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Posted: 13 years ago

Nakku scared dutta asking reason of hurt wrist so kangan was the reason and dutta notice the fear in nakku dutta tries to break the silence between them but as ki maid ne bula liya dutta thinking about reason of nakku fear dutta baaji talking about confession of love aur dono hi pyar ke mamle mein .nakku carring his meal and dutta again notice she did't make eye contact haye dutta patting nakku cheek dutta asking about food nakku lied that she is fasting dutta knew it and thaught about discomfort roops come for help to make baaji loose love the way dutta help girls poor baaji dar gaya tha madhu asking dutta to play game with nakku nakku refused now the dutta brain tubelight jal gayi now he rememberd his words dutta looking at nakkusha at table madhu notces it now he is desperate for nakku to look at him madhu asking nakku to play in rain nakku notice dutta hearing them and refused nakku helping him to remove waistcoat and dutta again notice the eyecontact and nakku giving him kurta dutta notice her tears and throw the kurta and catch her wrist and ordering her to see him finally dutta appogise and confessed nakku maan gayi tasha in rain dutta helpig nakku in removing kangan tasha in each other arms dutta giving baaji kanga to make them nakku's size why naKKU STOPPED baaji







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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update jags

nakku feared from dutta or feel bad for her behavior

finally he realize his love for her and even confess

wonderful update dear

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi jagruti
Thanxs for pm ...amazing UD all misunderstanding sorted out ...dutta realizing his luv for naku was the high point ...loved it can't wait for next UD .happy holi to you too😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

^ Note for my readers, sorry guys if ive left you with a bit of a disappointing update. Ive got a really busy week ahead. Lots of work to do so i appologise for any inconsistency..spelling errors ext.
Hopefully i can get bk on track with my work soon and be back with you guys. Thank you for all the lovely comments on the last chapter, love you all happy holi if your celebrating it in advance! 😉
Jagruti

hi jagruti
thanks a ton dear for ud inspite of busy schedule .hope you do well & are appreciated 😊u have good wishes of all u r fans .ud was awesome ,dutta ka confession aa gaya pyar ka matlab samhaj ne .naku ne poocha nahin ap ko kise ehsaas ho aa 😆kangan scene so unique & luv it .ud soon .u too have haapy holi & tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi jagruti awesome ud thanks for making time regards uvi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello there guys thank you very much for your lovely comments. Here are my individual responses to your feedback:

@yuvika O never thought my updates would make you guys so happy! Sorry for keeping you waiting. Yep I am busy working on my academic life at the moment, I'm just trying to put some work in early on so I don't find myself rushing the last second that's all. Trying but I'm sure with you guys and all your best wishes behind me I'll be fine. Now back to your feedback, thank you very much for taking the time to provide your lovely thoughts on the update. Much appreciated. Nakusha always the one to sense duttas feeling I think in this ff ive tried to turn the tables and reverse roles a little and yes u could say nakusha was very adamant not to upset dutta again in anyway so she took his words very literally, hence the reserved contact and there is a part of her who is scared as well. Maybe scared of his temper, scared of doing something to upset him. As for the pace of the ff, Im not a fan of dragging, I like each of my updates to have an element that makes you want to read the next, makes you want to keep checking the thread for an update!!Lol Dutta in my eyes is always concerned for his loved ones and this is nakusha we are taking about sahir si baat hai hes going to pay attention. Baaji and madhus part is the next phase of the ff so..not long to wait. Back to dutta and naku well I think she was just very confused when dutta all of a sudden begins to talk of dining together..shes probably thinking whats going on here ??? haa

Its good to know you liked the staring game element and you want to see it between dutta and naku?? Hmm I'll think about it..lol..if it fits into the storyline will defo slip it in. and yes the eternal story is going through a bit of an emotional face so shayad muje hein kuch karna padega to keep you happy. But you never no!! Madhu at the dinner table was just one of those things, I needed her to point out the fact that it was raining but the thought was that she would have already had her meal earlier but she was helping naku with clearning up duttas mess ..i.e kitchen ka kam. You know what I never thought about that but now you mention it..the rain is a symbolic element I guess.. for the record baaji is on the case..the heating will be fixed soon!! (so he tells me) anyways got to leave it there thank you very much for reading..love reading your feedback!

@tahera57 Hello there and thank you very much for being so understanding. I must have the best bunch of readers ever..too lucky as an ff writer. Thank you very much for reading, appreciating my ff...lots of love and hugs..

@tamanna1391 yaar tune toe mera pura update he visual kardiya! This post of yours put a smile on my face for sure..thank you! Hope you liked the update as much as I loved seeing my update in picture format.

@eternity_of_luv Thank you very much love its good too know you liked the update your feedback is much appreciated. Im open to criticism is you can tell me if there was anthing you disliked too!

@aamirkhanfan aw thank you very much for reading and commenting, much appreciated.

@sona89 Hey hope you had a lovely holi! And thank you very much for reading as ever you comments are very valuable. I guess duttas confession was meant to be highlight of the episode and its nice good to know you liked it! I will try to update soon so hang on in there.

@Nakusha hello there yes dutta ne dil ka haal batadiya and yes good point nakushas didn't really question him as to the sudden change of heart I think I may come later on. As for my busy schedule Im just trying to get going with the academic workload a bit sooner this term so I don't have to rush last minuet but im sure all you guys wishing me well I will be fine. As ever love reading what you have to say so please do continue to tell me what you think. I Will try my level best to update soon.

@ uwith, hey yuvi thank you very much for reading and waiting so patiently for my updates. Really doesn't go unnoticed the amount of patience and loyalty you guys have as readers. Will try to update soon.

Thank you very much guys like I said to yuvi you guys waiting so patiently and following my ff with such keenness doesn't go unnoticed so thank you. All of you are more than welcome to pm for a chat or just give me a nudge when I'm taking too long. Love you all..over and out for now..all discussions suggestions for my ff welcome..please do post me your ideas requests on this thread if you like. - jag

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Posted: 13 years ago
for the compliment jagruti and the update very much






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Posted: 13 years ago
^thank you very much really did love you visual brief of my update.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

^thank you very much really did love you visual brief of my update.😉


no need of thaks i like doing that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely story so far!!! Please update soon :) :)

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