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rahima a.k.a. pinks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

awww ... that was so nice ... i was missing dutta n nakku 'romantic' moments ...

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athithi

@athithi86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

wow👍🏼.. i happend to read ur FF recently... its super ya... all the intimate scene between dutta and naku are fantastic😊...you have written the blooming of relationshp... so well...it makes me eager to read next...waiting for ur update😍

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Dutta has no other option but to accept that his heart beats for her n longs for her closeness n is impatient to hear her speak, her bhashan is music to his ears n her touch gives him goosebumps. Naku's argument to convince dutta has worked actually when did it not work? So things have gone back to normal with him sharing the bed n him occupying more than half the bed, hahaha! couldnt stay away for long. The bathroom scene was funny n cute, now i dont care whether he utters the the three words, his deeds speak more than words n that's dutta.😃 Thank u Rose for the lovely update n the pm, me got lazy in posting comments n hence the delay😳 even thou' i read the update early on. Appreciate ur regularity in updating.

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Priyanka gangwar

@__priyanka__

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Chalo ji lets first start with my famous nautanki😆'.as u have loved it😳 '.so obviously ye nautanki kabhi band nahi hogi.😛

Hooo lalalallalala😲 I need a huge wall this time'warna pakka peetungi'oh gosh iss baar to had he ho gayi '..bole to out of control wali had'inni late'.***fingers holding ears '.wid face bent on one side'.wid a childish smile'*** just to say sorry

PHIR HUM SE EK GUSTAKHI HUI

UNKE DIL KO DUKHA AAYE💔

AB DIN KATEGA MUSHKIL SE HAMARA😔'. (ninni aa rahi h naa)🥱😆😆

AUR UNKE KHAMOSHIYO K SAAYEIN HONGE''

Rosy u want me to write a story naa😃'..but I don't think I can do so'😕..m nahi chahti iss forum k members kam ho😆😉'.waise to have some ideas but can't put them in words like u'..inni himaat nahi h ji

Zehan ke samandar mein writer jab doobta h

To uski kalam patwaar banker khood-b-khood chalne lagti h

Aur lehro ki tarah shabdo se shabd milakar use wah wahi ka part bana dete h

Magar kya writer sirf wah wahi k liye likhta h

Shayad''yaa phir shayad nahi

Wo likhta h apni socho m uth rahe toofano ko shant karne k liye

Yaa apni aatma ki bhook ko mitane k liye

Kabhi gazal to kabhi nazam, se

Kabhi kisse to kabhi kahaniya se

To kabhi kavita yaa ashaar se

Zindagi ka har rang jeeta h wo

Haqiqat m naa sahi to afsaano m

Sach to ye h ki zindagi ke baad bhi jeeta h wo'..

Apne lafzo m'.apne shabdoo m'.apne harfon m

Mai bhi likhna chahti hu

Kyonki m bhi jeena chahti hu apne lafzo m

Zindagi k baad naa sahi''

Kam se kam tab tak jab tak zindagi h

Tum kaho to m bhi likhoo

Tum kaho to m bhi jeeu

Rosy rosy rosy'.nautanki finish'😊😛..now u can wake up from ur sleep😆'..lets come to comment'..(waise beach beach m flavor milta rahega)😆

CHAPTER 14:

Oye ye kya kar diya rosy ji'what an deeply emotional update ji'itni nautanki dekhne k baad kya badla le rahi h''.rula diya naaa mainu😆

The dream wala scene of duttas accident was really looks like a real real scene '''heart attack anew ala tha'.pata h'.next time comment karne layak nahi bachti ***sigh***'..just like nakku my heart was beating so fast❤️

Nakku makes a call (smart wife''jaldi phone kar'me curiously wanna know''kahi rosy ne such m tooo''''.nahiii)😭😭😭

Oye ye kya rosy tenu to sach m meri din ka chain'.mere raato ki neeend'chean liya'.ye kya kiya😭

Dutta in hospital'..becoz someone shoot him'..(who is that ____🤬_🤬_🤬😡_????????? Me wannna meet him'.pahle to use lamba chauda lecture dungi ***to make him half unconscious ''"mere pyar ki kimat tu kya jaane mere dutta k dushman "'😡then will shoot him)

**sigh** dutta out of danger..(don't worry mere hote huye tumhe kuch nahi h sakta dutta ji)😆😆''.awww nakku don't wanna talk to him and then give him a lamba chauda bhashan without let him speak and my poor dutta was watching helplessly 'jabki there was not any mistake of dutta''..so he is trying to change himself for his baby'😃

Finally baji make her aware about everything that had happened during the meeting (der aaye durust aaye)'.awww was really intense scene when nakku apologies and feed him the soup'.so cute naaa😳😊

Then duttas dialogue "golu kahega'hum dono akele akele kha rahe h or usko pucha b nahi" (dekha he knew that my handkerchief is fully wet becoz of tears 'that's why this dialogue '.he made me happy again)😃😆

Both of them may abjure the the strong bond of their husband wife relationship but it will come in the future updates with soo much potential.😊

still updating,,,,

rosyyy ... can i update it tomorrow 😛 ...yara abhi kuch kaam h sooo...plzzz...will edit the other part here only😳

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looking forward...

orr nautanki dekhne k liye 😆...padte rahiye kuch luv jaisa😃...phir milenge...aaj he k din(not sure)😆😆...isi tme(not sure)...😆😆

i mean phir milenge chalte chalte😆😆😆

lots of luve and thnx

Edited by MishalsFAN - 13 years ago

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aishwish

@aishwish

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Looks like you have taken Sana's GOTW very seriously 😆 and beta ji aye ki kar diya, aisa ch afternoon mein update kiya, rose forum pe bacche bhi aate hain, this kind of ch should be updated after 11pm😆 and you just winked three times just three to give me the hint? To hint this kind of update you should have been gone into baba ramdev mode na😆 but an injured dutta is ymmm, aisa kar, do ek goliyan aur maar de,😆

okay now, lady how many time you'll make me go speechless with your talent.(dn't worry even in speechless mode I'll make an extra long comment..lol) I was amused that how simply you described a complex character like dutta, even a person who doesn't knw who dutta will became aware of his traits, with the help of whole hospital and evening walk scene. Very well done.

So, now from here onwards their relationship is on the way to reach another level. After accepting that they both desire for each other, they are slowly resigning in front of the desire to be with each other. The whole bedroom scene was superb and good that things are back to square one. Poor naku when will she get proper place to sleep, but when she gets it she can't sleep.

Now the epic scene the bathroom scene, dutta nahata hai toh humein itna maza kyun aata hai *innocent muh*😆 And this chaalak lomdi aka naku, she instantly asked the doc to discharge him, tell me when else she's obeyed with this much *angry muh*

No, but jokes apart, this whole scene explained that what being in marriage means, no matter whether you're in love or not. And this is gonna continue for 10 days, do one thing besides this ff, write a SS on these 10 days, exclusively for those who are above 18😆

Great update rose, first of all very good tht the accident took place when she's in her early stage of pregnancy, this whole accident and with the this and previous update you've not only managed to take their reltionship to a different level, but also raised the bar for yourself. Each and every scene was simply superb of this update, even the small parts of the scene,for instance dutta accepting that he can never win against her, or he throwing water on her, they'll ramain unforgettable.

Very sorry for my late comments, but as bharathi said even I truly appreciate your regularity in updating. And about the promo, neki aur pooch pooch, go ahead, on that note tom's sat na, so that means we are getting a promo? And loved the pic that sonee gifted you. It goes wih the current storyline very well...and thank you that you've taken my demands so seriously and you're actually working on it, means a lot to me, also as a friend and as a reader too.

Waiting for the next❤️

Edited by aishwish - 13 years ago

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

@ krishaa ... glad u liked the updt ..the love story has started atleast from nakkus side lets see when dutta also starts feeling the same .
@ tammana ..thanks for appreciating the scenes where nakku explains him that taking someones help is no big deal and where dutta throws water at her..lol.

@ ramya ..yup the updt was full of tasha and their romance , glad u liked it ..thanks

@ bluepal ..so happy to know that u could feel all kinds of emotions, love , romance, fear etc . hope u like the next part as well n good luck for ur exams

@ spandy ..wow u read both the chapters together and enjoyed them thanks so much . yup nakkus dream did turn out true that kind of showed how closely she is bonded to him and even he too cant see her all quiet and didnt mind being scoleded by her. dutta is changing a lot for her sake n for his child . glad u liked these scenes so much and in the next chapter nakku too supported him throughout be it making him understand that by taking someones help doest make him weak or helping him out in his daily chores. thank a lot dear for appreciating these chapters and giving such long comments which i love to read.

@ yuvika ..i try to keep my promises as much as possible and glad u enjoyed the updt , it encourages me to keep writing ..thanks a lot ..yup nakku is changing his thoughts slowly n him as well ..aww me too liked the hug scene a lot it showed how pained they were to see each other hurt ..and the bathroom scene was funny

@ pinka ..thanks for ur appreciation

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

hey just wanted to let you know that i am still squeezing in your updates when ever possible and the last chapter was just fabulous. just had no chance to comment really but i will find some time and come back and tell you what i think in detail. As always you have done an amazing job love the way nakusha attends to duttas wounds while he lies their. Has to be the highlight of the update for me. Even though he has designated this distance between the two of them he still has a soft spot for her.
lovely..thank you very much.
jagruti

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

loved ur update rose as always--and me late as always 😳 to begin with grampuu dutta waitign to leave the hospital ASAP and does not want any help oh my ,,me too would be like this wuld not want any one to help me ,,ppaan yeh kya nakku ka bashan made him change his mind and he relents 😆😆😆chalo nakku ka bahashan was always effective but lvoed ur dialouges u gave ankku ,,, they were effective and reasoning and then comes the part that was Ahem Ahem ,, hmm loved the bathroom scene as ash said, were u influnced by the gotw ?? these moments will get dutta to realise his heart has been captured man ,,,and say the 3 words we all want to hear 😃

Edited by prncz - 13 years ago

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

PROMO

Nakku left the room to get her glass of water, in the mean time AS picked up the album and tore off the next page which depicted his painful past and hid it under her pillow, she didn't wish his dark past to cast a shadow on his beautiful today and tomorrow. She had her bedtime medicines and sat on the bed with her head placed on the back rest. She closed her eyes and automatically pictures of the album began flashing before her eyes. What made him change so much? Were his sisters to be only blamed for his misery? Why did AS stop midway and not complete what she wanted to tell? Why was AS hiding things from her? Or was all this just a figment of her imagination and there was nothing more to it?

Note : AS promised i have posted the promo but guys my grandfather is really unwell so i will try to updt on monday but cant promise ..plz excuse me this time ..i am really sorry

Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago