'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude - Page 27

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

wish u a very Happy new Year

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi jagrutidi

lovely update made the memory of ltl1 fresh in my mind , nakus guzarish & duttas challenge loving it , naku ke brithday looking frwd to the next part ,plz next part jaldi post karna .wish you a great yr ahead 😊

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

mine

hey jags😊

superb update

so finally nakku does her guzarish and dutta accepts the bet and prays she win that bet😛

kurta and mangalsutar scene lovely😳

nakku miss the chance to stay with dutta alone😉😆 and poor she is now just thinking about that😉

dutta and baaji convo lovely..he is always there for his best and only buddy and for his happiness can do anything as baaji does always for him👏

nakku's birthday ah so what nakku's saab will gift her😉😛

wonderful update 👏

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: daya0628

Ok Jagz...mein aagayi :)
hello there partner! its only been a matter of a day or so since are last but i'm already missing you! it was a nice suprise when i saw your pm..totally put a smile on my face thinking chalo at least somebody cares😳..having a bit of a rough time with all these uni deadlines that all ..but.like i told you ive decided to be hero! and sort them all out.😆
anyways hope your all good, thank you very much for taking the time out to read my update and even comment. I know everyone is pretty much going through the january blues so its not the best time of the year.. ---chalo..i'm ready for the criticism 😉

So continuing from where we left off...our Sher feeling after witnessing that incident on his way that maybe he was being wrong to have had a physical relationship with naku esp becuz he does not share any love for, of course thats what he believes...but still Naku as always makes him see that he did not force himself or do anything wrong, he was simply giving her what she rightfully deserved as being his wife. He made sure she felt welcome in that way, even though he did not share the same feelings for her as she did for him.

thats just it..i think when you witness things from an outsiders point of view you begin to apply to your own life and thats just what dutta has done here. The feeling of doubt and guilt only arose after witnessing that scene with that random couple in the street. Yep ..when i came up with this particualr storyline i wanted dutta to be very direct about himself..and this relationship and thats just what he was when they got married. He had established that he would be her husband in everyway but the factor of love he would never contribute too..so like you say when he made the first move on there wedding night he was just doing his bit in in being that husband she had always hoped for. And i think naku manages to convey that in the end of this conversation.

Then comes all the talks about pyaar vyaar vishwas lol...and of course him having heard that he had created a distance which did upset her and yet she did not feel the need to tell him, makes him feel like he is not a good husband...and of course our sherni uses her wonderful words to tell him she knew from the beginning about his thoughts and feelings regarding just the word love...and now she is challenging him given the chance she will prove to him that his definition of love is nothing compared to hers and she will give his love definition...of course its wasn't a shrat but rather a gusarish but mee too like our Sher...shrat makes it more exciting :P ...pyaar vyaar vishwas wala chakar had to put it in there for effect😉 lol..but it plays its part for sure. I agree nakusha is somewhat very tactful with the way she uses her words here. In effect she is challenging him..and telling him that she can prove his definition of love..being the cause for pain wrong..but she expresses in her own way. wraps cotton wool around it all and presents it in a very respectable manner as not to offend her pati parmeshwar in anyway but ..he too is no fool..sher will always be sher!!😉 -totally read right through that innocent request of hers!!

loved the button and mangalsutra scene...the most divine and purest of scenes still manage to be so cute and romantic with these too lol...and the way she forgets about it and he had to remind her...hmmm man is playing close attention to everything...even in midst of talking remembered to make sure she puts it back on...
aw thank you for pointing this moment out..love you forever..just because i really wanted to add a sutble moment between them ...yet didnt want it to be too cleche after all they use that button scene quite alot in indian dramas🤢 and i'm always the one to criticize the same moment used again and again.. but ..if i was going to put it in my ff it had to have its own unqiueness.. i contemplated a little.at one point going to scrap it..but thinking back i actually quite like it..even if i do say so myself..!😆
and your right..dutta is far to attentive..just shows how much of his attention goes her way he just pretends not to be so attached to things in his life..but secretly everything matters..

I loved the bit that he was going to spend time with her in that place and the moment that question came out about when they'll be returning home he knew that she was wanting to go ...and even changed the plans...and her i thought here why would she be eager to go...there must be some reason...of course there was...even he picked up on it when the returned home and realized her eagerness to see her mother and upset with the fact she couldn't see her...
actually you know what i've always thought dutta is someone who is very intuitive..the type of person that can look at you and know whats going on it there..or simply notice the smallest of things and pick up things.. i dont know how true that is of the character that was portrayed in the serial..but the image i have dutta shri ram patil..certainly carries this attribute. so even though nakusha is simply asking about when they are going to leave..dutta takes her words and expression and puts two and two together and he is very much correct, she did want to go home.

hmm Baaji yet to tell Dutta...of course our Sher realizes this much that his best friend is in love lol...good for him...now if he could only see what's in his own heart now :P but hmmm he's quite ok with it but how will he react when knowing who it is...or does he have a hunch about that too? again dutta is very good at picking up on things and totally noticed baajis constant loss of concentration. Dutta is a very complex character...as far as this dutta is concerned in my ff..although he does not belive in the feeling of love..nor does he think he can fall in love.. he doesnt object others from loving. infact he married nakusha for the very reason that he saw love in those eyes of hers for him..when aayi sahib had asked her to pick a lifepartner. As for what will happen when he finds out its madhu..thats a question that will be answered in some of the upcoming chapters..😉

and then comes the sweet, nice moment of praying and both D and N talking about the shrat...hmmm...and now that its an official shrat with punishments included its all the more interesting... aw..this moment wasn't really intended to be anything big..but yes there conversation at the end of it does put an official seal on this shart of theirs.
but nakusha has already got a headstart because dutta has already prayed for her success😉

now here it comes the reason for Naku's want to go home, and him figuring something up so eavesdrops LOL bad manner mr dutta patil sir...tch tch ...haha...so its her bday ...and i assume she has never mentioned to him...and i guess she does not intend to do so?

like you said there has to be a reason for her wanting to go home, the fact that she asks for her mother who is not around. Your right.it is bad-manners to eavesdrop. Can you imagine if it was duttas conversation nakusha was eavesdroping on..o god..he would have turned the whole house upside down..one set of rules for Mr Patil and whole new set for his praja!!
okay ..better stop bitching about him..😆

anyway you have left it yet again at another good part...do continue sooon...please...love love loved the update...as mentioned before...great work...and of course...phir milenge chalte chalte
you know what i don't mean to leave it hanging on a turning points..i usually stop when i run out of steam..but anyway..thank you very much..
your comments are always lovely to read..phir milenge chalte chalte and all that..
pass a pm..your way soon.
jagruti

lots of love and hugs :)

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

Finally read the update...had been waiting ages 4 u 2 update... wonderful chapter jagz.

i can't believe tht naku tld dutta or shud i say expressed 2 dutta tht his distance from her after the 1st night hurt her...i reali didnt think she wud b able 2 tel him tht...n as readers i dnt think it occured 2 ne1 tht dutta maintained a distance from her. is there ne reason 4 it? i mean y does he regret it? becos he doesnt love her? ahh is he thinkin along the lines i did after the SR scene, cos i no i was 1 tht didn't feel it was right...it felt he did wt he did out of majboori becos he was his wife n nt becos he wntd to.

with regards 2 baji and madhu... can u reveal hw their convo ended wen she mentioned 2 him tht she knws he loves her...cos after tht u didnt write wt happens...and this friend of hers? wil he make sum appearance or not?

i mus say the "shart/guzarish" scene reminded me of koyal naku days...remember the scene in the shw wer she says she wnt stay in the room if he doesn't forgive his dad...LOL..n he was like "shart laga rahe hai mujhse?" LOL... m sure naku wil win the shart...cos mayb deep down he does wanna c her win.

wow its naku's bday? evn rose in her ff showed naku's bday bt tht 1 ended in tears as he rejected her love, bt i hpe in dis ff he does summut special 4 her, i no it myt seem out of character of dutta doing summut romantic bt it wud b nice 2 c him do summut special 4 her whilst stil remaining in character... mayb call babi n sethji ova so as normal she can celebrate her bday with thm? or mayb take her 2 visit thm... a small gesture like tht wud b nice😃