ...I am liking her ...but you me love kids :P

Awww how adorable was that ...she loosened his grip around the wrist and slipped her chubby hand in his palm ...eureka someone to show him how it's done...him and his wrist grabs...now that little girl will show him, aww knight in shining armour to save the baby damsel in distress...and now he is missing his mother dearest ...

LMAO Khan khan khan...sometimes u think people would know to give a couple their space...haha she churofied his seat ..what a tragedy LOL...no chance for Naku to fly for first time with her man by her side ...oh but boy did she slip to the front so quickly ...he calmed her down than told her to go for its not professional...the girl leaves in a huff...

Well Khan's views on her marriage were quite interesting...and their little chatter was nice...the two defo get along well...ahh omg she's making him sandwiches owww ...how sweet of her...and the famous line...full stomach thanks to the food made by her lovely two hands...hmmm...

So they are home for holi! Change of clothes and D all protective and possessive...makes her change into a boring saree...so they come to the garden area and of course D wants to see his mother...their relationship is so pure...so strong ...so bound...its lovely...

Omg one of my most favo scenes from jmm2 ek ghoont...remembered how handsome and cute this man was looking with those pleading expressions and the shot in one go...haaye...miss it hammie...the fun in holi ...glad u added it in...was lovely...! me for one have enjoyed it completely...

So what will khan say to her course mates? Guess will have to wait...

And omg hammie ...me did it...both updates...and commented...yay...but thoroughly enjoyed this one..it was all in all such a cute update...so many aspects...and the way the characters are consistent and everything just fits...well done mate...thanks for writing ur magic down and spreading the love for this couple...ab me off...41hours of no sleep what so ever...not good on these eyes... ab going from library and straight home to crash on my bed...10:30 pm...hai...see you my friend...🤗

and please you do not have to reply to this...lambi hai i know ...
just read it and thats enough...!
Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

Now where else can we be drooling over eateries apart frm DSP? one n only place, hammie's thread... hammie, warda ko bol me too waiting but more for her comments yaar, n i take she is somewhere in lahore celeberating n u keep an eye on the pounds ur adding, u just need reason to gorge, i know u must be ragin to smash something, chal try this, ok lets cal it a truce hmm mmm!!!! thanx for the lahori laddoo anyway, next time ill be looking forward for some bengali sweets, yummm! gosh! me too now...

hi brvr...hope you doing well 😊
yaar thanx a lot for mentioning about my comments 😳... me too miss posting here ...have three updates pending to post for *hides face from hammie*
and no its not celebration it was a assessment at university which kept me busy last week ... will be back soon...love reading your feedback ...😊
and haa hammie adding pounds...that will keep coming for cant resist sharing my joy over this game and any victory we add...😃
ahmm*clears throat* hammie like daya me too will be posting soon...matlab soon 😳 ...not Mishal wala soon ...apne wala soon...😉
sorry for the last two spots i didnt de -res...this time not taking any reserved spot will come straight away... 😎
and now that you have thrown me out of pm list *looks for daya* ...can you please add me back for the next update *making innocent face* 😳
will be back soon 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

hi brvr...hope you doing well 😊
yaar thanx a lot for mentioning about my comments 😳... me too miss posting here ...have three updates pending to post for *hides face from hammie*
and no its not celebration it was a assessment at university which kept me busy last week ... will be back soon...love reading your feedback ...😊
and haa hammie adding pounds...that will keep coming for cant resist sharing my joy over this game and any victory we add...😃
ahmm*clears throat* hammie like daya me too will be posting soon...matlab soon 😳 ...not Mishal wala soon ...apne wala soon...😉
sorry for the last two spots i didnt de -res...this time not taking any reserved spot will come straight away... 😎
and now that you have thrown me out of pm list *looks for daya* ...can you please add me back for the next update *making innocent face* 😳
will be back soon 🤗

hi warda, grt to hear u back, was indeed missin ur posts for quiet sometime n u truly have ur task cut out baby... 3 updates gosh! no wonder hammie has thrown u out of the pm list, kadoos hain ma'm😲 major ke sangat ka asar, waise acha kiya tumne laddoos bechke, that should work for u😉 liked the line "Mishal wala jaldi nahi"😆 none can beat that guy.
Edited by brvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

lol...no i have read the updates but just could nt come in time to post my feedback 😳
and ladoo yes those were for match celebration...to join back in pm list i think time to send some gajar ka halwa now 😃
hammie halwa will be at your door soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
I have updated my comments for both chapter 40 & 41 above😳
Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
YES! the two people missing in action found n dragged back to the place they belong, 😆
Edited by brvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

YES! the two people missing in action found n dragged back to the place they belong, 😆



back with a bang 😆
hi bharathi ...hows u?
and i will be coming back later to read through ur conversation in here ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi hammie , wonderful update loved it . so dutta admiring his naku when ever he get time he start admiring her but this time got disturb by call .so parekh call dutta got informations he know that dutta can do his job perfect and inform dutta to come by airplane . ho naku is scare of plane and this is her first time in plane dutta comforting her . they went through security check .loved the sweet little girl nimmi called dutta action man uncle dutta was do call me uncle and aunties came for help but dutta handle it well and he help missing little girl to meet her mother .so it holi time dutta went home to celebrate holi with is family ayei sabe is happy to see her son and baou they celebrate small holi party because they have to go for work and my one of favored scene in Ltl srif ek ghoont wow srif ek ghoont iss jungle naam aur mere parye nakusha naam i love the scene very much what a great acting by mr /mv just love them love there pair thanks for remaining the scene loved it thanks for beautiful update loved it take care & lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hammie 🤗...firstly accept my apologies for missing from this thread... though have read all
updates as they were posted still could nt manage to come on time ...

Thanks for the wonderful update ...experienced both the journeys by train and by air...though travelling through train again have given tasha more time to spent together again... you know the more we get the more we want...😉
khan issue finally sorted with ease...in fact much ease... now the only thing which made me bit uncomfortable or rather surprised was naku's jolly acts with khan again... oki she assumed khan admires her tutor ...yet was sharing the same bond with her so much at ease... that possessiveness at the thought of her possession to be in some ones else thoghts as well still didnt made her jealous...now i assume it to be either the confidence which her saab has given her with his love...or khan willing to marry waseem had made naku comfortable

Naku afraid of air travell was fun to read...mostly people do have such fears when travelling for the first time...ahmm *personal experience8 ...lol...not to be shared here...will tell later 😆...Dutta being alert at security check...action man ...good move though... doing his job even there as well...and i know that checking issues faced particularly at airports ..specially in the last few years due to certain issues have been very much in question...very sensitive and debateable topic...ive seen many people complaining about the pain they have given to go through while travelling specially by a people of certain race and religion...to some extent me too
was one of them...but certainally the part written on duttas behalf made me to pause for a moment and think... yes its for their own good that they travell safe ...they have to cross those barriers

Now dutta wanting the confirmation that their are female officers for ladies for checking*cough*
now makes me wonder if in case there was not one available ...how he would be pacing up and down for his lady 😆

naku seems too fond of eating...inflatable matress ...lol...one more addition in the list of all those names he had given her...
wese *clears throat * ...khan too quite in all the convos *looks for brvr* 😉...mayebe disciplined in front of senior officer...

aww i loved this lil girl nunee...specaially the name you choose...action man uncle ...lol.kiya naam diya apne major ko...
though he has strong objection on the word uncle...haha ...btw throughout this khan problem solving mission...major got quite a few chances to help civilians ...i can recall the train breakdown...then helping that lady with household repairs...though have to come up
with that chapter still...but have to mention that lines...meri maa ko dua dou... that was class apart hammie...the hangover of those words will remain forever on me ...

ohh missed them sitting together in the filght... out of courtesy both could not say anything to khan...but haiii both of them sitting close to each other and
her head resting on his shoulder ...now me dreaming ...wese i know hammie is generous...next time please... specially the take off fear ...being pacified by dutta *making innocent face* 😳

ohh the sandwiches return again...aww i love naku for this...and for major he must be pleasently surprised as well...getting something you always craved at a place where you least expect,...that feeling is something else 😊
now again naku trying to distract khan from her descion by making her think if she loves waseem or not...no seriously ...what does she wants an open confession from her...😕
btw i liked waseems simplicity a lot...and khan though being superior from him in terms of career still accepted him and managed to see the good side of him...made me like the girl 😊

Holi celebrations at patil niwas would not have been complete without tasha and glad they were there...
AS as usual got her treat to see her beloved son...and baaji ohh i was so missing my seconf favourite man...
Now again the two have to part for their work ...hope so either personal or proffesional tasks again give them a chance to enjoy each others company...
Waiting for the next part...now can you please add me to your pm list *saying with authority* **at ease now hammie*...haha ..ducks from chapplas😆
will come up with the previous two partssoon as well...sorry this ones is a long comment...i hope not boring ...😳
see you😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
et tu warda!!!🥺
tu bhi mujhe badnam kar rahi hain? ab mein gayi yaha se kahi door, kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahi, sab yeh, yeh, khani the swany😡 ke wajah se...😆
waise i was wondering too why ma'm khani not much vocal in the jouney, thank God! for sparing us with her gyans ... n as ever naku the dumb fool of an *** has no qualms, hunky dory with a potential souten🤣 [sic] even major not bearing any grudge against her after naku's revelations mahaan hain sab!!!

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