Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hammie baby!
Happy women's Day!

mornin'
thanks..and ap ko bhi...splitting head!
thought you waiting for annotations, look you have a great day

hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

oye! ofcourse waitin for the annotations, dont give me the worn out excuses, remember ur the⭐️ woman dont disappoint me now... not today, will wait howsoever long.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

Awsem update dutta exerscising with students and kapoor asking about khaan dutta threatning him dutaa taking shower remembering childhood and dutta punishing chunni for nakku cutting call dutta calling nakku for be with him in khaan mission nakku moaning with dutta kurta dutta nakku conversation love it and asked her not to wear saree and red colour and nakku shaadi red colour mein hogi dutta not going to stop her that day because he has other work dutta reaching with two soldier to nakku nakku drooling on him dutta didn't sit with her nakku disappoint dutta buying stuff nakku panicked if train left without him nakku falling in his arms haye dutta asking if she has to go toilet nakku stomp his feet dutta giving stuff nakku didn't thank him dutta drooling on her and sit infront of her for drooling and love there teasing session nakku asking about other soldiers dutta shouting on her than appologising to her nakku asking about golgappedutta took her out and then kulfi also nakku sleeping dutta realising about there journey but he bound to duty

Train have problem but dutta hai na I just love him the way he done his duty

Naku dutta in differnent rooms dutta asking to meet him in garden tasha romancing in moonlight and dutta said if they were marrird they can be in room hope ye wish dutta ki jaldi manzoor ho jaaye tasha reached khaan area love the way tasha handeled situation mama blessed nakku dutta adoring her dutta repairing handpump old lady blessing him he asked to bless his mother waah love it

teri tamanna! teri justajoo! oye gana hai ,you know I can sing in a croaky,hokey, voice! ..now baaaby, your rang barse comment yet again brought a smile on my face! do you know if ever I need to catch up on a previous UD ,it's your comments that I go for!...sab saf saf nazar ah jata hai Major aur uske mehbooba kya gul kehla rehain hai...errh or Khani bhi...haaa ha ...listen baaby thanks for reading and taking the time to comment and spreading loads of happiness on the forum,waise mein ne note kiya hai ke Naku bhi loves your comments like me! soo continue with the good work..hope Holi you are enjoying to the full, edher bhi bahar agaye hai...with much love xxx hammie


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Posted: 13 years ago

hello tahera!

lovely ud Hammie loved the train journey my favourite mode of transport, recently have been travel by air...not good for health ,so summers mein ,me heading for Inverness in Scotland..will take a train jouney 4hrs from London..so excited very...

Dutta allways thinking ahead choose to sit opposit her so dil khol ke nakku kay darshan milein.faida toh nakku ka bhi,lekin samjhne mein time laga. ahh i thought dutta ne ussay samosa diya toh shayad she might have surprised him with sandwiches in her bag for him but i suppose no time.

actually tune phela kyon nehi suggest kiya ,waise I went by he fact hat he is fussyabout eating food from vendors...shahzada hai na...kante chorri se khata hai salla..haaa haa

anyway i loved the way our major resolved some cumbersome civilian problems on the way, real janta ka hero, not to forget the little midnight rendevouz, kiya kare jab tak lagan nahin hota.😃😃😃 oye itna bhi beechara nehi.go getter hai..always gets what he wants..mind you she wants too!dunno ko chaiye pardes chale jain jahan AS aur un ka danda nehi hai! haaa

i loved the way they resolved khan ka masla, na zor na zaberdasti, just firm to the point ,very tactful nakku,and major with just the right amount of authority. He had to show shrewdness ,wardi ka mamala tha..any false ,unpeasant move and the army would be badnam
should go down well with Parekh but then he already had the confidense in major Patil. thanks for the pm i was about to do some other work saw the ud started reading it before pm, throughly enjoyed it. tc not too much of ROFL and undoing your stitches.bye. love. Tahera.
Baat sun kurriye carry on with your studies with all your heart and mind..us major ke baache ko chor...for he time being .he'll wait for you to come to him...listen.many thanks for your lovely comments .always look forward to receiving them...happy holi! much love.xx hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

hey hammie😊
ranjuuu missed you baaby..nehi sach mein.all sorted studies...oye you do well for sure!
fabulous updates dear👏
thanks
awesome😛

dutta arrange his valentine day place sorry tent with help of rahaman poor rahmen bhi sochta hoga kis kaam ke liye rakha hai aur kya karwa raha hai.😆
hain so you just read valentine wala episode umhh.aacha hain.yaad aye haaa
poor nakku valentine surprise bhi full of tension and fear major ka style hai usse har baat mein rulane ka😆
she is a bloody git!jab pata hai woh kaise hai tu ,she needs to solder herself! folaad bun lardki!
he gifted him kurta kya lovers hai koi kurta chahta hai toh koi chunni bade ashique sare record tod diye🤣
i think its getting to a stage when their soul ful bond is becoming a lustful bond!😆 due to waiting for the blasted lagan! haaa...
khan left and she told everything to nakku about her marriage😛
yaar saheli ju bun gaye hai naku ki
nakku tell truth to dutta that khan like him aur major again shouting on her and she cut call great😆
I tell you ranju she is unbelievably daft! she asks for trouble
yaar am bore of this khan cut off her character🥱
hainnn.tu bhi.?chale jaye gi course tu becharre ko hatam ker ne de!
tasha go to khan's home to settle the matter and nakku did that calmly major feeling proud of her😊
had to thrash this in my mind for a bit when writing it!
tasha night under sky patil wanna her in his room for forever hope his wish come true soon😳
well it would be ok if they were married they could have slept in the same room .legally. but still..he knows how to make use of an opportunity
train wala safar enjoyable journey of tasha ek dusre ko
niharte rahe
😳😉😆
what a poetic phrase you have coined...sums up that portion of the UD
major help civilians ah duty of solider to help everyone and people bless him for that and he want that blessing for his mum great man😛
yes the army serves in war and peace.i love the bit when they surface in emergencies...people too have expectations from the uniform.it commands respect!
wonderful updates dear ranju thanks for your lovely ,much awaited comment loved it .with lots of love xxx hammie

thanks for pm's

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hammiee
haan pata hai tu aagai hai naku,na ata tu phir dekhte mera gussa!
mein aagai 😊loved the ud . dutta & naku ke train journey was exciting .personally long distance journey can be boring lekin yeh journey ka safar bahut accha tha .naku ke appetite hai ke kaya 😆
its like she was on a fun daytrip! remember the feeling its like one wants loads of munchies to kill time..love sences could not happen fauji jo saath the..so missed out sitting cuddled up on the seat.waise bhi, this is reality har jaga tu necking nehi ho sakte..tough! but true!
dutta helping ppl along & receiving luv from all .finally shukar khan ke ghar zyaada tamasha nahin howa thankful for that mem 😊 tune kya soocha tha baaby goliyaan chalein gi ,bumb phaten ga,nah man don't want to start a civil war!
the entire khan drama ka one out come if she can't free herself & has come out as weak like any ordinary woman .with an common problem of forced marriage..but she chose to fight it with the best possible option whre by she could continue to maintain her relationship with her mama also and big up her employers as well..they are trained to weigh a situation,she knew her life was not in danger ,neither was the countries security at risk.so I stand by her decision.With regards to her tutor and soldiers coming for her...she knows her vocational rights and protection...can you imagine if the story gets to the press...the headlines ,Naku would be, Army Intervention In Prevention Of Officer's Forced Marriage...and the article it self would denounce the practice of forced marriages ,and praise the army's effort in this instance! baki Naku respect your veiw as in a democracy there will be oppostion of the motion..
it cast doubt abt her future fighting the terriorist & dealing with hostage issue .instead army would have to devote one major & 2 jawans for her safety .is baar toh ordinary citizen the koi trained terrorist nahin .i 'm not pointing this coz i dislike khan i'm talking simple logic .i 'm sure still parekh will be persistence of choosing her over other studentwhy not ..if she shows potential ..but dekho kya hota hai...course tu khtam kerne de us ko..
dutta helping the villagers very touching & asking blessing for mom quite emotional .chalo aate waqt kaaba mein haadi rahein ge .anyways naku 'll enjoy her company coz uska upaar ka department pura khali hai 😆 haaa haaa .upaar ke depsrtment sirf dosseroon ke aachi bahre hoi hai..meri naku aise hai...thats the way dutta wants her to bhi...but itni bhi pagal nehi hai...
liked the ud & as always u r amazing hammiee .waiting for the next .have a great weekend tc😊
thanks naku,tera tarif ke bagher mera UD kerna ko dil nehi karta...and hammie does at times go by the heart .that is my folly...damak ko preference deni chahye...lots of thanks and much love my lovely naku! yours xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hamlet yoy know 4 hours from england to scotland., piece of cake. i once travelled from kolcutta to dehradun solid 36 hrs, and my last holiday from Goa to Lucknow it took 52hrs, but that was a lot of delays and connection times as well. i love train travel specially in india people getting friendly ,sharing their experiences etc. but travelling from england to scotland, only train journey justifies if yu are going touring purpose. if buisness than whatever is quicker. all the scenic places are breath takingly beatyful. and the days are so long. you just cannot get enough of the open spaces and clear skies in summer.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

hey hamlet yoy know 4 hours from england to scotland., piece of cake. i once travelled from kolcutta to dehradun solid 36 hrs, and my last holiday from Goa to Lucknow it took 52hrs, but that was a lot of delays and connection times as well. i love train travel specially in india people getting friendly ,sharing their experiences etc. but travelling from england to scotland, only train journey justifies if yu are going touring purpose. if buisness than whatever is quicker. all the scenic places are breath takingly beatyful. and the days are so long. you just cannot get enough of the open spaces and clear skies in summer.

@bold, word tahera!
🤣 bechari hammie ko pata nahi, woh kaha england to scotland 4hrs mein with the tight upperlipped Brits, the swanky squeaky clean boxes with the predicatable landscape...it will get over b4 one gets to read the foreword of a novel..😆 Train journey in india is an experience initself. Hammie if she happens to travel frm say kashmir to kanyakumari she wil hav enuf material to finsh 4-5 novels. If u have not traveled here on a train, its like been there but not done that... like eating idli without chutney/sambar, samosa without the alu 😉 or best panipuri[golgappa] without pani.
No belittling hammie's journy, just like u tahera, it struck me immediately, couldnt help comparing the difference of the experience.. sorry hammie to poke my nose
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

So hammie here im with the comments, cant help speaking my mind baby as i believe "Political correctness is tyranny with manners." - Charlton Heston (1924-2008)
hiya got you at lasst baaby.haa yess PC hoona parta hai...it's the thing to do in present times,even more so in fiction,all sorts of affliations can be deducted by readers...loved the quote from Heston..

Major working out on the punching bag a treat to watch his intensity n mostly when he is distracted or disturbed. Bhatnagar is right, let khan take all the liberty with major n none else as they surely have better things to bother. Must admit kapur has the guts to question major about khan, well well let BDS go to hell, looks like her mockery for discipline rubbin on him as well. No complaints with the wet demon possessing our major to the dried n parched eyes of Mishal fanatics. Oh no! why is kapur stalking major isnt this khan's prerogative?😉 men's shower rooms areas as for short sharp bleps of imparting info ,foot ballers do it here all te time ,short remarks about startegies, moves ,reactions on the game..kapur ne bhi batana tha that he is concerned about khani's welfare ..ummh sukar hai dutta ne gala nehi dabaa deya ,per mau bhi nehi lagya ,in one ear and out the other ..aisea hai dutta!

'Jaago mohan pyaare' major's new wake up alarm? hahahaaa! i use this line too but to motivate people when they r down n the older version of it. You cant be serious major. Except this mohan is holding a gun instead of flute n is a one woman's man. 😆 haaa well its better than" pauwa charhane aye!

Why should major be surprised with naku's sweet moaning when he should be proud his fiance has put the gift to immediate use, hehe😆. Aaw! like the way he was telling naku what he like her to be all shy n demure n it was him goin after her n not the other way round.. insecure hona shurro ho giya hai naku..tabhi tu all the lewd talk ,but for him its more of a turn off! than a turn on...he has a fixed image of her in that heart and mind of his..and if you ask me he's comfortable with it at the moment!

Wow! the two on 'the Indian Railways', never a dull moment on it. Oh! here we have the kabab mein haddi in the two soldiers. But what is this? toilet jana hain kya? WTH! Major treats naku like a 4 year old kid, kapde ye pehno ye mat pehno, shawl lelo, gosh! ab bachi bore hojayegi toh khilao pilao n even checkin out if the little girl is behaving or not, well no wonder naku acting like one too, her tastebuds on the rampage makin merry of the time n dutta's misery🤪.tell you what baaby ab chummi ,huggy moments tu ho nehi sakte saare aam , but yes nothing to stop our naku having the time of her life ..deprived lageta ,like no family holidays in the past for her...and him weell, he has to poke his nosie in her business ,its like his haq ,mind you she loves it..

Liked ur description of the approaching destination, have u ever been there hammie? cause it was realistic. i wissh ,but a couple of friends have, saw their photos a year ago,and talked to them over the phone...kafi cuturally fertile area lagata hai...

And how can the two travel n not end up in a situation. Hoyee nahi sakta, so major b4 rescuing the damsel has something bigger, problems dont come in search of him he goes in search of them like a true soldier. actualy loved riting this portion ,kinda of lifts him from the rest ,uniform power! Anyways the situation also gives the two some private moment.well this is mainly for those readers who like to see them hitched ..to a certain extent..within reason and circumstance!

So the mission achieved without much hassle n yippee! we have our beloved khan back...naku true to her nature all concern for her n bhashans too. Khan buying time from mamajee, well she is skating on thin ice! Yeh kya major ab plumber bhi, yaar mere toilet mein bhi flush not working.. is major at hearing distance?😆 oye this has to be the highlight of the comment,i was ripped ,split,slapping and punching my settee, it was sooo you ..waited so long for a wicked remark! oye how could you ! woh waise plumber nehi hai...bare bare ,janta ke kam kerta hai.. jaise pani ke nal! toilets nehi... phoo phoo!

Hammie once again dil khush kardiya tumne, hopelessly addicted to ur friday treats. wah! bonus mein khan in the precap too, ab aur kya chahiye 🤢 😆 knew it it ws too good to be true ke khani pe koi taunt nehi aye..😉 ye me knows you love her too like me...listen ma'am thanks for your comment wait for it alwaysss.but you know that don't you ...UD khtam nehi hoya hai ...if it does will pm you sunshine...now have to love you and leave you yours xxxhammie

Thank u! Take
care!

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Posted: 13 years ago
no brvr, don't get me wrong , it's still very enjoyable but very short, scenery is nice too. but yes me love train journey in india. and you know the curiosity on people's faces when trains pass through villages when people stop their work to look at a passing train to see where people are travelling to. ah i wish i was a writer or their mind reader. to see what exactly they can fathom from just stopping and looking at each passing train.
i wonder by the way how long from kashmir to kanyakumari, maybe i'll do it one day me would love that.

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